[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2017 1:19 am Title: Chapter 19: THE MIDDLE
They need to get married..... if only to make me happy LOL
Date: Oct 26, 2017 6:33 am Title: Chapter 16: PASS INTERFERENCE
Melanie is a really unhappy woman..good on Lindsey
Daphne must be OK please
Date: Oct 26, 2017 1:54 am Title: Chapter 15: RUNNING THE PLAY
These guys can't catch a break
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2017 8:37 am Title: Chapter 11: THE RETURN OF SIN AND SEX
Proud of Em Mikey is a weasel,Ben should leave him
Date: Oct 25, 2017 3:25 am Title: Chapter 50: EPILOGUE
Nichelle, the epiologue was very touching and really summed up the characters and what they have gained in life. I hope all our lives are made better by the people in them ( without the drama of trying to be killed)- great job on you first fanfic, first m/m and first etc.
Date: Oct 25, 2017 3:09 am Title: Chapter 49: TRUTH, DARE and CONSEQUENCES
I am assuming the eraser was there to erase Evangeline and not to harm J/B- what a crock those doctors were doing with their surgeries. So glad Carl demanded Daph and Troy
Date: Oct 25, 2017 3:02 am Title: Chapter 48: FEAST of the GOLDEN GEESE Part 3
so much going on- Brian and Justin shot by the bitch- ugh- lots of fighting and twists and turns- love how Sarah figured out the latest twist with the cop- hope B/J are good
Date: Oct 24, 2017 6:05 pm Title: Chapter 50: EPILOGUE
Now that it's finished I went back and re-read it all before putting it onto my kindle. I realized how much I'd forgotten over time. Disregard my surprise in my previous review about Evangeline....yeah...that was a big aspect to forget, but between longer updates and reading so many others, it had completely slipped my mind. SORRY!
Just as Ted referred to, "All's well that ends well". Those who so deserved it, got the retrubution coming to them. And I agree with Jenn...Go BUBBA!! lol
A part of me does feel a bit saddened by Deb's fate. She brought it upon herself though.
Everyone else seems to be living well and happy. So good. They all deserved it after the hell they've all gone through.
Brillaont story and as I'm reading through again, I'm appreciating it that much more.
Cheers and thanks!
Elaine
Date: Oct 22, 2017 9:27 pm Title: Chapter 50: EPILOGUE
What a great epilogue: we have a part of closure for quite each member of the "family".
I really loved the one from Ben: it's as if he has been suffocating for years and was given fresh air to breathe.
I thought I remembered the beginning of the story, but it's not clear, so I will start to read it once more.
Thank you for sharing it with us.
Happy writing!
Date: Oct 21, 2017 1:34 pm Title: Chapter 50: EPILOGUE
What a fabulous ending Nichelle! Everything is as it should be. The assholes got what they deserved as did our boys. Love love loved it! You are one of a kind my sweet & sassy friend. You're writing is incredible and I will read anything & everything you put to paper, as it were. lol
Hugs & love xo
Your Shine
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2017 4:57 am Title: Chapter 50: EPILOGUE
Love the ending of this. Everyone had a say and all are doing well except for Debbie. I'm glad to see that Horvath is still around though no longer with Debbie, a good move. Ya did good.
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2017 4:35 am Title: Chapter 49: TRUTH, DARE and CONSEQUENCES
Looks like two doctors are going down. Is Bruno taking Evangeline down as well?
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2017 4:16 am Title: Chapter 48: FEAST of the GOLDEN GEESE Part 3
Wow! And we find more bad guys. Deb is such a fool.
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2017 4:03 am Title: Chapter 50: EPILOGUE
The Family has faced the trials and the pain together stronger than ever as a family should.
Everyone has found their own inner strength and it has shown them that they can face any obstacles alone and in a group with the ability to not let the weight knock them down for long.
Not even remotely surprised by Deb and her wanting everyone to just forgive and help Michael, she got exactly what she deserved which being on the outside looking in as the family passes her by.
Fantastic Story! :)
Date: Oct 21, 2017 3:57 am Title: Chapter 50: EPILOGUE
This is such an amazing, wonderful story! Loved it and will definitely be saved to my hard drive. There were so many twists and turns! Loved that Justin got to punch out Michael and Brian got to punch out Ethan!
Love that they all got what was coming to them, especially Michael, Craig, Joanie, and Claire! Feel a bit of pity for Deb and that's only because she didn't keep harping on everyone after Michael was convicted and she realized how far he would go to make Brian his. Sadly for her, it took too long.
So happy that Brian and Justin survived once again (damn, girl, you had them both SHOT!! Nearly gave me a heart attack!) and are determined to stay together!
Looking forward to all your stories being completed and can't wait to see what you write next!
*HUGS*
Deb
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2017 3:46 am Title: Chapter 47: FEAST of the GOLDEN GEESE Part 2
Interesting info on Brandon. Now to see if Justin and Jules make sure Evangeline learns her place. I'm wondering what Michael and Claire and Joanie are up to. Trying to talk their way out of a jail cell?
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2017 3:23 am Title: Chapter 46: FEAST OF THE GOLDEN GEESE Part 1
I'm amazed that Michael actually conned Deb into morgaging her house for 100,000 and gave it to someone to kill Justin and thought he'd get away with it. Love how Joanie and Claire talked their way into a jail sentance. Now we have to rescue Jules and Justin.
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2017 3:03 am Title: Chapter 45- LIKE A TAYLOR-KINNEY SCORNED Part II
Hurray for Daphne. She's got some one two punch. I take it Lindsay and Mel finally showed up at the hospital. Michael's back and he doesn't know the trouble he's in. Does Justin get a chance to kill him?
Date: Oct 21, 2017 2:41 am Title: Chapter 49: TRUTH, DARE and CONSEQUENCES
Yay both surgeries were successful! So glad Murphy & Bertier will probably loose their licenses, inept assholes! Brian & Justin will be very happy when they wake up in the same room.
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2017 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 44: LIKE A TAYLOR-KINNEY SCORNED Part 1
So much happening. Gus is smart so here's hoping they get to rescuing him soon. Mel's changed a lot throughout this story and it's nice that she's thinking of the kids now. Craig living in jail unable to walk is even better punishment then dying.
Date: Oct 20, 2017 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 48: FEAST of the GOLDEN GEESE Part 3
Wow! Holy shit, all the action! Superb darlin'! Emmett, you go girl! Now he can really fight! He was so upset, defending Justin and Brian. Where are Daphne & Troy?
I can't believe you posted another chapter almost immediately, so happy!
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2017 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 43: HELL HATH NO FURY...
Looks like I was wrong. It was Ethan and Craig. Now we have Gus kidnapped. They won't get away with it.
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2017 9:57 pm Title: Chapter 42: FULL DISCLOSURE
Okay I got it wrong. It wasn't Dixon in the crash with Ethan. On the good side Ethan is dead. Craig is on his way to hell, it might take a little longer but he'll get there. Dixon, hopefully will get his soon. Emmett is super. Deb is on my shit list.
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2017 8:40 pm Title: Chapter 49: TRUTH, DARE and CONSEQUENCES
Ok you are forgiven for the heart attack you almost gave me last chapter.
I would like to see the two doctors that started the surgeries be banned from EVER being surgerons again.