Date: Mar 16, 2017 5:39 pm Title: Chapter 13
Good guys.
Date: Mar 16, 2017 3:48 pm Title: Chapter 12
Once again, you throw a facinating twist into the mix. Chris as the step-brother, Molly being so against Justin. All very interesting and am really looking forward to what you're going to do there. Completely threw me for a loop. Love it!
Hopefully Justin opens up to Brian about everything going on with the family. As much as he's always dealt with it before, he has support from Brian now and he should use it. If nothing else, Brian would definitely understand.
So the roids explains Ben's behaviour a bit. Still, doesn't excuse it though. Seems like he has a whole ton of shit to deal with and is using roids to assist. Seems like Ben fell back into it, where as Blake had Brian to be a real friend, 'cause really, there's no real difference between them. Addict is addict. Does Ben or Michael differentiate between the 2 I wonder?
As for Michael. My goodness. He really is a manipulative little asshole isn't he? So many ways this can play out. I can only hope that Brian doesn't fall for it, or that he at least keeps a hands off approach. Mind you, after the incident at the diner, knowng that Ben is using again, I can't see him just ignoring it. Just the thing Michael is hoping for and will use to his advantage. Oh I hope it doesn't work. I hope that they are able to figure out he did it to himself. I mean they'd only have to look at Ben's hands to see that he didn't do anything. As much as Michael is manipulative, he doesn't really tend to think things through. He jumps at an opportunity rather than making any kind of plan. Really is a dumb ass!
Brutal cliff hanger there Star!!!
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2017 11:01 am Title: Chapter 12
Omg Mike is going to play that card!! I hope Justin shuts him down quick. Debbie better not come at Brian to fix his Best Friend's sorry ass
Date: Mar 16, 2017 10:51 am Title: Chapter 12
This is a new low even for Michael. I hope Brian doesn't fall for his nonsense.
I hope Justin will talk to Brian about his family more. It's so obvious they love each other and want to take care of one another. Daphne is right, don't hide the bad.
Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2017 8:24 am Title: Chapter 12
What a bastard micheal is!???? Lieing piece of shit... i so wanna kill him here. What a story...i like it very much... thank u for updating.
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2017 8:24 am Title: Chapter 12
What a bastard micheal is!???? Lieing piece of shit... i so wanna kill him here. What a story...i like it very much... thank u for updating.
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2017 8:16 am Title: Chapter 11
Last line was soooo fabulous.
Date: Mar 16, 2017 6:28 am Title: Chapter 12
Poor Justin still dealing with those people in his life. ..Let Molly live her life the way she pleases and live yours,atleast for once Justin shouldn't be thinking about her at all if she's just being a brat towards him...I love how Brian being supportive..
I hope Ben really did beat that whiny brat,if he's planning to use it to get to Brian,but hoping B won't believe it for a minute...
Date: Mar 16, 2017 5:02 am Title: Chapter 12
Molly seems to be a real Daddy's girl; why on Earth Justin wanted to attend such an event!
What is Michael scheming? Nothing good I guess.
Date: Mar 16, 2017 4:02 am Title: Chapter 12
Wow Michael is a piece of work.
Date: Mar 16, 2017 2:41 am Title: Chapter 12
Yoooooo!!!! Seriously Michael is NOT about to try to play abused spouse or 'Justin’s punching bag'!!! THAT POS!!! I hope Brian blocked his number after that almost-rumble in the Diner. What a manipulative asshole. Doesn’t the ass know that there are ways to tell if the injuries are self-inflicted?? Well this should be interesting but honestly Ben deserves to see what Michael is really all about since he wanted to play blind mouse...SMH UH-HM-MMM.
I hope Ted will level with Blake and tell him what changed between him and bastard boy. It will go a long way in helping Blake understand the hold Michael used to manipulate Ted. He and Em have a lot of healing to on do along with some serious bridge building in regards to Justin.
As for Molly and Chris, those two deserve Craig. Justin needs to let them stay toxic by themselves, even when Molly's world starts crashing around her ears. She deserves it for being a an bitch!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Mar 16, 2017 1:19 am Title: Chapter 12
So Ben wanna tango, well Brian's got some moves for ya brother, lol. Omg all the anger and dare I say rage? Ok, no way how did you find a way to make Craig and Chris worse? Seriously that is just ick and Dad should never ask Justin to come. ick!
Emmett and Ted deserved the cold shoulder. I love Ted and Blake together, but Ted will need to prove himself.
Oh No He Didn't!! I have no words. Zero. He deserves whatever is coming.
Please Brian don't answer the phone.
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2017 1:14 am Title: Chapter 12
My what a family Justin has. Molly is being a shit, might be a good idea to introduce her to Michael. On second thought maybe not. Ben seems to see things badly and Michael instead of being a good spouce is using his anger to incite Brian to come to his defense. Not good especially if Brian does. Put some clothes on Gus!!!! LOL
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2017 1:11 am Title: Chapter 12
If Ben is consistent with his steroid abuse then Michael is consistent with playing the victim so Brian can come and save him, only this time I hope Brian ignores his pitiful cries and he tells him to figure it out for himself.
Justin needs to do to Molly what Brian is doing to Michael let her go and see if she figures out the truth herself.
The next chapter is going to be interesting :)
Date: Mar 16, 2017 12:40 am Title: Chapter 12
You made me curse..."Oh, you f***ING piece of sh**, Michael" wow what an update. I hope Brian doesn't fall for it, just to see . Michael's head explode.
Date: Mar 15, 2017 4:44 pm Title: Chapter 11
glad to see that Gus isn't fooled by Michael's games. Kids are smart. Good on him.
Good plain hard truths that Brian told Michael and in particular Ben. Ben is still being a dick mainly cause he's using again. doesn't excuse the fact that he started this whole thing by using Justin. He still hasn't come clean to Michael about it, and still makes excuses for his behavior. I like Justin's truth too. That Ben needed to make shit up to keep Michael's interest.
Deb was great sitting on the sidelines like that. I can totally visulaize her asking the diners what's what. Like that she's not taking everything from Michael as golden and has opened her eyes to him and hsi ways.
Nice day at the Zoo. Perhaps there's hope for Emmett and Ted to be brought into B&J's circle. I think Justin will still want them to prove themselves. Can't blame him.
Will Justin catch onto what Brian was saying?
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Mar 15, 2017 10:42 am Title: Chapter 11
Wow! Brawl at the diner. I'm glad Ted was able to get Gus out of there before he saw much.
I wish Brian would have put Ben on his ass. I don't know what he sees in Michael but those two belong together.
Look at Emmett giving love advice to Brian. Yes, please tell him and show him everyday. :) I'm loving Gus and Justin's relationship.
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2017 7:06 am Title: Chapter 10
Gus is adorable...cute.
Date: Mar 15, 2017 5:43 am Title: Chapter 11
That was hot in a not lice-affirming way: Ben is as hateful as Michael; poor Gus wo almost witness that! The end though was positive, thanks to Emmett's words to Brian!
Date: Mar 15, 2017 5:11 am Title: Chapter 10
Gus is so funny and seems to like spending time with Justin.
Brian shouldn't have said he was going to smoke when he went to call Ted and smoke. But, it seems Justin didn't catch that.
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2017 3:43 am Title: Chapter 11
Ben was very confrontational, not to mention down right rude. Em's clearly team Justin same for Ted. Gus prefers Justin. Brian loves Justin. Sounds like a done deal.
Date: Mar 15, 2017 3:07 am Title: Chapter 11
Looks like NOTHING has gone Bugs and Daffy's way, LMAO!!!! I was so PROUD of Brian for telling it like it is, Justin for knocking Michael on his ass and finally Deb for asking before automatically believing her lying ass offspring. Brian is reclaiming his life and I couldn't be happier! Also laughed out loud when Emmett told Ben the absolute truth about Michael's motive for marrying Ben and Brian asked the really important question of why Michael actually said yes to marriage. Hopefully all of the side effects of Ben's steroid use will be turned on Michael. Yeah... there is NO LOVE lost from me for the Pricks of Liberty this fic!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
P.S. Let's hear it for those Diner patrons too!! WHOO-HOO!!!!! Take that Dumb and Doofus!
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2017 2:37 am Title: Chapter 11
So Ben is back on steroids and is deluding himself hard that Michael loves needs, wants him.
I so wanted Justin to kick Michael's Ass!!! Also want Brian to kick Ben's Ass but not while he is on steroids.
What Michael and Ben fail to realize is that if Brian gives you a warning heed it because he can and will keep his word.
Well at least those two idiots didn't spoil the day for Brian, Gus and Justin.
Date: Mar 14, 2017 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 10
Go Justin! You tell him. Michael is such an ass. He's losing everyone in his life.
I love Brian/Justin/Gus time. I can totally picture Gus running around naked, my nephews used to do that all the time. They just hated to have clothes on. lol
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2017 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 10
Michael is deluding himself if he thinks Ted or Emmett are going to apologize or continue to play the fools so he can have a captivating audience for his whining.
Ben is just as childish as Michael because he is married to someone who will never choose him, big deal so for a minute Michael was making an Ass of himself for Ben, it didn't last because he went right back to chasing, hounding and trying to control Brian.
What good is a second, minute, hour, day of affection if Michael is still going to put Brian first?
Deb needs to realize that she is not the first single mother and she won't be the last so stop trying to act like she deserves a meddle to tell anyone how to raise a child.
Annihilating Mel and Lindsay is not the way to keep the family together it is one thing to give your opinion when asked, but it is quite another to steam roll over people to prove you are right and should be raised on a pedestal.
Perhaps Justin can show Deb how her behavior towards Blake and the girls helped to in a way fuel Michael's need to be contentious with everyone else.
Michael is inching closer to being tossed off a cliff never to be seen again by a lot of people just wonder who is going to do it first?