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Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2016 5:25 pm Title: Chapter 23: Secret Romance

I really hope they get it together soon...smh It breaks my heart to see Justin in such an insecure state regarding Brian. And although Brian is adhering to Justin's order of staying away, it is gratifying to know that he's determined to woo him this time- even if it's secretly at first. I really like this new approach for Brian. Maybe being in New York could mean the start of a new beginning for Brian and Justin's relationship! 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2016 1:31 am Title: Chapter 22: Small Trinkets of Love

I understand Justin's need to return the brushes, he's still pissed. But if he really wanted to get even he'd have kept them.  Kinda like when girls break of engagements but keep the ring.  Actually I think Brian needs to get into some sort of trouble that only Justin can save him from.  Protect Brian's company from Evan, perhaps?  We know Evan is really a sleeze ball.

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Date: May 14, 2016 1:23 am Title: Chapter 21: Ignorance is Bliss

Looks like Justin's made a new friend.  How will that work when Brian finds out?  I love when you have Justin working in the bar.  He and Oliver seem to get along great. 

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Date: May 14, 2016 1:03 am Title: Chapter 20: Revelations

They were so close to getting back together.  Justin doesn't really know Brian does he?

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Date: May 13, 2016 4:48 pm Title: Chapter 19: Christmas

At least he tried to stop Brian.

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Date: May 13, 2016 4:40 pm Title: Chapter 18: Decisions

Justin's still wearing the bracelet.  That's a good sign.  Will Evan ever fade away?

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Date: May 13, 2016 4:37 pm Title: Chapter 17: Bright Future

Ethan and Justin have something in common now.  Simon.

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Date: May 13, 2016 4:03 pm Title: Chapter 16: Thanksgiving

I'm not sure what to say.  I wish Justin wasn't so hurt or hypicritical.  It would be nice if Evan wasn't still around to remind Justin of what happened.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2016 3:18 pm Title: Chapter 15: Pain

Perhaps they should introduce Evan to Ethan?

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Date: May 13, 2016 1:32 pm Title: Chapter 14: Confrontation

Why couldn't Daphne kick Evan in the balls?  She never had a problem with damaging Brian if he hurt Justin.  Love her pep talk.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2016 2:02 am Title: Chapter 13: Reality Check

I'm disappointed in Brian.  He seems to have no will power when it comes to Evan.  He should have punched him in the nose in front of Izzy.  She would than tell Justin.  Sure Justin still wouldn't forgive Brian but he'd feel better.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2016 6:32 pm Title: Chapter 12: Sweet Temptation

I fear for Brian and Justin's relationship.

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Date: May 12, 2016 3:24 pm Title: Chapter 11: Over-thinking

This is a hard chapter to read.  Knowing how it ends.  But I'll trust you because you write good stories.

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Date: May 12, 2016 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 10: Desire

Trust isn't what it used to be.

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Date: May 12, 2016 1:19 am Title: Chapter 9: Is It Love?

Beginning is right.  Evan is trouble.

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Date: May 12, 2016 1:11 am Title: Chapter 8: Admissions

Hmmm, so Brian and Justin's relationship mirrors the one Brian had with Evan.  Justin's right to be concerned.

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Date: May 11, 2016 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 7: Fireworks

Bed shopping.  More important now since Izzy was scared into her bedroom.  lol. 

Reviewer: eureka1 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2016 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 22: Small Trinkets of Love

Of course, Brian can't settle for one rose; he has to make it a bouquet. ;)

It doesn't help Brian's reunification efforts that Evan has the unfortunate habit of popping up whenever Brian sees Justin.

That does make sense about Justin's not accepting a gift form his ex, even though he is of two minds about whether he really wants Brian to be his ex. Both men are extremely proud and stubborn, although Brian has learned to swallow his pride after so thoroughly destroying his relationship with Justin.

Brian needs to hold on to those brushes for a bit and try again. :)

Apple would be a helluva a conquest for any company, even Kinnetik and Magnetic Stelle combined. It'll be interesting to see how this plays out.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2016 8:43 pm Title: Chapter 6: An Insistent Admirer

Oh no.  Now the fun begins.  Evan's name should have been evil.  It was nice of Brian to go to the opening!!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2016 7:23 pm Title: Chapter 5: Sunshine's Crap

Strange how things turn out.  Brian has a stalker, now Justin has one to.  There's a lot of things Brian could have, but I'm not sure what you are referring to. 

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Date: May 11, 2016 7:15 pm Title: Chapter 4: Ghosts of Past

Couple of points I missed the first time around.  !-Oliver knows Evan.  2- I'm pretty sure the new agency is Kinnetik and surprised that Evan doesn't know that.  Afterall, he is the one that Brian copied his mannerisms from.  That means that Justin is the graphic artist.

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Date: May 11, 2016 7:05 pm Title: Chapter 3: The New Job

Like how Brian actually admits he missed Justin.  I know I'm going to like Oliver, he seems like the type to look after his employees.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2016 5:36 pm Title: Chapter 2: Finding His Way

I knew he'd get the job.  Love the e-mails.  Glad he stripped his walls *shudder*

Can't blame Brian for being leery of coming to that apartment.

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Date: May 11, 2016 5:30 pm Title: Chapter 1: Moving In

I've been keeping up with this on MW but thought I'd take it from the top here too.  It's good to go back to the beginning.  I'm wondering, however, is how Daphne knows Izzy?  He's been in NY one day and already has a line on a job!  How cool is that.

Reviewer: eureka1 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2016 5:48 am Title: Chapter 21: Ignorance is Bliss

It will certainly be different if both Brian and his art director are pursuing Justin. Somehow I don't think that would ender Roger to his boss. Then again, if it brings Justin back into more frequent contact with him, Brian might approve.

LOL, sounds like not only Justin but Izzy herself must dread the idea of a meal she prepared.

Remember how you regretted letting Brian go, Justin! Take the olive branch and use the brushes. Produce the best art you can. That would be the thanks Brian wants and needs.

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