Penname: BlueMyst Real name: ECH
Member Since: Jul 03, 2016
Membership status: Member
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Big fan of Queer As Folk just Love Brian and Justin my favorite stories are when they end up together :) I also love a good Anti Michael, Lindsay, Melanie, Debbie story because I always feel they should get what they deserve.


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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 27, 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

*ROFLMAO* Ben got it right between the eyes and now he knows the price he paid to associate with The Fakes, don't feel any sympathy because everything Justin said was the truth and the truth always hurts.

Now everyone knows that you don't piss off Sunshine unless you want your secrets out in the open.

Nice to know about Hunter is doing well glad that Deb and Carl stepped in and gave him the support he needed when Ben and Michael turned into idiots.

Eli tossing Monty's stuff out on to the street was Hilarious, I especially liked when he broadcast to the neighborhood about Minty and Michael cheating that was such a good move.

Michael getting kicked to streets as well at least Ben was smart enough to not put his name on the house deed, perhaps Monty and Michael can live together now that their marriages are over? lol (Bet Monty will be riveted about the endless discussion of Captain Astro and Michael will drool over his pompous opinion about stuff he will never understand)

The thought of Michael trying to get revenge on Justin is laughable that I can't wait to read his attempts, Michael is not a great thinker so this just be quite amusing.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Aug 01, 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Applause, Applause! You are a brilliant writer who amazes me with every new story you post.

Michael got exactly what he deserved he has to pay back David and he is all alone without anyone to help him, Nice that Debbie sees that she is at fault for Michael's behavior and that she needs to stop being his enabler, happy that Ben is sticking with Hunter this time and staying away from the Family, he also enabled Michael which in turn made him into a snob.

Justin and Blake are Great! They know how to stick it to Michael in a childish manner while also coming up smelling like roses lol.

I am sorry to see this end but I look forward to reading it all over again :)

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 31, 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

He Charged $15, 000+ on David's credit cards? Michael brings a new definition to King of the Morons. I hope he enjoys jail because it looks like he will be spending some time there! *ROFLMAO*

I am sitting here smiling as I write this review because everything Michael does is so stupid that I have to laugh or would pull my hair out.

He is spending money like he has a money tree in the backyard or another rich boyfriend who will just allow him free reign over his money, not that David did that he was just trying to be nice and he got kicked in the ass for it. 

Brian's reaction to the call he got from Michael was BRILLIANT and just what the little weasel deserved, Michael burnt all his bridges and now he needs them to save his puny ass, but no one is coming to help.

Looking forward to everyone's reaction to the latest Michael Drama, in the meantime I am going to sit here and crack up :)

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 30, 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

David is going there flip his lid when he finds out how much Michael spent and I can't wait, boy was he dumb to give Michael that credit card and now he will never get his money back *evil laugh*

Michael still hasn't realized that using his old stand 'But I'm His Best Friend' no longer works no one wants to talk to him, I am surprised that Emmett even went to lunch with him, Nice that Emmett's business is doing so well I bet that party he is planning for Drew and his teammates will be AMAZING!

Justin handled Michael perfectly with the photo of him and Brian, Michael still hasn't learned that he can't compete with Justin because he is still sitting at the kiddies table.lol

Why do I get the feeling Michael is going to try to finagle an invite to the party, especially if he finds out everyone else is going?

Waiting Patiently for the next chapter ;)

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 30, 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

David is going to be so mad when he finds out that Michael called him old and said he wasn't good enough to win because all the other contestants were younger. lol

Doesn't David think it us weird that he has been with Michael for weeks and not once has Deb called or come by, or that Michael has not seen his daughter? Get a clue David!!

That reporter made Justin look good in his article too bad Michael sounded so childish (The reporter got that pretty right).

I can't wait for the fallout from this.

Your stories are always so heartfelt and amusing:)

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 29, 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

*LMAO* Michael tried to embarrass Justin about winning King of Babylon and ended up embarrassing David instead!

David doesn't want a partner he just wants a Bitch he can keep around to make him look good (Why He Chooses Michael I Will Never Understand!), he could hire a made for less and just have some tail on the side.

David wants to present to his friends someone who is his intellectual equal and has the kind of money to travel as he and his friends do, Michael will never fit that description he likes comic books and can't even hold an utensil right and he will never have the money or the intelligence to fit in with David's elitist friends...Hold Up!...I am getting Deja Vu...where have I seen this happen before?...Wait Don't Tell Me, I know it will come to me *scratches Head*

David looks down his nose at Brian while trying to make an impression by using Justin and his status as an artist, who by the way makes more more in one show than Michael can make in an year (Hell Brian makes more money than David in an hour lol).

David is getting exactly what he deserves by keeping Michael around, I think David deserves some more embarrassment. Wonder if the reporter will have pictures of David dancing around Babylon? *rofl*

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 27, 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

HOLY SH!t!!! I So Love Justin!! He laid the verbal Smack Down on Ben and their snobby friends and I am rolling lol.

Justin had to do it because Ben had no right to put the blame for why JR did not want to hang with her father or the Fakes on Justin, if Michael doesn't call to find out about his daughter (Surprised he remembers what she looks like) then everyone is just supposed to wait? Bump that he wasn't worried about JR until he saw her with Justin, then all of a sudden he wanted to get loud and draw everyone into the conversation (Ass!!).

JR exerting her independence at four is good because a child can tell the difference between genuine kindness and someone being Fake.

Justin throwing out the reason why Michael follows Monty was Hilarious I was not expecting that to happen, well at least Eli can now say his relationship is exactly the heteros he so wants to emulate, Monty most be so proud I bet Ben is? :)

You threw away true friendship to hang with a group of people who are Pretentious, Egotistical, Glorified, Social Climbing Snobs one of whom is sleeping with your husband...Way to Go Ben!!!

You tossed Hunter back out into the streets because of what these two idiots said? 

You let them bad mouth your mother-in-law, criticise Brian, Justin, Emmett, hang on Drew's celebrity status, ignore Blake and Ted so you could feel important and it all crashed in burned!

I can't feel bad because Ben walked into this with his eyes wide open, Ben let this happen.

 Ben Bruckner gave Michael free reign to act however he wanted and now it has come back to bite him in the ass!!

I can't wait for the next chapter I want to know how long Justin has known about Michael cheating?

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 26, 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Michael and Ben are so delusional that they are getting on my nerves with their snotty, pretentious attitudes, I mean you know it is bad when even Debbie doesn't want to be around her son lol.

Monty and Eli are just social climbers who are bored with their hum drum lives so they look down there noses at others who aren't like them...Fake and Wonderfully Plastic!

Ben needs to catch a clue he is an even worse snob than David (And that is saying Something!!), no one wants to hang with you and Michael because you both look down your nose and criticize them, who wants to hang with people like that?

I think I know of four people who need to be embarrassed royally and brought down several pegs.

Glad the girls are moving back but Michael is going to be such a pain when he finds out they are staying with Brian and Justin.

Looking forward to Justin, Blake and everyone else giving the almighty smack down to Michael, Ben and the Fakes :)

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 26, 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Brian, Ted and Emmett know full well that even if it hadn't rained that they would have been bored because they wanted to be with their partners instead of Michael's version of fun.

I agree with Drew that putting some distance from Michael is a good thing he is behaving so childishly, what right does he have to decide who belongs together and who doesn't?

He got lucky with Ben who is not helping because he is allowing Michael to continue acting this way instead of making it seem like in some way Brian is at fault.

They aren't fourteen anymore trying to decide if they should go to the movies or the arcade, they are grown men with lives of their own and none of them need Michael's permission to love who they want.

I can't wait for Justin to knock Michael off his high and mighty pedestal, he is the one who changed after he and Ben got married not Brian, Brian would never live a stepford life but he would live his life with Justin by his side the way they want, now Michael wants Brian to live the exact life he hates?

Is Michael Stupid?

The girls are coming with the kids who will probably behave more mature than Michael could any day of the week.

I wonder if Michael is going to try for a dinner party to set up Brian with that Kevin guy and to embarrass Justin in front of everyone??

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 25, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a selfish, self-absorbed, asshole he wants Brian to dump Justin so they can hang out with his friends, he is planning Brian's life and totally disregarding that Brian loves Justin...What A Dick!!!

Michael has the audacity to plan an affair for Brian? He is a child and Ben is way too much of a saint to put up with his childish behavior, then again Brian doesn't help because he lets him get away with it too just to preserve a friendship that has gone run its course.

When Justin finds out I think Michael better start running because if it was me and a suppose friend did that I would be out for blood, Justin might just snap and everyone might want to duck and cover cause no one will be able to stop him.

I can't wait!!! lol

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 29, 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

OMGAWD!! Michael is such an idiot that he insults idiots everywhere! He pushed his own mother and thinks it is funny?

Mel telling him off was so good because Michael is behaving like a spoiled, selfish, inconsiderate child and now that Pretentious David is back in the picture this should get very interesting, I never liked David he was a snob he just was more subtle about it, won't he be surprised when he hears some truths about his sweet wittle Mikey (Hell he might want to still be with him anyway).

I wonder what Justin is planning for Michael and will Brian have to hide the body? lol

Ben attempting to make amends with Hunter is a good start but he has a lot to make up for, Brian is not to blame for what he did to Hunter or Michael attempting to act like he has class and is smart, he let that happen because he wanted Michael to put their relationship first and it turned him into a hypocrite and a giant snob.

I can't wait for the next chapter if David helps Michael with the custody issue than he deserves exactly what he gets!!

Summary:

Alternate Universe, Brian and Justin are thrown through many twists of fate with a huge life-altering conspiracy following them throughout their lives.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Brian Kinney, Gus Marcus-Peterson, Justin Taylor
Tags: Minor Violence, MPreg (Yup! Went THERE!), Non-Consent, Out of Character, Underage Sex
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst w/ Happy Ending, Drama
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32977 Read Count: 33358
[Report This] Published: Jul 28, 2016 Updated: Jul 28, 2016
Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 28, 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - All Grown Up.

Please you gotta write a sequel or an epilogue I gotta know how the The Montgomerys and the doctor went down and how much money they stole from Justin, plus I want to know how Brian and Justin are doing with Gus, Hart and the new baby?

Please Don't Leave Me Hanging! 

Summary:


A series of drabbles about coming of age, and dealing with real life issues…


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Brian Kinney, Gus Marcus-Peterson
Tags: Drabble, HIV/Aids, One-Shot, Real Life Issues
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Tragedy
Pairings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10630 Read Count: 258107
[Report This] Published: Jul 28, 2016 Updated: Nov 10, 2016
Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Aug 20, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Michael is behaving like a typical idiot and he is a hypocrite to say that to Brian, Gus talking to Gus is a waste of time because as usual Lindsay only hears what she wants, JR had no right to tell anyone about Gus but I am not surprised she us acting this way, after all she is Melanie and Michael's child.

I think Gus referring to Mel and Lindsay by their names is perfect since they aren't exactly acting like his supportive parents.

Gus is not a child and he shouldn't have to conform to Mel or Lindsay's rules to be accepted or loved, Lindsay should know better because it didn't work when her parents tried it so why would it work with Gus?

Just Love that Brian and Justin are being so supportive of Gus and Cole plus they have Cole's parents to help, this is going to escalate before it even has a chance at getting better, due to the insensitivity, pettiness and cruelty of others who really should be more understanding.

The kittens names are cute and Brian will grow to like them or at least not want to drown them as long as they stay away from his Beloved Prada lol



Author's Response: Mikey! He'll never grow up and learn to filter his speech, he's always just reacting like the child that he is... JR is so out of line, blabbing about Gus's personal issues, like mother like daughter. Mel and Linz are just as hypocritical as Michael, they just can't see it. Brian and Justin truly understand what Gus is going through, having been so careful over the years when they we're still tricking. Kitties, I'm pretty sure Brian's always wanted pets, he just thinks it's a lesbionic thing... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Summary:



Justin surprises Brian for Christmas, or does Brian Surprise Justin…


Categories: QAF US
Characters: None
Tags: Anal Sex (Lots of it!), Anti-Lindsay, Anti-Michael, Christmas, M/M, Minor Character Death, MPreg (Yup! Went THERE!), Real Life Issues
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Porny, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118113 Read Count: 117718
[Report This] Published: Jul 31, 2016 Updated: Sep 11, 2016
Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Sep 11, 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 ~ Nicholas Declan Taylor-Kinney

Not surprised Michael has walked into a relationship that he doesn't really understand, why didn't Deb notify the hospital about what Marianne is doing to Michael? 

I feel bad for Mel she has to deal with living without her child because of Lindsay's jealousy and selfishness, while Lindsay sits in jail getting more delusional and just ignoring the fact that Jenny Rebecca is gone due to her.

Glad Ted and Emmett are doing so well in their relationships and business they have found happiness.

I always thought Jennifer was happy with Tucker had no idea she would be the one looking for a new relationship?

Just so happy for Brian, Justin, Gus, Jamie and their newest edition Nicholas Declan Taylor-Kinney, also happy that Justin will have a show at the Bloom Gallery to display his pictures.

Everything is looking up for Brian and Justin but we all know this is just the calm before the storm.

Looking forward to the next chapter :)



Author's Response: Let's face it, Michael an idiot, plan and simple... Deb needs to have Maryann investigated, what she's done is do wrong. But Michael a fool to not see the forest for the trees. Jealousy, Selfishness and Delusional, that pretty much sums up Lindsay. I think Tucker was good for Jen for a while. But their lives experiences are soon to start showing a little strain, he's not ready to be a father, let alone a grandfather. Gus, Jamie, and now Nicky, the Taylor-Kinney clan is just too adorable... Brian and Justin need to start bracing for all the drama, but they can handle it... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Oct 19, 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 ~ Baby J

How is Lindsay and Mel suppose to afford to take care of three kids when they could barely manage one without Brian's help?

They just totally disregarded Justin's feelings about them raising his child which is not surprising, they hounded Brian about giving up his baby so who cares what Justin wants.

I feel for Brian having to deal with that while Justin was in California he should have told Justin the truth so he could come back and tell the girls to go to Hell.



Author's Response: You're so right, they couldn't afford JR but they went ahead and had her anyways. They always seem to think that the bank of Kinney is open for business. Shaming Brian,and telling him he's unfit, then disregarding Justin completely is deplorable. Brian has always been insecure when it comes to feeling loved, but now Justin's back they'll come to truth each other completely... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Summary:

Brian and Justin want to raise their family without help.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: None
Tags: Anti-Lindsay, Anti-Michael, Post-series
Genres: Angst w/ Happy Ending, Canon, Drama, Humor
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Debbie/Carl, Emmett/Other, Melanie/Lindsay, Ted/Blake
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62336 Read Count: 288760
[Report This] Published: Aug 01, 2016 Updated: Aug 13, 2016
Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Aug 09, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank goodness for Ted being such an understanding friend to just let Brian vent out his anger, fear and sadness that his supposed friends have inflicted over the last few days, they just took and took and took until Brian just yelled he had enough and cut off their supply and still they want to take, take, take.

Justin is doing the right thing by listening to Max and not responding to Lindsay, he can't feed into her delusion anymore, besides no one can argue with crazy they love the illusion too much to comprehend reason.

Lindsay going to Michael was sad because neither one wants the other to get their fantasy, they are to self-absorbed to realize that neither one stands a chance with either Brian or Justin but they need to hold onto the unrealistic dream in order to breathe.

Lindsay is getting desperate if she has to seek out Michael for help I wonder if she will try Deb or Emmett, the longer she goes not hearing from Justin the more scary this situation can become.

You have me glued to my kindle waiting for the next chapter lol 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Aug 07, 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Well the mediation went well...For Mel:)

She walked into that room with all the evidence she needed to put Michael in his place, too bad he is too stupid to realize that he never stood a chance and he should have known better than to demand custody of JR and demand Mel pay him support (He gives my headaches headaches lol).

I know he is going to Brian which means he will be arrested for being a Dumbass and I can't wait to start laughing.

Lindsay is going to Justin's art opening and she will make an Ass out of herself, of course she should be use to it, the chick has been doing that since she found out Justin was coming home.

Can't wait to read the next chapter, the suspense is killing me....I hope it will last lol

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Aug 10, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Being in Lindsay and Michael's mind makes me very happy that I am a sane person.

These two are children so far gone in the throws if their fantasy that they don't see how they hurting everyone else.

Lindsay is going so far into her delusion that she is even contemplating kidnapping Justin just to keep him near and solely dependent on her, thank goodness Max has someone with Justin and the girls, plus he was with Mel when she picked up Gus and JR cause I know she would have taken them to get Justin to call or come to her.

Inside her mind is a woman who became fixated on Justin when she saw that he had talent and she used everything going wrong with Brian and Justin to keep him near, even used her own child which just makes her more disgusting.

Michael is just an idiot who needs his head examined too bad their is just rocks between his ears, he can spend all day and night at Babylon Brian still won't be there.

Brian did what Michael and Lindsay didn't want him to do he grew up, fell in love and didn't need them anymore, so Lindsay turned her attention to Justin and created her fantasy life, while Michael fought against it and reverted back to his fourteen year old self.

Neither one is going to like it when they get their comeuppance.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Aug 11, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You are really building up the suspense level here with these one chapters I so far on the edge of my seat that I think any second I am going to fall off lol

Lindsay and Michael are such idiots they really don't like being told they can't have something, even when it is spelled out in plain English they still ignore it and go after the object of their obsession, with this blind faith that just because someone told them no it didn't mean they still couldn't have it.

Well Michael is taken care of for the night now just have to wonder what Lindsay is up to and what stupid thing she might do next?

Max explained the difference between Michael and Lindsay perfectly they are both in their own way acting like a three year old throwing a tantrum in a department store, the only difference is that because Lindsay is being denied access to Justin she could is more likely to attack someone, while Michael will just whine a person to the point that they would wish he got laryngitis for the rest of his life.

I think Gus will probably go to Justin at the moment he is just not ready to talk about it, plus he might have overheard something and maybe he just needs to think about it before first.

Can't Wait For Tomorrow Night!

 



Author's Response:

II have more chapters done and I have a whole weekend to finish this with. LOL 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Aug 11, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Michael calling Deb and Emmett for help just goes to show that as usual he just is not comprehending that Brian is serious and he is not going to back down.

Blake explained Michael to Emmett and Ted perfectly Michael is so used to throwing a tantrum and getting what he wants from everyone, that now that everyone is ignoring him while also pushing him away he is getting worse, not dangerous just more whining (if that is even possible!), going to Kinnectic and shouting for Brian just earned him another stay in jail...Michael makes lint look smart lol

Lindsay was so close to being arrested too bad she got away again, I can't wait till Mommy and daddy find out their little girl is Bonkers and that Mommy Peterson just spent a fortune on her daughter's delusion.

Hope Brian, Justin and the kids get to have some fun in New York they could use a breather from all the crazy, just feel so bad that they have to deal with this when all they wanted was to be happy and raise their kids, instead they have to deal with the two looney tunes who just can't seem to get it through their heads that Brian and Justin Don't Belong To Them, Don't Want Them and Wish They Didn't Know Them!!

 



Author's Response:

I wanted to see someone encourage Linds, Nancy is the idiot I picked. Nancy is probably the character I hated most so I want to look like an idiot. LOL 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Aug 12, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Holy Smokes, Every time I think you can't surprise me I see another chapter posted and you do!

Michael I think actually almost listened to what Blake had to say even though he did try to justify his obsession with Brian, perhaps he will talk to a doctor and get some help to finally realize what everyone has been telling him for years, Brian has the relationship he wants with Justin and they are not breaking up anymore...Hell even death won't keep these two apart for long lol

Now for Hurricane Pyscho and her wonderful parents they are all about to get a very rude awakening, if Dean were smart he would charge Ron more because Lindsay just keeps racking up the charges, talking to Max, Brian and Justin is going to make Dean wish he had ignored this particular call.

Nancy deserves to be embarrassed in front of the country club set for going along with Lindsay's delusion without getting the facts (Who plans a wedding without meeting the groom first??), perhaps she should have embraced her daughter being a lesbian instead of acting like such a snob.

Lindsay being a lesbian sounds much better than Lindsay the Pyscho is probably what Nancy will be thinking when she sees Lindsay splashed out in the front page, and reporters camped out in their front lawn and talking to their neighbors,  business associates, friends at the country club. 

Nancy might need a room next to Lindsay before the day is out lol

 

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Aug 14, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

BRAVO, BRAVO!!

Lindsay chocked her mother, banged her head against the wall and damn near killed that woman!

Makes me shudder thinking what she would have done to Brian if she had gotten close to him, Lindsay telling Gus that Brian and Mel wouldn't be around to stop her is enough to give me nightmares, she deserves the thirty years and to be put in a hole under wherever she is incarcerated.

Ron walking away from Lindsay is not surprising he normally just does whatever Nancy orders him to, now that Nancy is out of commission he can live his life with Freedom, I doubt Lynnette is coming over to help mommy, it's Daddy's ass she has to kissed now lol.

Okay Michael getting his ear bit off by Lindsay was funny because he deserved it for being an idiot and poking the bear. NEVER POKE THE BEAR!!!

Now I feel bad for Ted and Blake who have to deal with Michael I hope this comic book guy can take Michael away so Ted and Blake can get their life back.

Good for Ben to find happiness with a mature partner this around, glad that Allen decided to stay and that Brian is not taking any chances to keep Justin and his kids safe.

Really happy that now that Lindsay has been sentenced Justin and Brian can have their life back.

As much as this story creeper me out at times I already can't wait to read it all over again, looking forward to your next story :)

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Aug 13, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG, OMG, OH MY GAWD!!!

Lindsay is never going to get out of prison now!

I Can't Believe She Did That! And yet I can because she is Hurricane Psycho and there will have to be a new category for her because five is just too tame right now.

Dean, Ron and Nancy going to talk to Justin was Amazing cause now they all have the truth and Dean is wishing he was in another line of work, Justin held nothing back when he told what Lindsay has put him and his family through, I especially liked Brian coming into to the room and giving Justin an Toe Curling Kiss to emphasize that Justin was never going to marry Lindsay.

What happened later actually made me jump.

Lindsay doesn't need to be in prison or a hospital she needs to be under it.

 



Author's Response:

Lorie my beta added the kiss, it really worked well. I wanted Nancy to eat her words. LOL 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Aug 12, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Uh Oh..Oh No! I Think Justin Is Going To Need More Security Lindsay is pissed and has gone from Tropical Storm CrazyLady to full blown Hurricane Pyscho, I honestly fear her finding out that they are in New York.

Michael might actually be getting a clue at long last! Of course it could just be the rocks shifting around in his head lol

Keep Up The Awesome work:)



Author's Response:

I love the rocks shifting in his head, I might have to use that. Thanks for joining in my madness.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Aug 12, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hurricane Psycho violated the restraining order with her crazy phone calls so now she has been arrested, if her parents or sister come to bail her out they need their heads examined too.

She almost stabbed Alex with a pen which means this hurricane is going right past three and straight into five: Hide Any Sharp Objects Now category!

I think that Max should get into contact with her parents and let them know that their daughter is beyond dangerous, she is going Lethal any second now so everyone might need protection of she gets out.

Ratcheting Up My Heart Rate Here!

I think I might need a vacation after this story lol *Wipes sweaty brow*



Author's Response:

I'll just write a funny one so you can relax. I already have an idea. LOL