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Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2017 11:04 pm Title: IN or OUT CHAPTER 4

wow... so Michael absolutely isn't as clueless about what he's doing as he tries to pull off... and Debbie infuriates me that she just jumps on the Mikey's a perpetual victim train!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2017 10:51 pm Title: STAYING or GOING CHAPTER 4

Brian hasn't been unwilling to fight for Justin, but maybe now he'll see that keeping Michael as a friend and Deb as a conditional mom isn't worth the hurt and pain and ultimately losing Justin.  Now Jen should go speak to her son too!!!!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2017 10:36 pm Title: BEFORE I LET GO: CHAPTER 4

it's sad that Michael uses his mother's love to get what he wants... but that she reinforces the behavoir because poor wittle Mikey can do no wrong! ugh

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2017 10:27 pm Title: FIRE and ICE: CHAPTER 3

I hope they are all starting to see what they need to do to keep their partners and to come about happy... it seems like they are thinking the right things... the one that worries me is Justin... he seems to have already given up

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2017 10:18 pm Title: THE WIFE or THE MISTRESS: CHAPTER 3

I get that it is easier to placate Michael, but by doing that he sees it as permission to continue... he gets what he wants continually!

I'm so glad Drew was there for Blake... and I don't see Blake needing the money per se, but will this change Michael's opinion of him... actually it probably doesn't matter because nobody is allowed to be happy in Michael's world unless it revolves around him!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2017 10:05 pm Title: IN or OUT: CHAPTER 3

hmmmm, would Brian be the very angry brunet???  

Ben's insight is great, and he even realizes that Michael is just so awful lately... and when Justin points out that's Michael is worse than Ben thought, poor Ben!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2017 9:55 pm Title: STAYING or GOING: CHAPTER 3

Justin's despair hurts my heart.  I trust you Chelle and that you wouldn't make me fall for a story only to rip my heart out at the end, but you are doing a damn good job of hurting it until then lol

it's so well written and beautiful... that's the only way it can translate his pain to hurt me so much! lol

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2017 9:49 pm Title: BEFORE I LET GO: CHAPTER 3

I like this insight into Alex and Barry... it really shows they are almost vested in this as well.... <3 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2017 3:39 pm Title: FIRE AND ICE: CHAPTER 4

Yeah!! Way to go Drew! Go get your queen and get some sense into his head!

I loved the drowning idea.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2017 3:30 pm Title: THE WIFE or THE MISTRESS: CHAPTER 4

I can't wait for Michael to find out that Blake has money and a lot!

I bet Diane and Mel will fall for each other and Diane will kick Michael's ass.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2017 3:14 pm Title: IN or OUT CHAPTER 4

What a duo of morons and mean people!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2017 4:53 am Title: STAYING or GOING CHAPTER 4

Whoa!!!! Way to go Jennifer!!! The lioness is out!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2017 4:14 am Title: BEFORE I LET GO: CHAPTER 4

It interesting to get each psy's point of view, but when they share, it becomes great! They could move the lines and get the couples to talk too.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2017 2:45 pm Title: FIRE AND ICE: CHAPTER 4

I am loving this idea of this island. I wish there really was such a place! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2017 1:33 pm Title: FIRE AND ICE: CHAPTER 4

Very much enjoyed these updates.  Drew is always a balanced person, so I see his and Em's relationship surviving.  Afterall Michael isn't trying to split them up.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2017 1:27 pm Title: THE WIFE or THE MISTRESS: CHAPTER 4

Now that was an interesting ending.  At least Blake is actually talking to Ted.  Ted's probably sitting there thinking Wow!.  Stunned.  Love Blakes sister.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2017 1:22 pm Title: IN or OUT CHAPTER 4

Selective discussion.  Michael is way too devious.  The others know this, will Debbie get a clue?  Maybe Harvoth should let her in on it?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2017 1:14 pm Title: STAYING or GOING CHAPTER 4

Love how Jennifer defended Brian.  Will Deb think about what she said?  Good to see Daphne's influence even if she's not able to be there.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2017 1:03 pm Title: BEFORE I LET GO: CHAPTER 4

Nice analysis.  Especially the part about Debbie.  How did Alex and Duke find out the truth about why Brian punched Michael?



Author's Response:

Good Morning Phyllis,

 

Alex knows BUT none of the other counselors really know what happened to cause Brian to punch Michael. Alex has always kept what him, Brian and Justin have spoken about to himself, or at the most, bounced an idea off of Barry as any spouse would. All of the specifics will come out later!

HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2017 3:40 pm Title: FIRE and ICE: CHAPTER 3

Love how Emmett is the voice of reason.  May their holiday be a happy one with them helping the others.



Author's Response:

Raising my glass with you, Phyllis! Em is definitely returning to the no-bullshit Queen we know and love. 

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2017 3:32 pm Title: THE WIFE or THE MISTRESS: CHAPTER 3

That they tip-toe around each other is so true.  It was great that Bernard put it out there for Ted.  Now the ball is in Ted's court.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2017 3:02 pm Title: IN or OUT: CHAPTER 3

Just what brunet is it?  Good chapter giving us lots to think about.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2017 2:46 pm Title: STAYING or GOING: CHAPTER 3

Ben and Justin talking.  Now if Justin and Brian managed to do that things just might work out.  Shame Justin didn't stay to hear Brian throw Michael out.  lol.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2017 2:40 pm Title: BEFORE I LET GO: CHAPTER 3

Hearing about Alex life with his father makes his involvement all the more pertainent.  But will they be able to keep Mikey corraled?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2017 2:32 pm Title: FIRE AND ICE CHAPTER 2

It's amazing how much Emmett knows of Mel's life.  I was kinda wishing she'd told what it is she knows that they don't.  But that would spoil the fun!

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