Awww, I love Dad Brian, he's so protective.  As always nicely done.  I love spending my time reading your words!

Why Deb you saucy one!  Very cute date for Deb and Horvath.

Micheal is thick but it seems people are shooting pretty straight, he'll get it even if only by repetition.

Well that's done and done.  Can't believe Michael would say such a thing.  And Lindsay was warned to act proper, now look. 

Awww, that was so sweet!  I really liked the ending cuz it was angst you for a while.  In the end everyone got what they deserved especially Brisn and Justin -- happily ever after.

Mikey as Tina Turner, lol.  

Yep, time to deal with Mel.  Once all of this is handled Brian and Justin can go back to slowly getting to know each other and enjoying their new baby.  What a crash course ifpn love, so much drama. I love it!!!

Ohhhhh no, Ma has found proof of Mikey's crazy!  I wonder how she will react? She seems to miss Mikey's bad points.  

This is all too stressful for Justin and little Bella (lol).  Perhaps Brandon and Mikey will work together and split the couple with Brandon getting the blond he onesies about and Mikey his brunette? Then again Linds is a suspect, again. 

We'll see... :)

I think I've listed most every character as a suspect.  I'm leaning toward split personality Mikey.  

Sam knew he was breaking the law and Lindsay as usual doesn't care.  What a mess!  I love it

As usual this fic zigs when I expect a zag.  I was ready with my new list of suspects and here you are with the answer and yet another problem.   It's fantastic!

Justin is so cute.  His bravado with Lindsay and his willingness to face the stalker rock.  I even like that he likes Ted but finds Mikey icky.  Brian is strong and protective which is uber sexy and sweet. Cameron being in there us perfect for fueling out Rage, the more he protects Justin and baby Bella the more he loves them.  

You should be very pleased with the flow and the building and layering of suspense.  

Mikey poor beaten up Mikey.  I wonder if it is a girl cuz a guy beating up Mikey us unfair.  

I loved Justin's questioning.  He was such a toughly about it.  Telling Deb that if they had minded their business they'd be fine was fantastic.

New suspects added 1) Jen cuz her beating up Mikey is hysterical 2) Daphne cuz it would be just as funny. 3) Sam cuz he's a creep and Lindsay would flip

I love cocky Justin! He's already liking the Kinney vibe, yay.  Ted definitely between Mikey and Ted -- he is a cutie.

Mom's hooking up their children is always hysterical.

So much for hiding the relationship.  Seriously, Mikey should have paid attention they had already met.  And trashing your best friend is a terrible way to start a relationship.  Frankly, Emmett is ticking me off too.  If Brian is so bad then leave him alone.

Judging from the kiss Justin is squarely on Brian's side.

He called their moms? Who does that?  Mikey you will never get Justin this way.  And planning an orgy is just wrong.  Brian has self control even if you don't believe that.

As for Jen and Deb, wow, I hope they see the light and cut the cord. Brian was right to threaten Deb.  Jen needs to listen to Justin she has no say in his partners. Emmett better wise up! 

I love that Justin is bitchy.  I love that he yelled at them and put them out.  Brian seems to know what he wants and Justin is it.

Loved the Justin, Terry, and Brian meeting.  It's funny to see the differences in approach.  I also loved the way Brian checked Terry and Terry defended himself.  They both seem like honest men who care for Justin.

Emmeett has gotten wiser, and the Novotny's are getting dumber.