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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 25, 2017 5:44 pm Title: Epilogue

Mel will always be jealous of Brian because he has the life she wanted to live. Too bad!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2017 12:09 am Title: Epilogue

Six years and lots of kids.  Michael is mentally challenged.  Mel is sounding more like Lindsay.  Justin is finally a lawyer devoted to Brian.  Life is good.

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2017 8:36 pm Title: Epilogue

So Brian is in for another suprise?  

Love this story!  Thank you for writing it.

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2017 12:30 am Title: Yeah, things couldn't be more perfect

Enjoying so much, want our boys to be happy

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 20, 2017 1:47 am Title: Yeah, things couldn't be more perfect

So the baby is here!  Love the pics you added for the wedding.  At least they were married before Abby was born.  

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2017 6:27 pm Title: Yeah, things couldn't be more perfect

Yeah! Welcome baby girl!

Gus was so dashing for the wedding: just like his daddy. The princess will maybe be a heart-breaker, but Gus is going to be one too!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2017 6:09 pm Title: Wedding bells at the horizon

If the situation has been reversed, Mel would have done worse to Brian, so much worse.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2017 11:39 pm Title: Wedding bells at the horizon

I actually feel sorry for Mel.  But what Ted said was true and it was good that he said it.  Now what surprise does Brian have for Justin?

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2017 3:24 pm Title: 'He is my BEST FRIEND!'

Yeah! Gotcha is a good way to express what is happening to Michael!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2017 12:53 am Title: 'He is my BEST FRIEND!'

Yay.  Now if you can make the sentence a little longer?

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 14, 2017 6:02 pm Title: Opening up

It's genius to have the store turned into an art gallery: it will eat Michael's mind alive!

I think it's the first time someone has this idea. What a permanent punch in the guts.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 14, 2017 2:53 am Title: Opening up

Justin is doing a lot and Brian is giving him control in his own way.  Lovely chapter.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2017 5:19 pm Title: Best friend? Not so sure...

Poor Mickey, all alone and ignored...

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2017 5:05 pm Title: From bad, to worse

What a punch in the guts! Mel deserved all of what is coming; she's so jealous of Brian that she didn't even consider how Lindsay was playing her. Too bad!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2017 2:09 am Title: Best friend? Not so sure...

Poor misunderstood Mikey.  Now he can share a cell with Crazy Lindsay.  Loving this.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2017 2:00 am Title: From bad, to worse

Wow.  Michael doesn't know he's lost everything.  He's almost as insane as Lindsay who I hope does not plead insanity.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: SandyGale Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2017 11:25 pm Title: WE HAVE A WINNER!

Abigail Eliana is such a beautiful name and has a nice ring.

Cannot wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2017 9:17 pm Title: WE HAVE A WINNER!

Hurray.  I'm not very good at naming so I'll look forward to your next chapter.

Reviewer: Lorna Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2017 3:14 am Title: HELP!

Abaigh (fathers' joy ).   

Jiya (piece of heart)

Jiya Abaigh Taylor-Kinney

Reviewer: MissMerlot Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2017 9:15 pm Title: HELP!

Eden? Am loving this story so much!

Reviewer: lili33680 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2017 7:17 pm Title: HELP!

Coucou !

J'adore ton histoire.

Moi j'aime Elizabeth.

Il y a plusieurs surnoms qui peuvent être tiré de ce prénom.

le nom elizabeth incarne la majesté, l'émotivité et l'intelligence des relations sociales.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2017 6:54 pm Title: HELP!

Caroline "Caro", Sabrina, Emma Rae, Julianne, Julianna, Brianna, Caitriona, Fallon, Quinn, Troian

Just Love This Story!! :)

Reviewer: ConnieMelissa Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2017 4:53 pm Title: HELP!

Julianna

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2017 4:09 pm Title: HELP!

Aileen or Eileen, Moira (fate, destiny), Nora, Keira: anything that can't be shortened and that reminds Brian's roots.

Reviewer: SandyGale Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2017 1:37 pm Title: HELP!

Hmm, I always liked double names. I like Eleanor, Abigail and Marina a lot. But also Alessa, Alessia or Alissa. Leonie is also a beautiful name I think.

I love your story. Can't wait for the next chapters. Keep it going.

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