Date: Jul 04, 2017 6:20 pm Title: Finally talking things over
Yes and no lol. I guess I just feel like the talk should have happened before he said yes...does that make sense? Nevertheless, I am excited to see where you take us on this journey.
Date: Jul 04, 2017 5:58 pm Title: Finally talking things over
I really don't know how to feel about this. Why say yes then take it back? Justin talks about not wanting to act impulsively, but here he's done just that. Maybe....I don't know....I'll keep reading, maybe my perception will change. I hope I've not offended you.
Author's Response:
You haven't offended me.
Look it this way: a person who has been impulsive for twenty-one years can't suddenpy from one day to the other change. It takes time. And in a way he is doing that, Brian is just very good at convincing him into doing stuff his way. And it isn't impylsive to do stuff they are both comfortable with. Impulsive would have been acwpting the proposal and planing a wedding right after he almost died, like in the show. For that they aren't ready and tried to do something out of fear.
Hope this helped to clarify things.
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2017 4:18 pm Title: Lunch with the (overprotective) siblings
Was Brian not listening when Justin mentioned he was offering advice to certain people?
And how much his 'tenaious little twat' is well-liked.
Waiting to see just how much Mel is going to go off with all that power behind Brian and Justin.
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2017 4:53 pm Title: Gift of a friend
Looks like you've got almost all the loose ends from the series tied up. What's left? TAG
Date: Jun 25, 2017 12:57 pm Title: Gift of a friend
The only people being outside the new group are Mel, Lindsay and Michael? Or is Mel in the middle, not taking side?
Date: Jun 25, 2017 12:35 pm Title: Reasons and explanations
Who's the bitch? Mel? Lindsay?
Date: Jun 25, 2017 12:08 pm Title: Problems and more problems
Justin is evil genius while Michael is only evil.
Did Mel do something right with the contract?
Date: Jun 25, 2017 11:19 am Title: First step
A new actor in the drama that is unfolding: if she is as aggressive as Mel is for her clients, they have a chance to win against said Mel.
Date: Jun 25, 2017 4:48 am Title: Preparations for the fight
I agree with Justin: the girls don't have money to support their kids as they ask for more regularly. Brian should use that to fight for Gus.
Date: Jun 24, 2017 10:06 pm Title: Keep quiet no more
I love Justin when he fights for what he wants!
Date: Jun 24, 2017 9:55 pm Title: Finally talking things over
Not that the term is adequate to them, but it's more reasonable this way.
[Report This]Date: Jun 24, 2017 5:15 pm Title: Gift of a friend
Laura and Brian tried to be sneaky, but it didn't work. Good that Justin cares so much it didn't matter. When Brian wants something he goes BIG. As always love that Ted, Emmett and Deb are on the side of the rightous.
[Report This]Date: Jun 01, 2017 2:12 am Title: Reasons and explanations
It's nice to see that studying law has come in handy for Justin. Also that Craig and Michael paid for their errors. Now who interrupted and what bitch is she talking about?
Date: Jun 01, 2017 1:00 am Title: Reasons and explanations
Justin is so damn BRILLIANT!! I really love writing and reading Justin as a strong character, showing why he got 1500 on his SAT and was born to succeed. This is right up my alley! I'm glad that Brian sees that Justin didn't do it for him necessarily but for himself and Brian by default. I swear between the two of them, they can make magic happen! His revelations about Craig and the way him and Jennifer took the rat to the cleaners was amazing! I would imagine it is also a load off of Brian's mind that Justin obtained his degree from PIFA.
Now I wonder which bitch is being talked about... There are at least three in this story- Lindsay, Michael and Mel- so is it one of them acting a damn fool or someone else? I really can't wait to find out! I find myself living for updates to this.
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: May 19, 2017 3:57 pm Title: Problems and more problems
So many questions answered in this chapter. At least now we know why justin is wanting to get a law degree. Boy oh boy...Michael really screwed both Justin and Brian over. And with no concerns either. Michael definitely met his match. Zero sympathy. Justin got his own form of payback with the incredible success of Rage. That really has to burn Micheal's ass. lol!!
Looking forward to what happens with the girls...
Great update!! So enjoying this!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: May 19, 2017 9:16 am Title: Problems and more problems
Wow so much info to digest in this chapter. I'm glad Justin stood up for himself with Michael. The not so happy ending for Zephyr is going to make him go crazy.
I do hope Melanie will take their side once she learns all the shit that has been going on with Lindsay.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: May 19, 2017 5:19 am Title: Problems and more problems
All caught up!! Keep it going! I'm completely ADDICTED!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: May 19, 2017 2:49 am Title: Problems and more problems
This is GREAT! I love it and I can't wait for more...
Hugs Kathleen
[Report This]Date: May 19, 2017 1:47 am Title: Problems and more problems
Wow, I love all the evil that Justin has been up to. The fact that Michael tried to screw him is so in character. Wonder if Benny knows. This is going to be soo good.
Date: May 19, 2017 1:33 am Title: Problems and more problems
Justin is a Hornet in the Wasp nest and will do great as a lawyer.
Waiting on how Lindsey and Mel react to Brian and Justin the bulldog.
Date: May 18, 2017 11:42 pm Title: Problems and more problems
Ok that was interesting. I wondered why Justin was in law school.
Date: May 16, 2017 10:50 am Title: First step
I'm loving this story. I'm sure Laura will love Justin. He's super smart and just so damn adorable.
[Report This]Date: May 16, 2017 1:27 am Title: First step
Can't wait for your next chapter. Justin is envaluable and like Brian says Laura is going to love him. Now that was a surprise, finding that Brian had a female friend that he liked more than Lindsay.
[Report This]Date: May 15, 2017 9:05 pm Title: Keep quiet no more
Really enjoying this. You're addressing most of the things that drove me nuts about the end of the series. The munchers were such unbelievable cows at the end, and Lindsay's true colors really showed. Also, Justin moving to New York with no money, no job, etc. over one review was completely stupid. Then there's Michael... ugh. Him wanting Brian to 'grow up' - which is nonsense; being non-monogamous doesn't mean immaturity - but then encouraging him to go back to his 'stud' ways... grrr. To me it just shows how obsessed he still was with Brian, and how much he still wanted him.
Date: May 15, 2017 5:28 pm Title: First step
UPDATE!!!!!! Yippee!!!!!!! :)
I just knew that Brian would be onboard with all Justin was saying. Our boys together are an incredible team.
What a great concept that Justin is in pre-law. I love that take. I wonder what got him to follow this path.
The girls are going to fight back of course. I'm assuming to no avail in the end. They really have no idea what they are in for.
I also like the idea of Laura being his "best female friend" rather than Lindsey. He sees Lindsey as a sister, much like he sees Michael as a "brother". Hopefully with Justin at his side, he'll really start fighting back against those who see him as "owing" them.
Also really liked Brian's inner thoughts.
All nicely done. Was so happy to see this today.
Cheers,
Elaine