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Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2017 10:55 am Title: Chapter 19

A cute Brian and Emmett moment.  I always thought they should have been closer friends on the show.

Hoping Michael gets thrown in jail soon.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2017 10:47 am Title: Chapter 18

Go Brian!  Ben does need to understand what he did to Justin was very serious.  Michael is crazy and could have really hurt Justin.

Alex and Emmett???  Yes, please!

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2017 10:38 am Title: Chapter 17

I wish Ted had more self confidence.  He is so adorable and a wonderful person.  It's no wonder both Blake and Dan are attracted to him.

Michael is such a piece of garbage.  He still isn't going to come clean to Carl.  Well too bad.  I hope they throw the book at him.

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2017 6:29 am Title: Chapter 19

Well Michael finally gotten crazy completely and how can Debbie still demand to Brian to help her son??

Yaaaay got excited about Emmett and Alex..

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2017 4:46 am Title: Chapter 20

I like this  Mel and Liz. Ben is  an ads.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2017 2:28 am Title: Chapter 20

Glad Justin was the one to hold a mirror to Deb's face and get her to see that she isn't any better than Brian's parents, as a matter of fact she is worse.

At least this time she actually listened and walked away before Brian showed up and she said something that couldn't be taken back, maybe now she is ready to admit that the way she treated Michael is the reason why he is so spoiled, selfish, vindictive and petty, plus how she treated Brain is why he is pulling away to find his own happiness without strings attached.

Dan gave Ben the truth but like Michael he only sees what he wants to see and hears what he wants to hear, why accept responsibility when it is so easy to blame Brian, just another whiny A-hole who wants to be Brian and doesn't have the balls to pull it off.

Mel and Lindsay are being smart and warning Brian that Michael is coming after their son.

Michael isn't crazy is he is just an idiot who wants who he can never have and he is getting desperate because his plans aren't working.

Wait until he finds out Brian and Justin are moving in together.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2017 2:20 am Title: Chapter 20

DAMNNNNNN Michael and Ben are some DESPERATE BUM-ASS BASTARDS!!! Ad Deb... well thank goodness Justin seems to have gotten through to her otherwise I may have been tempted to write myself into your fic to punch her lights out. I mean seriously! How can one be that BLIND!!! Stevie Wonder, Ray Charles, Jose Feliciano AND Andre Boccelli can see that the rat bastard is a selfish, egotistical and perverse little shit!

Mel and Lindsay should have ripped Michael's scrotum out. That would have killed the thought that he should father a dust mite, nevermind a child. He better not even think about doing anything to Gus! 

WRITE On Star!

~Nichelle

Reviewer: brandi1111 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2017 2:12 am Title: Chapter 20

Love it.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2017 12:01 am Title: Chapter 19

Really Deb? REALLY?!!!! Instead of concentrating and honing in on the fact that your son is a dreanged stalking, jealous and malicious ASSHOLE, you continue to delude yourself into thinking that Brian should help Michael? Selfish and Willfully Blind MUCH Deb??!! OMG!! Time for some other charges to be racked up against Michael such as Breaking and Entering, Stalking and Vandalism! I can't imagine that the Statutes of Limitations is up on what he's done to Justin. And the fucker admitted it aloud and intentionally along with issuing another threat!!! Goodness, I hope Brian can get evidence that a restraining order is needed. Better yet, lodge a formal complaint and have Michael picked up immediately especially because of the false report! Something has really got to be done before Michael turns violent which I suspect is going to happen very soon. BTW, I don't necessarily think there is any medically wrong with Michael. Quite the opposite actually. Yes, I think he's obsessed but the fact that he is in his right mind while committing all these acts and is basically gloating after he does them, proves that he's sane. He's a selfish, spoiled BRAT whose mother enabled him to be such! 

As for Ben, what an asshole! To think that he went to Justin to stir up more shit proves that he is just as petty and childish as Michael. Instead of learning a valuable lesson about the person he's allowed himself to become because of jealousy, envy and insecurity, he lashes out at the people trying to help his sorry ass. Brian and Justin are definitely better people than I am, no matter that they are fictional characters. Ben's ass needs to be in jail for instigating the entire situation. Even though he still he doesn't deserve to be falsely accused of domestic violence, he needs some sort of concrete punishment for his part in all of this. Maybe losing his job will do the trick.

Love the way Brian shows his growth here at Babylon and his talk with Emmett!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2017 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 19

Does Michael have to kill someone in order for Deb to see that Michael is dangerous?

Even after standing there and hearing from Michael's own mouth what he did to Justin she is still trying to get Brian to fix it.

Deb is going to be waiting for Hell to Freeze over if she is expecting Brian to lift a finger to help.

Ben is such an Ass!

Soon he is going to get a nice big payback that he will feel for years to come.

Brian stopped himself for doing something stupid which shows just how grown up he really is.

Alex and Emmett have potential :)

 

Reviewer: ConnieMelissa Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2017 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 19

I feel the need to review but cannot think of what to say, to let you know how WTF this chapter was. I mean that in a very good way.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2017 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 19

Wow. Michael really is crazy. Deb needs to get her head out of her ads before he kills someone.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2017 6:00 pm Title: Chapter 18

Well that went Brilliantly! Michael convinced no one Ben actually attacked him and he better pray the DA doesn't decide to press charges against him for filing a false statement.

Grant did a good job showing Emmett that Michael may have opened the door  to cruelty and spite but he willing walked through it, Michael didn't force him to play a 'Mean Girl' Emmett did that of his own volition so he should accept some of the blame too.

Ben also needs to face the fact that he gave into to his dark side to hold onto someone who saw him as a place holder and nothing else, you went into this relationship knowing that Michael is in love with Brian and instead of walking away with your dignity still intact he chose to stoop to Michael's level and Justin took the hit.

Ben saw Michael as a wounded puppy chasing after any scrap Brian gave him and he wanted to save Michael, in turn he lost himself to hold on to a lost cause and his jealousy turned him into a bitter, vile buffoon.

Wonder what Michael plans next now that his lie imploded on its self?

What is Ben going to do about Michael?

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2017 5:54 pm Title: Chapter 18

You go Dan! You tell Michael what a piece of shit liar he is! Woohoo! Nice warning for Ben Brian...well said

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2017 4:50 pm Title: Chapter 18

Some real home truths delivered during this chapter!!! Now Michael has been proven the liar he truly is and not just by Dan but by Carl AND the nosy neighbors! LMFAO!!!! What a pathetic schmuck! I hope Carl tells Deb every single little detail BEFORE Michael has another chance to spin another lie. 

I LOVED Brian’s talk to Ben. He's another idiot who wanted the undivided attention of an asshole! I swear Michael’s 'Mean Girls' syndrome is contagious! Ben better take heed to everything Brian said because all won't end well for him. 

As for Em and Grant's talk, I glad he didn't let Em wallow in self-pity, just told him the facts and made him hold himself accountable for buying into Michael's brand of crazy. Now maybe Em can truly become the person he thought he was. Oooh Em & Alex?? I think I really like that combo! 

Looking forward to more!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~ Nichelle 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2017 2:52 pm Title: Chapter 17

I think I posted in the wrong chapter, sorry.  To recap OMG, what??? Poor Justin.  It's time this situation was handled but good.  I know you want your independence but a mans Gita know when to ask for help.  Get a new restraining order, some mace, a baseball bat, a dog and a gun, lol.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2017 2:43 pm Title: Chapter 16

What??? This story just got even more serious.  I'm glad the truth came out, the first rule of war is know your enemy.  I'm really glad they are communicating.  As for Dan I was expecting the love goddess to hit Emmett.  I'm not sure he deserves it so I'm cool with the assistant.  So glad they can help Ben.  I despise liars.

 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2017 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 16

I'm glad that Justin went after Brian.  They really do love each other and need to stay together.  Don't let any of this crap going on effect them.

I think Dan and Renny flirting was adorable. 

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2017 7:20 am Title: Chapter 17

Great. I hope Michael meets big bubba when he goes down for filing a false report.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2017 6:39 am Title: Chapter 17

Michael is already changing his version of the facts. He is also getting angry, then there is a chance he won't filter what he thinks, and will let something out.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2017 6:17 am Title: Chapter 16

The plot is thickening as Michael was Chris' partner in crime long before Ben' incident.

At least, Brian and Justin talk, communicate; that's an improvement.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2017 3:05 am Title: Chapter 17

Michael actually thinks that Ben is at fault because he didn't die of pneumonia that way he planned?

Is He On Something, Cause That Is Beyond Stupid and It Is Evil!

Deb needs to wake up and face reality Michael is beyond Disturbed and he is bordering on Dangerous.

The walk through is going to be very enlightening for everyone but not Michael, I wonder if Deb will be there and if they are going to record it so the DA can watch it thoroughly?

It is sad that no one likes Ben but they see him as the lesser of two evils compared to Michael and would be character witnesses on his behalf so he doesn't go to prison for a crime he didn't commit.

Brian staying away from Michael is good he is putting Justin and is not giving in to the whiny baby.

 

Reviewer: ConnieMelissa Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2017 2:35 am Title: Chapter 17

Well at least Carl has a brain in his head, because the Novotnys sure don't 😁.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2017 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 16

Justin needs to realize that if Michael is willing to set his own husband up to get arrested than he is capable of anything, especially with Chris helping him every chance he gets.

I don't know if Deb is ready to see truth right now cause her baby is hurt and Mean Old Ben Did It!

Michael is going to try hard to work his poor victim routine I am surprised he hasn't tried to find Brian?

I am afraid this game Michael is playing to get Brian has only just started.

Molly saddens me with her behavior and I wonder when she will be popping up again with Chris and Craig??

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2017 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 16

So there's more of what happening in the past caused by the whiny brat to Justin and with the help of Chris no less??Dan should put them where they belong and also hoping Justin would allow Dan to do something concerning aboutbthe stalking...Our sunshine is just too nice even people are treating him like hell...I don't like Molly here as well,imagine checking up on her brother just to tell that homophobic Chris..She's a disappointment...

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