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Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 20, 2019 2:34 pm Title: Chapter 5

Love it

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 19, 2019 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 5

Well, this provided some comic relief.

What Michael heard:

check!

I'm still laughing! I have to tell you... I was looking for a story on GIH the other day... but alas, they didn't have a "Michael is delusional" category! I suppose there are just too many to list! LOL...

And I'm so happy your Brian has a clue! Hmm... maybe a call should go into the Big Q about Michael lying... ah-ha! Maybe he needs a note from his doctor to get excused and be paid! I worked at a hotel one time like that.

Well, keep up the good work!

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2019 8:12 am Title: Chapter 5

So fun to see Michael's brain!

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2019 6:38 am Title: Chapter 5

I'm glad you explained a little about how Michael's brain works. TED can be such a bitch.

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2019 2:10 am Title: Chapter 5

Omg!!! Lmao!!! This is genius!!! You go Lori!!!! A ten isn’t high enough!!!!!

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2019 1:55 am Title: Chapter 5

OMG!!! You got that selecive hearing of Michael's down pat! Really had a good laugh at this chapter. No doubt Michael will be waiting at the Diner, wagging his tail like a puppy about to pee himself until reality sets in that Brian is NOT going to be waltzing through the tulips with his idiotic ass. LMAOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Yep, Can't wait!! 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2019 12:34 am Title: Chapter 5

Someone need to set Mikey down and explain the real world to him.  Sadly it probably wouldn't help.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2019 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 5

Great update.  Love the Michael's point of view against reality.  Fantastic writing.  By the way, I really dislike Mikey and Linds.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2019 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 5

Being inside Michael's head made my IQ drop!!

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