Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2016 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 17: A CALL TO CHARM Part 2

Woah......I seem to say that alot in these fics of yours. That and  Holy shitballs! both of which are pretty precise!

michael adn Lindsey are in so much trouble! both are digging themselves early graves. figuratively and perhaps even literally. this need for revenge is going to have Lindsey in a whole heap of trouble. she's completely over the top! Her dad...I dunno about him. You make him seem like he may be havingsecond thoughts, but will he ever really do the right thing or will he go down with the perverbial ship with Craig and Stockwell? the brithers....well...they are going to come to a dire end I'm sure. (I have upmost faith in you!!)

Ethan...well now. He's one that's also causing too many problems for himself.

Glad they have Mel on their side in this. She's not going to let anything happen to our boys. Thank goodness she overheard everything in teh last update! She'll be a few steps ahead of those who are causing all teh problems.

William is finally really seeing Justin for who he is. Not a threat to him at all. that everything that justin has gone through, while he may not know what it is, recognizes that it's been dire. That alone seems to have him respecting justin. Seems to have a deeper understanding of all the crap Justin has gone through.

I have so much fun reading adn re-reading all your fics. alwyas such a thrill. I find I need to read each update a couple of times just to make sure I get all of it engrained. That I catch all the nuances. fuck me you are just so talented. I'm always trying to figure out which one I prefer. I can never really tell. with each update on each fic, I deem that one my faveorite. lol.

Love that you share your incredible talent with us! It's apriveledge to read them.

cheers my friend and I'm waiting for teh next one!

Hugs.

Elaine

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2016 4:57 pm Title: Chapter 17: A CALL TO CHARM Part 2

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! This is amazing.

You are building a complex plot with devious and dumb people and you put in some humor to ease the tension.

I loved "There were many MANY times that I caught Nancy with a mouthful of pussy during our early years of marriage. Who knows? She may still muff-dive every once in awhile". It's hilarious remembering how tight Nancy looked like in the series.

Like mother like daughter: what a nightmare they are these two.

As for Michael, he is in deep shit and haven't realized it; if he ever does.

I hope that William will keep his word and will keep his video for himself.

And Eck, Ian, Ethan...Ethan...ETHAN!! (loved that too!) or whatever, I'm quite sure he is going right into the net of the devils; too bad but too dumb!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2016 4:52 am Title: Chapter 17: A CALL TO CHARM Part 2

Happy, happy, happy to see more on this.  Keep up the good work.  Ethan, hopefully, will piss off Brandon and Connor and we know what happens to people who do that.  Wainwright appears to be having a change of heart.  Hope so.  Lindsay is broke, broke, broke.  But like a snake, you don't know when or where she'll strike.  Got to laugh at Mikey, being accused of stealing.  Unbelievably stupid.