Date: Jul 27, 2016 6:53 pm Title: Chapter 17: A CALL TO CHARM Part 2
Patiently (not) waiting for more!!!
Date: Jul 25, 2016 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 17: A CALL TO CHARM Part 2
Woah......I seem to say that alot in these fics of yours. That and Holy shitballs! both of which are pretty precise!
michael adn Lindsey are in so much trouble! both are digging themselves early graves. figuratively and perhaps even literally. this need for revenge is going to have Lindsey in a whole heap of trouble. she's completely over the top! Her dad...I dunno about him. You make him seem like he may be havingsecond thoughts, but will he ever really do the right thing or will he go down with the perverbial ship with Craig and Stockwell? the brithers....well...they are going to come to a dire end I'm sure. (I have upmost faith in you!!)
Ethan...well now. He's one that's also causing too many problems for himself.
Glad they have Mel on their side in this. She's not going to let anything happen to our boys. Thank goodness she overheard everything in teh last update! She'll be a few steps ahead of those who are causing all teh problems.
William is finally really seeing Justin for who he is. Not a threat to him at all. that everything that justin has gone through, while he may not know what it is, recognizes that it's been dire. That alone seems to have him respecting justin. Seems to have a deeper understanding of all the crap Justin has gone through.
I have so much fun reading adn re-reading all your fics. alwyas such a thrill. I find I need to read each update a couple of times just to make sure I get all of it engrained. That I catch all the nuances. fuck me you are just so talented. I'm always trying to figure out which one I prefer. I can never really tell. with each update on each fic, I deem that one my faveorite. lol.
Love that you share your incredible talent with us! It's apriveledge to read them.
cheers my friend and I'm waiting for teh next one!
Hugs.
Elaine
Date: Jul 24, 2016 4:03 am Title: Chapter 17: A CALL TO CHARM Part 2
Yay! Finally caught up - this is such a complex story I had to go back and read it all over from the beginning. Glad that they stopped Lindsey from getting to the sperm sample. Eek - that would have been a disaster. And Michaels off to jail, good for him. Now what? TAG
Date: Jul 23, 2016 4:57 pm Title: Chapter 17: A CALL TO CHARM Part 2
Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! This is amazing.
You are building a complex plot with devious and dumb people and you put in some humor to ease the tension.
I loved "There were many MANY times that I caught Nancy with a mouthful of pussy during our early years of marriage. Who knows? She may still muff-dive every once in awhile". It's hilarious remembering how tight Nancy looked like in the series.
Like mother like daughter: what a nightmare they are these two.
As for Michael, he is in deep shit and haven't realized it; if he ever does.
I hope that William will keep his word and will keep his video for himself.
And Eck, Ian, Ethan...Ethan...ETHAN!! (loved that too!) or whatever, I'm quite sure he is going right into the net of the devils; too bad but too dumb!
Date: Jul 23, 2016 7:18 am Title: Chapter 17: A CALL TO CHARM Part 2
Okay, so now the chin rat is going to try to make trouble? And what did Michael really think he was going to accomplish by showing Brian that photo album other than pissing him off? Things are getting deep...and Lindsay is more vicious than I thought.

Date: Jul 23, 2016 4:52 am Title: Chapter 17: A CALL TO CHARM Part 2
Happy, happy, happy to see more on this. Keep up the good work. Ethan, hopefully, will piss off Brandon and Connor and we know what happens to people who do that. Wainwright appears to be having a change of heart. Hope so. Lindsay is broke, broke, broke. But like a snake, you don't know when or where she'll strike. Got to laugh at Mikey, being accused of stealing. Unbelievably stupid.

Date: Jul 23, 2016 4:17 am Title: Chapter 17: A CALL TO CHARM Part 2
You packed a lot into one chapter and it was good and well worth the wait.
Not surprised that Michael got arrested I actually smiled because he is an idiot and I knew he wouldn't like that hand he got dealt.
Mel signing her rights back to Brian was brilliant cause it protects Gus from Lindsay (temporarily anyway), them also stopping Lindsay from getting Brian's sperm was a good move too, Mel did a lot of good things this chapter to protect herself, Gus, Brian and Justin.
Some people just have to learn the lesson the hard way Ethan not heeding Brian's warning is on him for being an idiot.
Justin handled Wainwright like a man should he didn't need to bully him he just needed to look him in the eye and explain some of the situation, what Wainwright does with that video is up to him, I hope he will destroy it and just learn to work with Justin, they don't have to be friends but they can find an even ground.
I wonder if Lindsay will be arrested next? I can't believe.... YES I CAN BELIEVE that she would poison Melanie to get her life insurance....What a BITCH!!!
So far two dominoes have fallen will more fall or will the game continue?
Author's Response:
Hey ECH! So glad that you like this chapter! Most of the major players are in place now but this story isn't over YET! Nor has Michael or Lindsay gone away. Without giving anything, I'll just say that there are many more surprises to come for everyone in this story. I'm actually glad that Justin and William got it together. We'll see how long their 'reasonable' peace lasts.
Thanks so much for commenting!! Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle