Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2018 8:31 pm Title: FIRE AND ICE: BOOK II- CHAPTER 1

Well, I've written comments for 28-32, two times, and managed to erase them before I could post them... NOT going through that again. Anyways, I was hoping after Justin learned about what Michael said to deserve "the Punch", he'd call his lawyer and go through with suing for ownership of the comic. You, my dear, Came up with something a trillion times better for the asswipe! Btw, did Mikey repeat those words to Justin? How did he find out what he said? So glad Em was able to defuse Brian from further questioning Justin, and also keep him from upgrading his ticket. So glad Ben upgraded his. Can't you just imagine the horror of that trip if he had to sit with Mikey for the whole trip? *shudders*... If Mikey has felt left out recently, this should be the icing on the cake. I thought the part where he demanded an apology from Brian, and then demanding money, was something else. Glad Brian laid into him again. And, he had the audacity to say he'd buy collectibles if he had money! JESUS! Self proclaimed asshole, with entitlement issues! He REALLY needs to get left in dust. I really hope Ben leaves him about this month is over. I wonder if he will write anything in his notebook, other than wanting to spend more time with 'the four originals'?

Reviewer: Calliesky Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2017 10:09 pm Title: FIRE AND ICE: BOOK II- CHAPTER 1

It's really great to see Michael written like this. Can't wait to read the text messages and voice mails. 

Cant wait for the rest of the story either. 

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2017 3:50 pm Title: FIRE AND ICE: BOOK II- CHAPTER 1

Love love love Brian & Emmett's friendship! Love how Drew wants to still punch out Michael, well who doesn't? lol Justin may be a sweetheart but if he were a real person instead of a fictional character, I wouldn't want to cross him. He's wicked smaht lol, cunning when he needs to be, resilient and driven...gotta love Sunshine! 

Reviewer: Lorie Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2017 1:06 am Title: FIRE AND ICE: BOOK II- CHAPTER 1

 

Chelle,

After reading all of Book II Chapter I, I have decided that someone really needs to take a barbed wire wrapped shovel and smack that damned weasel across the face with it. He has to be one of the most self-absorbed, entitled bastards in the world. He thinks everyone should cater to him and his wants, and that Brian's bank account should be his private source of income.

Love this story and all your other work too. Please hurt the bastard.

~Lorie 💞💞