Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2017 4:35 am Title: Chapter 10

Michael is not only incredibly stupid but a bitchy excuse for a human being. 

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Date: May 03, 2017 9:48 pm Title: Chapter 8

I love that they are really talking about their future. It's great. 

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Date: May 03, 2017 8:59 pm Title: Chapter 6

Oh no. They are both stubborn in their own way. They have to work it out though. These two are meant to be together. 

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Date: May 03, 2017 6:30 pm Title: Chapter 4

They are actually talking. Now they just have to keep on doing it. 

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Date: May 03, 2017 5:48 pm Title: Chapter 2

I like that Brian gets to meet his daughter. Hopefully he and Justin will find a way back together. 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2017 10:34 am Title: Chapter 39

Damn you Lindsay, if you had just hit him we could sweep it under the rug.  Nancy is always a pistol.  Lindsay, poorvLindsay ending up in the trunk listening to the boys, lol.  Brian, you were very very bad leaving the police. 

I enjoyed this!  Can't wait for more!

 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2017 2:50 pm Title: Chapter 39

Thank goodness there's a sequel! So much still to happen. Dying to know what eventually happens with Bat-shit crazy Lindsey, who a complete psuchopath and her partner in crime  the feebleminded Michael. Those two...they're just so far gone out of reality! Well, at least they're entertaining!! (for us at least)

Nancy seeming to think she has an in with the  "leaders of the community" is going to face a huge dose of reality! At least Ron's isn't going to help in her endeavors. He found his balls and is still using them which is good to see. It's not like nancy gives a shit about Lindsey, only the family name is of any concern to her.

I'm loving the Ted/Brandon relationship! And that Brandon was the one to encourage Mel to live with them.

Mel facing down Lindsey was good for her. Lindsey is so far in her delusions that the conversation seemed like simply a blip on her radar. Not sure how long it's going to take for her torealize that Brian simply isn't going to be there for her. I'm sure she'll continue with her ideas that Justin is keeping him from her. It's going to take many many drugs ffor her mental state to even begin to normalize!

The sequel I'm sure is going to be equally exciting! There's still so much to deal with. Looking forward to when that gets started. You have a lot on your plate right now and am enjoying the other stories in the meantime.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2017 5:57 am Title: Chapter 39

*Sigh* Another wonderful story for my harddrive. :) I will wait patiently ;) for the sequel.

Deb

Reviewer: Qaf_Freak Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2017 4:27 am Title: Chapter 39

Loved every bit of this. Cant wait to read the sequel :)

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2017 4:03 am Title: Chapter 39

HA!! Nancy pick your botoxed-to-death face off the floor, honey child. Your smoke and mirrors have been wiped clean and the picture staring back ain't pretty! I'm glad that Ron has made it so Lindsay, Nancy and Lynette have to fend for themselves. He's FINALLY found his cajones, which in truth were probably hiding out from Nancy after she gave birth to Lilth and Sybil! I'm really interested to see what happened with Lindsay's Dumbass-in-Crime and how her arrest is going to affect him.

So happy that Ted, Mel and Brandon will be joining Brian and Justin in Chicago. I wonder if Cynthia is going to be stationed there and just flutter back and forth to Pittsburgh. Maybe they should just sink the idea of the Pitts altogether? But then again, the Pitts is a happy medium between Kinnetik and the East Coast clients while Chicago is a midway point between the Pitts and the West Coast companies they will undoubtedly be going for. It will be interesting to see what they all decide.

So pissed that Nancy pushed for Deb to be arrested but glad Brian bailed her out almost immediately. Deb shouldn't have been arrested for doing a PUBLIC SERVICE, LOL. And Brian and Justin are finally going to get a breather! I honestly can't wait for the sequel to see how their lives shape up without the Gruesome Twosome dogging their every step. It will also be interesting to see if Miles has FINALLY abdicated his recurring role as Mikey Jr.

WHOO! So much goodness in this one fic! Thank you so much for writing Star! Your updates give me a wonderful reason to kick back, relax and rest my own overactive imagination. Every chapter is like a much-needed vacation, no matter how angsty and I LOVE IT!!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2017 3:44 am Title: Chapter 39

I see Ron kicked the three witches to the curb without a dime took him long enough, wonder what Nancy is going to do without her meal ticket? (If he was evil he would mail Nancy, Lynnette and Lindsay a bill for everything he paid for and a threat of restitution <evil laugh>).

The mayor was smart to walk away from that minefield before it went off Nancy will just have to figure another way to save face when everyone finds out.

Deb got her hit in so hopefully in the sequel it will be Jennifer lol

WOW YOU ARE ON FIRE!!!;)

 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2017 3:50 pm Title: Safety Features can really Suck.

So that was a bit of a nail biter! I was nervous reading the title of it, thinking Lindsey once again diverted capture. thank goodness Justin was able to plant his cute little butt on the trunk and keep her there until everyone arrived. Nice and hot little "reunion" scene between our boys. Sure pissed Lindsey off. HA! tough shit bitch.

It was shown that apparently all the women in this family are somewhat sociopaths. mind you, I think Lindsey is a step further and is an actual psychopath, but we see that Nancy is just as much a cause as anything. Her value on reputation surpasses anything else. I've known some people like that in my lifetime, and it so sad to see what happens with the children. We see it often these days where so many kids seem to have this sense of entitlement. It's maddening and so frustrating. Anyway...I digress...lol.

Justin was able to aswage Gus of his fears. Oh I hope that the custody goes through quickly now!! curious as to what is going to happen to Lindsey now that she's been caught. Also the other butthead in this story. What will Michael do now? And how about Miles? What's going to happen with that sap?

Man alive!! this one is most definitely your most thrilling story yet! I'm on pins and needles every chapter, and am ridiculously impatient for every update. LOL.

Brilliant!!

Cheers,

Elaine