Date: Dec 03, 2020 6:02 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh Brian...I can't even put myself in his position. I can't imagine it, it's too hard! Oh Eric...he was one of my favorite new original characters. Makes for great story but so so sad....Brian is gonna really gonna lose it someday...
Date: Nov 21, 2020 2:10 am Title: Chapter 3
such hear twrenching moments. Its almot like Duncan and Lily are like twins separated at birth, but they aren't. They have an amazing connection. Update soon.
Date: Nov 21, 2020 12:12 am Title: Chapter 3
Ok, third chapter, third tissue! This is getting extreme! Seriously though, this is exactly how I expected Brian to respond. 'I don't deserve to be comforted', is typical Kinney, and getting through this is going to be long and painful for him, even more than it would be for us regular folks who don't assume that all the wrongs in the word lay at our feet and are our fault.
i can't imagne the depth of his pain at the moment, and he won't even allow himself the luxury of working throug his grief, because he doesn't feel enititled to it. He will punish himself further by his refusal to deal. Oh Brian!
[Report This]Date: Nov 20, 2020 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 3
It's so sad. I only hope Justin and Emmett will be around to help him.
Date: Nov 20, 2020 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 3
Your breaking my heart here. I know this is just a story but you made us love them for real. When you can make your readers cry real tears you know you have done a great job.
[Report This]Date: Nov 20, 2020 5:27 pm Title: Chapter 3
God, what can I say? So heartbreaking! I hope you can keep updating like this. You are doing a fantastic job!