Penname: The SNO Real name: Claire
Member Since: May 09, 2016
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I don't write at all but I read a lot. So, I'm more than happy to have a new site where I hope I can find new wonderful stories or old ones about B&J.


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[Report This] Published: May 05, 2016 Updated: Aug 19, 2022
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Date: Jun 19, 2019 Title: Chapter 14: CHAPTER 14: WHO’S FOOLING WHO?

Thank you for the update Nichelle!

It's not good news when Lindsay or Michael are seeking information about Hobbs.

I can't wait to "see" Lindsay's face when she will discover her inheritance!

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Date: Apr 20, 2020 Title: Chapter 15: CHAPTER 15: DECISIONS

Daphne and Mel? That's a surprising association which should be very spicy. Daphne's "in your face" attitude should be a great change from Lindsay's "in your back" one.

Thank you for the update!

[Report This] Published: May 05, 2016 Updated: Mar 05, 2024
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Date: Jun 01, 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- LOCKED UP

Thank you for this update; it's nice to follow this story.



Author's Response:

Heey Claire!! Thank you for taking this journey with me!

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

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Date: Jun 18, 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9- CARVING A NEW PATH

Wow! Dense chapter! Now we know what is the place that only they know.

What a wonderful idea of escape! In more ways than one: the reunification is starting well.

And Michael, as stupid as ever, spitting his version of Justin's and Brian's show. What good could get out of that? Maybe Brian finally pushing Michael out of his life forever?

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Date: Jun 18, 2016 Title: Chapter 10: SIDEBAR CHAPTER ONE- Preparing for Battle

What a delight! I love how Melanie is building the case and how she's going to nail the people involved.

Can't wait for more, as you know.

Thank you for the update!

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Date: Aug 29, 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10- THE RETURN

Let's hope that pottery wheel will get us a "Ghost scene" with Brian as Patrick and Justin as Demi. That was super hot (not that they can't be hot by themselves; they sure know how to make the heat peaks high).

Brian and Justin's dynamic is really shaping up: the looks, the touches, ...

Cynthia and Ben lunch was very informative for Ben; maybe, he will be more attentive to Michael behaviour next time, and ask some more questions.

David and Deb meeting was also very informative: new she has no reason to protect her cruel and blind, selfish, idiotic and irresponsible son.

So, George and Justin are related and from very high rank in the WASP world; that might lead to some interesting plots.

Jennifer and Lindsey: what a delight to have a WASP battle without a drop of blood; Jennifer knows just where to poke to make it very hurtful; take that Lindsey and try to think for once.

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Date: Aug 29, 2016 Title: Chapter 12: SIDEBAR CHAPTER TWO: NEW FRIENDS AND OLD FOES

Melanie's old love interest is back in her life... and that's not Leda; at least, she has potential replacement for her WASPy bitch. Someone who will understand her commitment.

Daphne, as always, is very lovable and honest. She needs to see her friend and I guess he also needs to see her.

Thank you for the update!

Hope to read some more on this one and/or on some of your other stories.

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Date: Feb 28, 2017 Title: Chapter 13: SIDEBAR CHAPTER THREE: The PINCH HITTER

Oh, goodie! A new chapter for this amazing story.

What a testimony! Passionate, straight to the point, strong and detailed from a straight student, smarter than Justin.  That should help the case.

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Date: Mar 05, 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 11: RECOGNITION, Tantrums and T-R-O-U-B-L-E with a Capital T

Oh, this is excellent!!!! Ted blowing a gasket, Cynthia verbally bashing Vanguard.

We also discover what Michael told Bellweather and why Bellweather is after Brian and Justin.

Finally, Debbie shocking hers "sons" with her sexual life.

Yeah, the best is yet to come. Bring it on Nichelle!

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Date: Apr 10, 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 12: DISCLOSURE

One step forward and ten backward! How Deb dares yelling in the loft and slapping Brian for reacting to her son's bullshit! Argh, come on, give them a break, Deb! It's your fault if Michael is this mean and stupid. Go away and don't come back. They don't need you.

At least, there is one positive fact: Mel acknowledged Brian for what he actually is; a good and sensitive guy, not the asshole too many people think he is.

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Date: Sep 16, 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 13: PROGRESS Part 1

When I saw the new chapter I checked where I stopped commenting and it seems I missed the last 2 chapters, which is a pity as it's a great one: Craig being punched and kicked down!

It's also the birth of Kinnetik and the rebirth of Justin (at least, the beginning).

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Date: Sep 16, 2017 Title: Chapter 17: SIDEBAR CHAPTER FOUR: JUSTIN HAD IT RIGHT Part 1

What a good laugh at the end! I could only imagine this bigot working at the Big Q!

The rest of the chapter is full of revelations, scary facts. It's great that they have affidavits to backup what Justin has to endure and that the court couldn't trust without witness' confirmations.

The positive thing is that Mel might have a second chance with the DA.

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Date: Sep 16, 2017 Title: Chapter 18: SIDEBAR CHAPTER FIVE: JUSTIN HAD IT RIGHT Part 2

Whoa! Bravo Shavonne! That was a master entrapment and Dixon felt straight into it. What a nasty person. I hope he will find some horny Bubba very soon!

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Date: Sep 17, 2017 Title: Chapter 19: CHAPTER 14: PROGRESS Part 2

Apart from the beginning with Lindsey, this is a positive, life-affirming chapter. The sun is starting to rise on Liberty Avenue.

Brian has brilliant ideas to get Justin out of the loft, even one that "sacrifices" his really protected ass.

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Date: Jan 17, 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 15: WORDS VERSUS ACTIONS

Amazing chapter! So happy they took this step.

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Date: Jan 22, 2018 Title: Chapter 22: SIDEBAR CHAPTER SEVEN: STOMPING WITH THE BIG DOGS Part 1: WHEN A PINSCHER BECOMES A POODLE

What a chapter!

So many things I loved: the "Assholitis", Cynthia's testimony, Jennifer and Brian, the way the judge put Hobbs Sr in his place.

The stress with Chris in the restroom: I bet Craig called Chris to ask him to threaten Justin and his call was tracked.

Can't wait for the next part!

Happy writing!

 

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Date: Jan 23, 2018 Title: Chapter 23: SIDEBAR CHAPTER EIGHT: STOMPING WITH THE BIG DOGS: WHEN A PINSCHER BECOMES A POODLE Part 2

Great chapter! We learn a lot about Cynthia/Justin relationship and about Jennifer.

Thank you for the super fast update!

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Date: Jan 24, 2018 Title: Chapter 24: SIDEBAR CHAPTER NINE: STOMPING WITH THE BIG DOGS: CATCHING SPIKE and TYKE

Justin is very feisty and even with a huge emotional part, he is still strong.

What a nightmare he had to live and reading what actually happened behind his back at home, at school and in the WASP world, it's another trauma; but for this one, he is not alone.



Author's Response:

Hey Claire!

I can honestly say that I was so proud of the way Justin handled himself here. He told the truth, no matter how it made him look to others, and yet still defended himself and his right to live as he sees fit. To face all of the machinations and hatred happening behind his back and still be able to not ho 'postal' takes a very emotionally strong person. Of course, Justin doesn't see himself that way because of all that's happened, but I think that he's learning. I've always believed that kind of character and strength of will is ingrained on a person's DNA and it's my honor to show Justin in this type of light.

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

Hey Claire!

I can honestly say that I was so proud of the way Justin handled himself here. He told the truth, no matter how it made him look to others, and yet still defended himself and his right to live as he sees fit. To face all of the machinations and hatred happening behind his back and still be able to not ho 'postal' takes a very emotionally strong person. Of course, Justin doesn't see himself that way because of all that's happened, but I think that he's learning. I've always believed that kind of character and strength of will is ingrained on a person's DNA and it's my honor to show Justin in this type of light.

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

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Date: Jan 25, 2018 Title: Chapter 25: SIDEBAR CHAPTER TEN: STOMPING WITH THE BIG DOGS: CATCHING SPIKE and TYKE Part 2

I love how Brian is fact based and as usual cuts through the attorney's BS.

Is Brian going to talk about his visits at the hospital?



Author's Response:

Hey Claire!

I'm so glad that you are enjoying this. I'm not sure that Brian will be called back to the stand at this point to talk about his visits to the hospital. Since Justin's stay at AGH and his recovery afterwards deviates significantly from canon, it's pretty common knowledge that Brian has been there throughout. A large part of this particular territory was covered within Jennifer's testimony regarding Justin's power of attorney. Also, Brian's display of lost temper and subsequent answering of medical questions put the depth his involvement into perspective for all within the courtroom.

He might be called back to the stand, based on the testimonies of Spike and Tyke to refute some claims. I'm hoping to spare him that trauma as the author, but honey, these characters have developed a mind of their own. LOL

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

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Date: Feb 01, 2018 Title: Chapter 26: SIDEBAR CHAPTER ELEVEN: STOMPING WITH THE BIG DOGS CATCHING SPIKE and TYKE Part 3: Tyke’s Barking Loudly but…

Very interesting point of view about Chris' actual motives to hurt Justin. He is so disgusting in the way he talks about women/girls/gays.

It great that the Hobbs and Virginia are banned form the country club: what a social descent into hell.

What is the mail Mel received about? Is it linked to Justin's case?

Amazing chapter!

Happy writing!

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Date: Feb 05, 2018 Title: Chapter 27: SIDEBAR CHAPTER TWELVE: STOMPING WITH THE BIG DOGS CATCHING SPIKE and TYKE Part 4: Tyke’s Barking Loudly and…Spike pays for it.

Another great chapter!

Does that mean that the trial is done and that they don't have to face the Hobbs family anytime soon?

What a vipers nest: I'm so glad that the Hobbs and Joan are gone.

Jennifer and Justin were amazing against Joan and Claire.

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Date: Mar 06, 2018 Title: Chapter 28: CHAPTER 16: HEAD IN THE CLOUDS…

George and Brian were in great mood to clash the bigots.

Justin is planning his future and Emmett is very surprising: a very smart queen.

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Date: Mar 26, 2018 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 17: I KEEP ON FALLING...

WASP 101 is back firing and Lindsay is arrested: she's on the slippery slope. With the way she was brought up, this is quite expected. I hope Brian will get Gus very soon.

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Date: Apr 29, 2018 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 18: THE CAT'S IN THE CRADLE...AND OUT OF THE BAG

So relieved that Gus is well and Brian is able to get him. Great news about Claire being arrested, but where are her kids?

I hope one day Joan will have to face what she did to Brian. Thanks to Vic daring confronting her.

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Date: Apr 29, 2018 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 19: WHEN MAKING A DEAL WITH THE DEVIL...

Lindsey and Gardner together: that meas disaster in preparation.

Nancy out of her home is the best thing Ronald has done in years; why did he wait so long while they were married for more than 25 years? Lynette is certainly more than 30 years old.