[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2017 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 10
Brian and Justin are having a great time with Gus. Michael is fast losing those he called friends. But with his attitude it's to be expected.
Date: Mar 14, 2017 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 10
Ooh the NERVE of the Bugs Bunny-voiced bastard!!! He''s being a vicious little conniving POS and he’s expecting an apology to keep HIS rotten friendship? Mitch PULeeeze!! That hard bed he's making for himself is about to become both lumpy and cold and rightfully so! If Ben remain cowardly and clueless, he deserves the asshole he married. Sheesh! What childish dipshits the Novotny-Bruckners are!
And then Boo-Boo the fool goes around trying to order Brian's business associates about as well as trying to once again enter the loft illegally... WTF!!! Brian is definitely going to have to sever that toxic connection to Michael of he's ever going to have any peace going forward. I don’t think Justin will force Brian to make a choice but he'll remove himself out of the equation much like Calvin and Blake sid, even if the reasons aren't exactly the same. SMH Brian needs to check Michael immediately.
Looking forward to more!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Mar 14, 2017 3:39 pm Title: Chapter 9
Good that Emmett is taking those first steps, but Justin isn't going to just say OK. Emmett needs to prove he means it. Justin is nobody's fool.
I love Blake in this and really like how he has a substantial role. He's forcing Ted to see some truths and in a perspective that Ted obviously hadn't seem before. Ted really never saw how manipulative Michael was/is.
While ben may be trying to impart some truths to Michael, it's more than likely too little too late. Michael has already dug holes too deep to climb out of. Mind you, it's always fun to watch him try. ;) Looks like Ted has ended that friendship after hearing Michael's actual opinion of him. I'm assuming Emmett is next especially now that he knows what Calvin said. Michael will do anything though to keep himself tied to Brian, even though Brian could care less and sees Michael for who he really is.
Wondering what Ben is going to do to keep Michael, if anything. He is just as guilty of manipulating their friends as Michael is. What price will he be paying for his part in all this I wonder?
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Mar 14, 2017 10:27 am Title: Chapter 9
Gus is so damn cute!
I'm glad Blake is willing to give Ted a chance. Michael really screwed over all of his so called friends. Maybe he needs to take a long look at himself.
Can't wait for the boys weekend at Justin's.
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2017 5:02 am Title: Chapter 9
Good going...i like it.
Date: Mar 14, 2017 4:21 am Title: Chapter 9
Go for it Ted, get your man!
Date: Mar 14, 2017 2:15 am Title: Chapter 9
Michael is just plain idiot and conniving little a''''''''''""""e ..I wonder why Ted and Emmett took time to see what kind of person the whiny brat really is...
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2017 2:12 am Title: Chapter 9
Emmett's finally got it. Gus is adorable. Ted may win his fair love, but know he knows where he stands with Michael and he's okay with it. Ben is the only one left and will he stick with it or realize that maybe there's something better out there.
Date: Mar 13, 2017 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 9
One friend down, 3 more to go. Nice going Moronic Michael!!! Good Gravy I can't stand 'Evil Bugs Bunny'! Damn Ben REALLY has no self-worth. I mean, seriously! If he has to work that much just for Michael- of all people- to notice him, how much more compromising of his ideals and principles is he prepared to do? Sounds like Ben needs to borrow Emmett's mirror and have an epiphany of his own real quick! Anytime he ends up to be an asshole on the same par with Michael Novotny, it's definitely time to take some self-inventory...SMH
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Mar 13, 2017 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 9
Michael is a buffoon with his attempts to be a Brian Clone and Ben isn't getting the Michael he envisioned when he decided to play fast and loose with th truth.
If Ted wants another chance to prove to Blake he is worthy walking away from Michael is a good start.
Emmett is seeing how Michael's behavior casted him in a really bad light concerning Calvin, who wants to be around people who look down their noses at others for where the come from or had to overcome.
He doesn't want anyone else to be happy in a relationship because he won't be special anymore and the center of attention.
I feel Ben is about to do something stupid to get Michael to start paying attention to him again.
Date: Mar 13, 2017 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 9
Michael digging that whole bigger got to love that.
Date: Mar 13, 2017 9:56 pm Title: Chapter 8
Aaaah cut him off already from your lives Brian..
Date: Mar 13, 2017 9:44 pm Title: Chapter 7
Good to know Deb,Emmett and Ted started to realize that they are becoming Michael's pet before it's too late for them to really screw their friendship with Brian..
Date: Mar 13, 2017 6:02 pm Title: Chapter 6
Really though Emmett just believed what the whiny asshole said about him cheating..??And Ben is also a disappointment in here,using other people just get his husband's attention..
Date: Mar 13, 2017 5:48 pm Title: Chapter 5
It's getting more and more interesting....
Date: Mar 13, 2017 5:46 pm Title: Chapter 8
Just found this wunderful storie, absolute my cuppa: Intelligent and smart Justin, who doesn't let shit go to be with a grown-up Brian, ready to go for a steady partner and love. On the other side Michael who spins intrigues and schemes against anyone who doesn't put him first.
I absolute love it and can't wait where you're going to go with the story line.
Date: Mar 13, 2017 7:21 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh i like sunshine's attitude never taking shit from anyone...
Date: Mar 13, 2017 5:12 am Title: Chapter 8
For once, Deb thinks before acting/speaking!
Good for Ted to act on his issue with Michael; easy with Brian as backup.
[Report This]Date: Mar 13, 2017 1:35 am Title: Chapter 8
That was a good chapter.😊☺
Date: Mar 13, 2017 1:18 am Title: Chapter 8
Wow, these character tweeks work. Mikey is edgier and a complete jerk. Justin is scrappy. Ben is manipulative. Blake is awesome and Brian's friend. Emmett and Ted are coming around to sanity. Deb being fair and Mel/Linds being normal squared is cute too. It all makes for a really interesting read. The audacity of Mikey to say he'd talk to Justin, seriously he's riddiculous. I appreciated Brian's threat, we will see how Mikey handles himself.
Date: Mar 13, 2017 12:16 am Title: Chapter 8
Debbie is actually listening to others and forming her own opinion. That's new. Thank you for not alloiwng her to defend Michael no matter what he does.
I'm glad that Justin and Blake are forming a quick friendship. Can't wait for some more Brian/Justin time.
[Report This]Date: Mar 12, 2017 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 8
Justin is right to not want to be around Ted and Emmett they prejudged him based just on what Michael said, they let Michael dictate how they treat everyone and refused to see that there actions were putting a strain on their relationships to the point where they would rather walk away.
Ted is finally trying to be the kind of man Blake will respect instead of a disciple of Michael who is trying to be Brian and is lacking in every sense.
I do wonder what Michael did to Mel and Lindsay to tick them off?
Glad that Deb is acting like a mature woman wanting to get the truth instead of blindly listening to Michael and going off half-cocked.
She is starting to realize that she must temper her behavior if she wants everyone to be around her.
I just want to smack Ben for letting this happens because he is too weak to tell Michael to be his husband or get out!
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 12, 2017 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 8
Wow! Deb's come around. Ted's come around. The only one not realizing he's a problem is Michael. Enjoying this a lot.
Date: Mar 12, 2017 8:37 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ooooops like your warning Emmett is kind of a jerk in here but as you said in the beginning only so i guess we'll just have to wait for him to wake up from being an ass to Brian and Blake ..
Date: Mar 12, 2017 8:33 pm Title: Chapter 8
Deb got a triple dose of reality. Blake Lindsey and Justin all informed her of Michael's behaviour. Thankfully she listened. Nice that she wants to get to know Justin. DAmn...that boy tells itlike it is doesn't he! He really nailed it with his synopsis of Ted and Emmett. Michaels effected their relationships because they let him. spot on.
Dollars for donuts Michael doesn't listen to Brian. HE only hears what he wants to hear and ignores the rest. Doesn't matter if Brian hints or hells it out plain as day, Michaelw on't get it. His so called friends are all going to fall by the way side and he'll just be left with Ben. Mind you, Ben just may like that.
Ted standing up for Brian...who'da thought?
Been looking forwrad to this all day!
Thanks
Cheers,
Elaine