Penname: marie-france Real name: Marie-France TEJEDOR
Member Since: Feb 15, 2017
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Je suis française et j'adore tous les fics sur B et J! Je ne peux pas m'arrêter de lire Merci à tous les auteurs


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What if Justin didn't run off to New York after Brian's loft got burgled? What happens when he decides to face the situation like an adult? Join us on the journey to find out.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Brian Kinney, Carl Horvath, Cynthia, Daphne Chanders, David Cameron, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Jennifer Taylor, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Molly Taylor, Other Cast Regulars, Ted Schmidt, Vic Grassi
Tags: 500k+ Word Count, Anal Sex (Lots of it!), Anti-Michael, Bottom Brian, Family, Getting Back Together, Jealousy, Oral Sex, Responsible Justin, Rimming, Slow Burn, Toppy Justin, What if...
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Canon Divergence, Drama, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Porny, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Debbie/Carl, Melanie/Lindsay, Michael/David, Ted/Ben
Series: Tricky Business
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 780683 Read Count: 140391
[Report This] Published: Jan 01, 2017 Updated: Apr 10, 2022
Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star
Date: Apr 11, 2018 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Monday, December 4th

Brian has a crappy day, he misses his Sunshine so much. Except at the bank. It was funny! I loved Justin's day especially with Carl the librarian and surely Debbie and Vic, they are a great family!

Thanks for the update Ladies!



Author's Response:

Poor Brian! It's amazing that he can even walk with those balls so blue. :P

Justin has an amazing circle of supporters. :) We're made up that you're enjoying our take on him.

Thanks so much for commenting, Marie-france, and our apologies for the belated reply. Go check out the teaser for the next chapter, empasis on 'tease'. :D

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 01, 2021 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47: Tuesday, December 19th

Great chapter girls! Gus and Harley seem to understand each other more and more it's hilarious. And this breakfast was all you need to start the day right (mine isn't it!) And it makes me so regret that we didn't see more of this Vic in the show.

Watching them at the bowling  was fun. They really want to win against the police team but hey there are some who are really bad. Ben and Ted are very cute, they go well together.

I am now waiting for the visit to the urologist and I hope Justin is doing better even though it is still painful.

When will we see Hobbs and the leaders of St James Academy finally punished? What about the theft of the loft? So many questions. I will patiently wait for the next update. Stay safe and healthy Ladies



Author's Response:

We're thrilled that you liked this chapter so much. It may be our most popular installment yet.

Gus and Harley are a blast to write. We suspect they may get each other in trouble in the future :D Who will be to blame?

The bowling scenes were a bit of challenge... We kept getting distracted by that hunk in the neighboring lane, along with everyone else :D We had to be careful that the scores added up correctly. Most of them could use more practice, right? Justin would probably appreciate company when he's practicing with Michael; his WASP upbringing really did the blond no favors :D

We're working on the scene with the urologist now, along with a few others. It will be a while, but we'll push out the next chapter as soon as we can. Justin's already doing better than before his visit to the ER and his encounter with Darth :) We'll just have to hope that the urologist will confirm that he's healing as he should...

We can't give you answers to your questions just yet, although Carl and Wen assure us they are making progress with the loft robbery, and Wen plans to put the 'fear of Wen' into Dr. Perkins again. She's annoyed that he didn't get the message the first time.

You stay safe and healthy too, Marie-France :) Thanks for commenting!

~ KaBrynn, aka Karynn & Brynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 24, 2020 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46: Monday, December 18th

Another excellent chapter Ladies! Bethany (or Gertrude or Trudy) is a very good match for the team, she will know how to defend herself!

The shopping with Debbie Justin and Emmett were quite a show, thank you.

Gus is a smart little guy and the only one who talks to Harley. And so Michael is a cheater and you can't trust him, I had no doubts but Theodore let it slip away.

So I'm looking forward to what Carl will announce to Brian and hope Brian tells him about Justin's POA. It's a busy day!

Have a good holiday too and see you next year!



Author's Response:

We're thrilled you enjoyed this latest installment, Marie-france :) You were one of only two readers (as far as we know) who carved out time to read before Christmas.

Are you familiar with Costco? There's all of one in France so, if not, we hope we provided a good introduction to the warehouse store. Close to a major holiday (US Thanksgiving or Christmas) is not the best time for a visit, especially in a big city. Emmett and Debbie added their own flair to the shopping experience, of course :D

As Phyllis (YumYumPM) noted in her review on AO3, Gus speaks budgie :D He is a very bright little nipper.

Happy New Year!

~ KaBrynn (Karynn & Brynn)

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 15, 2020 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45: Sunday, December 17th - Part 2

Justin is slowly healing and Debbie and Vic will help him! and he will focus on his studies and working with Brian I laughed imagining Brian's face when he left alone. I love Ted in your story and Emmett is still a good friend to Justin. The girls are just useless and Lindsay is a real bitch. Hope Wen goes to Hobbs and the Head of St James Academy to understand how horrible their behavior is. I look forward to this. Thanks girls again a great update! You made over 51,000 words strong wow Congratulations !! It was a good read. See you soon!



Author's Response:

Poor Brian. Our readers dare to laugh at him! Don't tell him, but the writers do too. :D :D

We're glad you like our Ted. Under different circumstances, we think Ted and Brian's friendship would have developed a lot sooner.

Is there anyone who doesn't want Wen to boot Jerkins, Dixon, and Hobbs out of St. James? Rest assured, she and Horvath are working on it!

We didn't actually have 50,000+ words as a goal for the chapter. Who would be that insane? :D That's the same as the NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month) goal. Not that we came close to writing that much in just one month...

Thanks for the wonderful comments, Marie-france. :) The teaser for the next chapter is up in the FanDoc, and we're working on the next installment. We'll do our best to get an update out before the end of the year.

~ KaBrynn (Karynn & Brynn)

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 05, 2019 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44: Sunday, December 17th - Part 1

Poor Justin he suffers a lot. I hope he understands that he needs to take care of him whatever happens. I think the pain is a bit lessened when Brian pushed by Ted and Carl admits they are partners wow what progress !! I love Ted more and more in your story Ladies. He is there for Justin and asks the Doctor the right questions while Brian must be disturbed by Justin's tears destroying his designer clothes lol. I like this story more and more. Thank you for taking your time for it.



Author's Response:

You survived the cliff along with Justin, Brian, and Ted! Hooray! :D We're pretty sure Justin has learned his lesson; if not, there will be plenty of people around to reinforce it. Deb's hand is already twitching. :D

José came up with a marvelous description of Brian's progress, so we've awarded him a virtual blue ribbon. :D "Partner is the word of the chapter, no?"

"I want a contract," Brian sternly insists. "No more ruined clothes or furnishings, Twat, or else..."

Thanks for reviewing, Marie-france. :) You and our other faithful readers motivate us to keep writing. :) We're working on the next installment now, but there's a looong ways to go. We should have a teaser for the next chapter - and the rest of the boys' Sunday - up soon, though.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed
Date: Jul 26, 2019 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43: Saturday, December 16th

 Justin is finally at the hospital. He suffers so much! Brian and Ted give him a sermon about drugs but pain makes you do stupid things. I hope Carl will fix Hobbs problem. Great update Ladies as always.



Author's Response:

That's a very good point that pain can make you do foolish things. Justin also brought it on himself, unfortunately, with his stubbornness about go-go dancing so he can pay Brian back. "Stupid little twat," as Brian might say, if not as affectionately as usual at the moment. Could it be any more obvious how much Brian cares about him? :)

Do we foresee a sermon coming up for Justin from both Carl and Wen? Along, of course, with more from Brian and Ted... plus Deb, Vic, Daph, Syd, Em, etc. Jsutin's gonna get an earful, again and again. :D

Oh and then there’s our favorite detectives… they may also have a thing or two to say to Justin. :D You're not the only one who wants Carl - and Wen - to fix the Hobbs problem. If only the administrators at St. James didn't encourage that kind of bullying. :/

Everyone is on tenterhooks, waiting to see whether Justin will be okay. We didn't mean to leave you - and all our other lovely readers - hanging from a cliff for so long. Unfortunately, real life has sucked in the worst way for Karynn (eureka1) of late, which means we haven't been able to work much on the next chapter. We will update as soon as possible, but it may be a month or more. :/ There is, however, a teaser available in the FanDoc if you haven't already peeked at it - and we will write the rest of the chapter to go with it. :)

Thanks so much for leaving a comment, Marie-France. :) We adore our loyal readers!

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed
Date: Jun 15, 2019 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42: Friday, December 15th

Justin really has a shitty day and makes some really bad decisions. I hope he has passed his tests and working for kinnetik will stop him from making other mistakes. We will say that with pain he does not think well. The Kinnetik team has fun like crazy and Brian has a wet dream, it was a dream, right?



Author's Response:

You're absolutely correct. Justin in pain does not think well at all. That led to the extremely bad decision to take drugs at Babylon. :(

The drunk and high advertising team had a lot of fun. :D Even if they were barely coherent at times. :D Brian keeps trying to tell us that he was barely affected by all the alcohol and pot, but we're not buying it...

The final scene was a Beam and weed-induced hallucination. Brian certainly enjoyed himself. :D

Thanks for commenting, Marie-france. :) Real life reared its ugly head and interfered with our progress on the next chapter, but we should have a teaser up soon - we're working on the chapter now.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star
Date: Feb 03, 2019 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40: Tuesday, December 12th

I loved this chapter he is very funny. The Dinner game was perfect with Michael still so silly. I hope that all will succeed their SAT. I also liked that Brian accepts that Justin had put the alarm and therefore he is not responsible for the burglary. And for the doc Tricky fan there is no automatic translation so it's hard for me to understand but I'm waiting for the updates and I'm never disappointed for everything that happens.



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting us know you enjoyed this latest installment, Marie-france. Maybe you can copy from the FanDoc into Google Translate to get a rough translation? We know the translations sometimes don't make sense; perhaps Alois would be willing to help if you get stuck. That's what a beta is for, right? :P

The diner scene was a hit with all our readers. There will probably be at least one more round of the one-word description game. Maybe Michael will excel? :D :D

It's amazing what three little words - I believe you - can accomplish. We're proud of Brian for reaching the point where he does believe Justin.

Thanks for reviewing. :) It motivates us to keep writing.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star
Date: Jan 21, 2019 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39: Monday, December 11th

The librarian is really nice thankfully that Justin has her. The other teachers are horrible Detective Wen needs to come back. I love Daphne Sydney and Justin more and more. And Vic really BOB 2.0 hahaha



Author's Response:

Some of Justin's other teachers are pretty decent people, if not as special as Frau Rose - she's a real gem. :) Unfortunately, Dixon, Perkins, and Bauer make all the other faculty look bad. Grrr. The administration and faculty had better watch out if Wen has to return to St James!

Aren't Justin, Daphne, and Sydney a hoot together? We're glad you're enjoying them.

BOB, in his new incarnation as BOB 2.0, remains a fan favorite. :D

Thanks for reviewing, Marie-france. :) We've put a snippet for the next chapter in the FanDoc, if you want to take a peek.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star
Date: Dec 25, 2018 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38: Sunday, December 10th

Thank you very much for this Christmas Gift Ladies! It's a long chapter but it's amazing. I like Brian and Gus. So Michael is really behind the disappearance of BOB he is so childish even Gus does better than him. I hope Vic is not too sick. Justin can tell him his reunion with Brian it will please him LOL. Happy Holidays for you two!!



Author's Response:

Thank you in return for the gift of a review, Marie-france. <3 We're thrilled you're still following our story.

You're not the only one to comment that Gus is more mature than Michael - a sad state of affairs for the thirty-year old. *snicker *

We're all pulling for Vic to get better; he may just need to have his meds adjusted. You could be right, though, that hearing about Justin and Brian's reunion - in detail - would perk him up even more. :P

Happy New Year!

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star
Date: Jul 17, 2018 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Saturday, December 9th

You have posted this chapter quickly. Thank you. Ben has to understand the game between Ted and Brian otherwise he will be very upset. but it's good that he takes the defense of his boyfriend. Damage that Brian does not see Justin dancing tonight he would have liked the blue! Justin should stop dancing this boy is too tired. And Emmett wow he reads so well Brian who is so jealous of Eric and the customers who get closer to Sunshine, it's funny.Thank you again ladies for the update. See you.

 

 



Author's Response:

We may have sent our readers into shock by posting so soon. :D We suspect some haven't even realized there's a new chapter. :D

Ben is lovely with the way he defends Ted. And we expect he'll adjust to the snarky dynamic between Brian and Ted soon enough.

Hmm, maybe Brian will hear about those sexy blue briefs via the gay grapevine... What will happen then? More jealous, possessive Brian? More opportunities for Emmett to rib him?

Thanks for reviewing, Marie-france. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star
Date: Jul 08, 2018 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Friday, December 8th

Wen needs to go see Dixon again. I love the girls and the origami girl must be part of the group !! The friendship of Brian and Ted becomes really interesting. And Brian and Justin who are getting close good news. Thank you again for a fabulous chapter.



Author's Response:

Wen has the expectation that Perkins will keep his faculty under control. She hasn't encountered Dixon yet, but she might if she has to pay another visit to St James. Dickhead had better watch out! :D

We're made up that you like Origami Girl. Not only is she a bit of a loner, though; she's also a few years younger than the others, so she wouldn't necessarily fit into a group with the other girls and Justin.

Thanks for being such a faithful reader and reviewer, Marie-france. We hope to have a new chapter up soon. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star
Date: Jun 19, 2018 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Thursday, December 7th

  Sunshine dreaming of Brian was hot!! Where is BOB ??  Thank you for this fantastic update ladies!!



Author's Response:

We're made up that you enjoyed Justin's dream. Our computers were smoking as we wrote that scene. :D

We're all searching for BOB... come out, come out, wherever you are.

Thanks for reviewing, Marie-france! A teaser for the next chapter will be available soon in the FanDoc.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star
Date: May 27, 2018 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: Wednesday, December 6th

Thank you for the update ! The chapter is amazing!! Mickey is idiot and David well I have no words:: Finally Brian says  sorry and admitte his feelings. He is so jealous . I love the girls they are the devil and  Brian listens every word. Is Emmett going to talk to him about Bob ? it could be so funny!!! Later ladies.

 

 



Author's Response:

Michael and David do tend to leave us speechless... :P

We're proud of the brunet stud. He actually apologised and admitted to having feelings - major progress! But, not, he doesn't do jealousy. Nuh-uh. Riiight, Brian. Keep telling yourself that.

We had such fun planning the girls' interrogation of Justin, with Brian hanging on every word. :D

Emmett can be surprisingly close-mouthed at times, so we don't know whether Brian will succeed in winkling any info about BOB out of him. Stay tuned for the next chapter...

Thanks so much for the fun review, Marie-france. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star
Date: Sep 05, 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Thanksgiving, Thursday, November 23rd

Great chapter! I want Thanksgiving like that ,what family ! Justin is so cute Brian miss justin and Vic make sure that Brian do the right thing !

It's nice to see Carl here he takes care about Justin.

Thank you for this funny update



Author's Response:

We're made up that you enjoyed the Thanksgiving chapter, Marie-france. :) Karynn modeled it after Thanksgiving dinners when she was young.

Vic gave Brian great advice - let's hope the stud listened.

Carl is a wonderful combination of a surrogate father and mentor for Justin.

Thanks for reviewing. :) We're working on the next chapter now and should soon be posting a teaser in the FanDoc.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star
Date: Mar 24, 2018 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Sunday, December 3rd

Ha ha  Michael  nice to Sunshine it's was short !! Brian is so jealous of Bob, but no he doesn't do  jealous LOL I like Ben and Ted together. Thank you for this chapter all the part of Christmas decorations was very funny !!



Author's Response:

Hey! Michael was nice to Justin for hours! :D It's a record! :D

Brian is nodding in agreement. "Thank fuck someone has figured out that I don't do jealous." he says, heaving a sigh of relief. :P

It's unanimous so far. Ted and Ben make a wonderful pairing.

We're chuffed that you enjoyed Debbie's idea of Christmas decorations. C'mon, admit it. You actually had a bit of sympathy for Michael in regard to those reindeer… :P

Thanks for being such a faithful reader and reviewer, Marie-france. :) Karynn suffered a major Internet outage in her corner of the world, but we're back to working on the next chapter. An NSFW teaser is now available in the FanDoc. * naughty authors waggle their eyebrows *

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed
Date: May 04, 2019 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41: Thursday, December 14th

Brian is doing well with Kinnetik but Justin is having a bad day. I hope he's going to tell Carl that he can not let Hobbs do that. Nice to see a new update Ladies!!



Author's Response:

Poor Justin. :( We're hoping he'll tell Carl, but the blond can be a foolishly stubborn twat (to borrow Brian's word).

Thanks so much for commenting, Marie-france. :) We're chuffed that you're still reading. Real life is still being a pain, but we are working on the next chapter. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star
Date: Aug 18, 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Monday, November 20th

Hello I read the 19 chapters  and I love this story! I will not comment on all the chapters but give you my impressions.

Debbie and Vic we find so much their complicity is great! Daphnée is still there for Justin I loved her trip to the country of toys and the last chapter is very hot!

Brian would not be a little jealous? In any case he is very angry to see Justin dancing! I hope that he will soon forgive Justin and that we will have the explanation of the burglary and hot reunion of B and J maybe with BOB !! LOL

I look forward to the next and thank you this story is amazing !!

Sorry for the long post and my bad english!



Author's Response:

We're chuffed that you've discovered Tricky Business, Marie-france. :) We must've kept you busy reading for a least a few hours. :)

We agree - Deb and Vic make the perfect surrogate parents for Justin. We can't imagine Justin without his bestie. He and Daph love to tease each other, but they also always have each other's backs.

Brian wants us to tell you he doesn't do jealousy - you have our permission to laugh yourself silly over that outrageous claim. He is jealous as he watches Justin dance, but he's not about to admit it, so he's sticking with being miffed at the teen for not taking his advice about the go-go gig. He is genuinely annoyed with Justin for that, as well as worried about what might happen.

Our readers are very likely to hear more about BOB. :D Did your screen fog over when you read that final scene?

Your English is great, and we're made up by long comments. :)

We're working on the next chapter now.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star
Date: Aug 20, 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Tuesday, November 21st

What a great morning Justin is  blushing and Vic and harley are very funny !

Brian Cynthia and Ted are ready with Mélanie to fignt  Ryder Yeah !

I hope that Jennifer changes her mind soon !

Thanks for the wonderful update, finishing with Justin and Bob LOL 



Author's Response:

We're chuffed you enjoyed the humor between Justin, Vic, and Harley. The Harley-Vic team is definitely ahead if they're keeping score. :D

You're the second person to comment on the team backing Brian against Ryder. You're right - Ryder will likely rue the day he decided to terminate Brian.

We haven't given up on Jennifer, but, sadly, she has probably irreparably damaged the mother-son bond that used to exist between her and Justin. We do hope she comes to her senses soon, so she and Justin can at least be friends.

Our favorite blond and Bob - we seem to have a recurring theme. :D

Thanks for commenting again, Marie-france. It's much appreciated. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star
Date: Aug 23, 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Wednesday, November 22nd

An amazing chapter ! Mel made a kickass work for Brian !

I'm laughting about Brian and justin with Gus like parents !!! And Brian misses Justin when there 2 are back together ?

Please Brian had to forgive Justin even it's not him who did not put the alarm right ??? Carl must find something !

Thank you for the update.



Author's Response:

Mel is one incredible, kickass attorney. Brian is darned lucky she's on his side. They'll undoubtedly return to their usual bickering soon, lol.

Brynn is taking a bow for Brian's observation that he and Justin are acting like a divorced couple. :D

We know all you cheeky readers want Brian and Justin back togehter - right now, dammit! :D We're trying to nudge them in that direction, and they may be starting to listen. Keep in mind that the story is 'slow burn' and that less than three weeks have elapsed since the burglary.

Carl and Wen are investigating the robbery, but an investigation is usually painstaking. It takes time to unearth and follow up on all possible leads.

Thank you for leaving another review, Marie-france. We've started working on the next chapter - Thanksgiving has arrived. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star
Date: Sep 15, 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Friday, November 24th

I love this chapter Vic is really very protective and paternal for Justin and even Arthur apparently! Brian is totally fucked hahaha Thank you for the update !



Author's Response:

Your comments made me chuckle Marie-france. :D

Brian may want to work on that fuck-buddy approach of his, lol, but he's having a hard time holding out against our favourite blond.

Thanks for reviewing. :) A teaser for the next chapter is up in the FanDoc.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star
Date: Sep 28, 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Saturday, November 25th

That was an hot sex scene ! Justin needs to sleep ! I like Ted becomming friend with Brian !

Great chapter ! Thank you for the update



Author's Response:

We thought we'd open the chapter with a bang. :D We're chuffed that you enjoyed it, Marie-france.

It's hard to tell when that lack of sleep will catch up with Justin and what will happen then. The lad's definitely burning the candle at both ends.

It's great fun to write Ted and Brian's developing friendship.

Thanks for reviewing. :) We're working on the next chapter now.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star
Date: Oct 02, 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Sunday, November 26th

Emmett and Ted are a good team !

I can't wait for the end of the police invesigation and Brian can apologize to Justin ! Thank you for the update, another great chapter !



Author's Response:

You're the second reader to comment on team Temmet. :) They do work well together. :)

And also the second reader who's trying to speed along the police investigation, while being certain of the outcome. :D Picture Detective Wen regarding you with a stony expression.

We always enjoy your reviews, Marie-france. Thanks for commenting!

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star
Date: Jan 29, 2018 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Thursday, November 30th

i like Brian's staff and DC wow I want a brother like him !!

Michael is cruel but he is Michael Does he really want a 'Mouton Chardonnet" ? Haha drinks just coke and shut up !  

Finally Brian asked Justin to work for him and I like how Justin tells him that he does not have to tell him what to do. Poor Brian again with his right hand !!

Thank you ladies for the update!



Author's Response:

Yay! DC is a hit with you, too. :D Maybe you could borrow Kerri's 'brother' - see her review below. :D

Michael is trying out his version of frenching, hahaha.

Justin's a proud little fucker - he's not going to take any guff from Brian. Too bad the brunet stud didn't phrase his concern about the go-go dancing better - and he calls himself an adman. Tsk, tsk. Maybe his brain fart was caused by overdependence on his right hand. :D

Thanks for the wonderful review, Marie-france! :) A teaser for the next chapter is now availble in FanDoc, if you want to take a peek.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star
Date: Feb 05, 2018 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Friday, December 1st

 Great chapter! Justin really learned from the master for sacarsm and irony! I like to see Brian lost in front of Justin, he wants him so much! And he have to apologize Operation Twat Retrieval really! Well Brian must give the best of himself because now we want some reunification and Justin have to stop dancing ! Hugs ladies !



Author's Response:

Justin is very much Brian's equal. :D He's definitely capable of outsmarting the master. :D

Karynn takes a bow for dreaming up Operation Twat Retrieval. :D That campaign's going to need a lot of fine-tuning before Brian will be able to reel Justin in, however, so don't expect an immediate reunification.

Thanks for another wonderful review, Marie-france! :) Hugs back atcha!

~ KaBrynn