Date: Mar 30, 2017 4:19 am Title: Chapter 12
Thank you for this more than needed reconnection. Perfect!
So happy Mel is going to support Brian! Did she chose Ted as the father?
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2017 3:17 am Title: Chapter 12
I'm loving Melanie in this. Thank you.
Date: Mar 30, 2017 2:46 am Title: Chapter 12
YAY!!!!! Mel has found her BALLS!!! I sure was wondering where they were! A lot of revelations happening in this chapter. LMFAO!!! Where's Maury when you need him. <in my Maury voice> In the case of the bun baking in Mel's over, Michael Manchild Novotny you are NOT the father!! LMAOOOOOOOOOO!!!! I can't wait for Michael and Deb to find that out!
In the case of Lyin' Lips Lindsay, she is just as pathetic as her best friend Michael. It so funny to watch her think she's so smart then shown just how DUMB she really is! Now she's jobless, homeless and Mel-the-mealticket-less. And she still thinks she has a case against Brian? BITCH PULEEEEEZE!! Find the grip, let alone get one! I'm going to enjoy watching the rest of her machinations implode.
The last scene was both HOT and touching. There is just something about them being in the place where it all began that makes the moment of reunion even more special. Finding out that once Brian left the loft, he never went back because of Justin's ghost was so telling. I think not only did Justin deserve to hear that but he needed to as well. At Brian's heartfelt, bone-deep admission in the shower, my heart cracked but then shattered when Justin was about to move away and he pulled him back. All I could think in that moment was how afraid that Brian must be that it's all been a dream and he needed to feel Justin to know that it wasn't. <insert deep sigh here> Now that they both know what they want and are on the same page, woe be unto anyone who tries to stand in their way this time. And I'll be right here cheering loudly as they take down every obstacle in their way! I need several seats for the two Bitches and the Mitch asap! The haters never can stand to see someone else succeed. Can't wait for the continued fallout!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2017 2:40 am Title: Chapter 12
Damn Mel was going for the long con until Lindsay went off script gotta admire that she had plan to give Michael, Deb and Lindsay a Big FU with a cherry on top.
Surprised she will help Brian but not surprised that she is willing to give Gus a chance to have a home full of love with two parents who will put his needs first while also giving him safety and security.
Looks like Michael, Deb and Lindsay will be facing Brian alone unless Lindsay can get Mommy and Daddy to help after she probably goes running to Deb to tattle on Mel and work them up about Brian and Justin even more?
So how much of the money Brian spent was actually for Gus and what other stupid thing has Lindsay done?
Mel should get the locks changed quickly and maybe get a restraining order against The Novotnys and Lindsay???
Date: Mar 29, 2017 4:39 pm Title: Chapter 11
I wish Michael, Lindsay and Debbie would go away. I'm so tired of their shit.
Maybe Mel will side with Brian and Justin.
I loved Brian's rooftop confession. Our boys need some alone time. Please let us have some romance. :)
Date: Mar 29, 2017 4:06 pm Title: Chapter 11
Every aspect of Deb and Michael that B&J discussed is coming true. Deb is already placing herself in a position authority. what's up with Mel? So unlike her taking the caowadly way out. she normally would stick up for herself. Where's her usual fire? At least she knows that Brian will fight for what he wants. Did she purposely not adopt Gus for this reason? Do you think she knew that her life with Lindsey would come to this, so she was going to make it easier for Brian in the long run? (idk...that thought just occurred to me)
Brian was bang on with his analysis of Michael's reason for attacking Justin rather that approaching Brian. Michael will never want to face the truth and will do anything and everything in his power to avoid it.
Lindsey has balls I must say. She's stupid...but she has balls. threatening Brian they way she did. woah. Not going to get her very far that's for sure! She needs to go by the adage, "those who live in glass houses shouldn't throw stones". Brian simply has questionable behaviour in his past, she on the other hand has criminal. She has no idea what she's up against and she's going to pay dearly for her threats.
Very excited to read what you have in store for us going forward!!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Mar 29, 2017 3:55 pm Title: Chapter 11
Lindsey is going to start a war that she might not win!
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2017 8:52 am Title: Chapter 11
Michael, Lindsay and Debbie are pushing the limits on ugly. So much fun to read. Lindsay probably thinks Brian is bluffing. He's not.
Date: Mar 29, 2017 6:42 am Title: Chapter 11
Oooh it's ON!!Lindsay should be prepared when Brian started pursuing Gus for custody..And Mel i don't know yet what her reaction about all of this but hoping she will agree with Brian now that she's seeing the real problem from people she thought were lovable..
Debbie is so cunt, sometimes cannot see past her son being the angel one and cannot do a single shit things to other people..It's disappointment to knownshe claimed to be a mother of all gay boys in Liberty Avenue while that only happen if people will agree and cater to her and her whiny brat's need...
Date: Mar 29, 2017 5:23 am Title: Chapter 11
All I can say is "THAT'S RIGHT, BITCH!!!"
Date: Mar 29, 2017 4:31 am Title: Chapter 11
We now join "Fool Ass Folk" already in progress. Be advised that the role of Melanie Marcus will now be played by Yellow Belly.
Melanie is a COWARD in every sense of the word. Instead of telling Debbie to GO TO HELL, she goes upstairs to go to sleep. Instead of making Lindsay make a choice, she stays silent! Even with everything she heard, the one freaking question she did NOT ask Michael was what did he say to get his ass punched. Why no one ever asks Michael what HE DID is beyond me! Her half-assed response is 'I've never known Justin to be violent.' Uhhhh DUH! If that was clearly the case then where the hell was the cross-examination of Michael to get to the truth? And THIS is a lawyer?!?!?! SMH
As for that envious harridan Captain Pain-in-the-Ass, she has a lot of nerve on so many levels. First to be in Brian's loft once again WITHOUT permission or using the key for its intended purpose constitutes Breaking and Entering. I guess the law only applies when trying to use it to threaten Brian's rights to be a father to Gus but not when she commits yet another felony. I'm so HAPPY that Brian brought up the reason why he signed his rights away. Selective amnesia much, Lindsay? What's even more telling is that she didn't dispute any of Justin's rebuttals. First it was about Justin punching Michael, then it was about Justin not doing what he was supposed to do by becoming an artist instead of having a child. I would say the bitch was crazy except that she is perfectly sane in a manipulative, only-good-as-a-walking-uterus type of way. She and her cohorts, Deb and Michael need to get a life. But then again since they are all apparently sharing a brain cell between them, perhaps they should start there first.
Incidentally, Lindsay and Deb thinking that they can take Hannah away from Justin is so...OMG! I wanted to flatten myself into the story and kick their asses!! Yet they just kept talking while Michael insulted Hannah AGAIN by calling her a brat, deciding that Justin is an unfit father and should be with Brian so that Lindsay could help raise her. WTFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF!! I wish a MOFO would.... LWD HAM TURKEY!! But then too, Melanie heard ALL of this and still said NOTHING!! She needs to be disbarred just on stupidity alone. She's now contagious from being around the Toxic Trio who are trying to do anything and everything to achieve what they want regarding Brian. If that right there doesn't tell Mel where she ranks in the grand scheme of her 'marriage' I don't know what does. i feel sorry for that child growing inside her. I mean if she's a spineless coward now, what's going to happen when the baby is born and she has to fend off Deb and Michael then? An Erasermate Pen has more sense then any of those assholes (yep definitely included Mel alongside the Three Stooges).
Looking forward to MORE!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Mar 29, 2017 4:21 am Title: Chapter 10
Glad some truthes are out! Brian is in fast forward and Kinnetik is born! Yee haw!
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2017 3:46 am Title: Chapter 11
So Mel how does it feel to be nothing more than the womb for Deb's second chance to raise another Michael?
The kid isn't even here and already she is riding roughshod over Melanie and I am laughing!!
The closer they get to the birth the more Deb and Michael are going to be in her face, Lindsay will be too busy trying to use Gus to sabotage Brian and Justin to care unless Deb and Michael can be useful.
And while Mel is on maternity leave who is going to be supporting the family? Is Lindsay working??
Too bad Mel wasn't there to hear how Lindsay really feels about her life as a wife and mother might just open her eyes or make her more blind to Lindsay's actions<smh>
Hannah is so cute and very determined to keep Brian around :)
Hope Mel and Lindsay are ready to face the wrath of Brian because he has the money and time to bury them and I can't wait :)
Date: Mar 28, 2017 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 10
Good for them. Deb is always blind to her little Mickey.
Author's Response:
Deb is hard for me to write badly about sometimes, but all I have to do is watch the morning after the party and it makes it easy to do.
Date: Mar 28, 2017 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 10
Question...were they having that last conversation about Kip and so forth about Justin in front of Justin?
Author's Response:
He walked off before they talked about it.
Date: Mar 28, 2017 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 9
It was a race to see who would hit him first. Mikey is such dung. daphne fights dirty, perfect. Brian ignored all the signs but now he knows what time it is.
Date: Mar 28, 2017 9:57 pm Title: Chapter 10
The meeting went extremely well. Now if Gus can be rescued from Lying Lips Lindsay, all will fall into place! Definitely glad that Daphne told Brian about the crap with Kip. It was long overdue for Brian to know what actually happened. Not only that but also the crap regarding Michael and how he really was. I think it is safe to say, that friendship and all the baggage from it, is being left behind. Brian should dropped that paryicular dead weight when they graduated high school, in all honesty. I mean seriously Michael’s still mentally 14. What do they really have in common anymore except a shared history that Brian has outgrown and would rather forget? Having Michael and Debbie in his life no longer serves a purpose except to aggravate him and as a cautionary tale of how NOT to raise well-adjusted children!!
Deb has some nerve! I'm so glad Daph and Justin brought up the party. What a self-serving BITCH she was to lay that on Brian’s shoulders and all because her grown infant couldn’t make a decision to live his own life...SMH
I'm still appalled that she had the unmitigated gall to justify Michael verbally attacking a seven year old girl's parentage but yet can’t see that she was in a situation even worse than Justin’s. Playing the blind mouse doesn’t work for her. The old adage of being mindful when pointing fingers at others because the are always three pointing back at yourself certainly applies to Debbie and her spineless whelp. It will be really interesting to see what all of Liberty Avenue really thinks of Michael and his overbearing, interfering mama. Debbie's definitely not ready for the eye-opening experiences in store for her delusional ass!!
Rocking in my Chucks and waiting for MORE!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Mar 28, 2017 9:19 pm Title: Chapter 10
It's good to see they've decided what to do. Deb is certifiable.
Date: Mar 28, 2017 9:16 pm Title: Chapter 10
What everyone had to say to Deb was spot on!! Will she ever really hear it though or just continue to coddle her poor baby boy? Somehow I just don't see it happening. So many truths were thrown back at her, but as usual, she excused them all. Daph was brilliant btw! she even mentioned she saw Deb's hand twitch. I guess it's OK for her to smack people around, but not her precious.
Is Michael going to try to do anything legally or Deb even? If they try theyr'e going to come up against a brick wall! There were witnesses at both instances adn Michael had it coming! I do wonder though what's going to happen now though. I don't see anyone on Liberty Ave siding with Deb and Michael, especially after that little confrontation at Woody's! Word is going to get around about what happened and Deb and Michael are not going to come out smelling like roses.
Oh I hope that Brian is able to fight the girls for Gus! I'm really wondering where Mel's feelings are in all of this. Is she going to continue to take Lindsey's word for everything? She doesn't see to hold the animosity she usually does for Brian, but that could be because he hasn't been around regularly. They really are stupid women for picking Michael. In doing so, will they automatically believe him when he cries to them about the black eye? So many questions! so many different things that can happen! Can't wait! This is just a brilliant one!
Brian finally finds out the truth about not only Kip, but how Michael really was towards Justin. how manipulative he really was adn spiteful. He was 30! justin was a 17 year old kid. Pathetic!
So good!
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Mar 28, 2017 9:04 pm Title: Chapter 10
Please say everyone heard everything that was said by Deb it would be fitting if Liberty Avenue turned on Deb and Michael.
Michael and Deb are going to spread Justin hitting Michael so fast and that means another appearance of Mel and Lindsay.
It is time everyone knew the sacrifices Brian made for the crumbs Deb doled out and called love for babysitting for her baby and catering to his every tantrum and pout while Deb continued to lie to everyone especially Michael just so she could hold onto her Mother Act.
So Brian finally knows about Kip Thomas and what Justin did to protect him, now that they are moving forward with their lives the others better stand back because no one is taking their crap anymore. :)
Author's Response:
Deb is going to find out that without Brian no one cared about Michael.
Date: Mar 28, 2017 3:51 pm Title: Chapter 9
Loved the level of communication last chapter. They are gonna make a go of it! YAY! Now the question is where?
The last line there...guh...wonderful!
Now, with this chapter. GO JUSTIN! Woohoo! that was awsome! We all know there will be repercussions from this, but he had it coming! Deb is just going to have to stuff it. Doubt she's going to believe that her precious boy did anything to deserve it. Oh no, not her Michael. Pffffffffft. Whatever. Little fucktard. Daph was hysterical! I could totally picture her.
How fantastic that Emmett and Teddy spoke. Emmett is a wonder! All Ted had to do was make a single effort and he's forgiven and loved. Speaks of Emmett's incredible character.
Again, you leave us with a line at the very end, this time with ears perked! Looking forward to Daph's explanation. Good on her to switch the topic like she did. Will Brian notice?
Cheers!!
Elaine
Date: Mar 28, 2017 3:25 pm Title: Chapter 9
Yeah, Daphne is here!!! I bet Cynthia would have loved punching Michael too!
Date: Mar 28, 2017 3:05 pm Title: Chapter 8
Sounds like a good adult reunion. The food part was very funny.
[Report This]Date: Mar 28, 2017 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh, oh, I want more!!!!
Date: Mar 28, 2017 10:38 am Title: Chapter 9
Go Justin! I wish I could punch Michael! What an asshole. Doesn't he understand that Brian isn't going to dismiss or overlook his actions this time? Especially when the comments are about his daughter.
I missed Cynthia. I'm glad she seems to be on board already to go with Brian.
Can't wait for the next chapter. Let's see how dinner goes.