Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2025 6:57 pm Title: Chapter 9

Michael is Mr. Dunce. Ben can lie to Justin and the guys, because I don't believe he doesn't harbor some feelings or Justin. Mel... why hasn;t she just tell Michael that the problem stemmed from her and not Brian? That's kind of the chicken way out.

Can't wait to see what awaits them at Debbie's.

 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2025 6:01 pm Title: Chapter 7

It's interesting to know how nobody was aware that Brian was told to stay away.

It's amazing how Brian and Justin are the same as each other. Scared of relationships. Maybe being around Gus for the summer, Justin will understand kids a little more. Granted not babies, but kids in general.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2025 3:20 am Title: Chapter 5

That wasn't as bad as I thought it would be. At least it wasn't a full-on fight. But I wonder why Mel thought calling and telling Michael... SMH...

So Justin going to see the girls turned out to be a positive this time.

I hope everything works out in the long run.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2025 2:23 am Title: Chapter 3

I guess when you have millions, little things like hanging up, walking away, etc... just soften the problems.

Thank goodness Brian didn't get all bent outta shape about Justin being in Toronto.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2025 1:26 am Title: Chapter 1

Already loving this. I think Ben is overstepping his friendship. How can he tell Justin that Brian doesn't want anything to do with Gus? That's so far from the truth.

Maybe Ben is jealous of Brian? Hmm... the shoe is on the other foot.

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2020 11:22 am Title: Chapter 34

did read it again

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 14, 2019 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 11

Go JENN.

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 14, 2019 7:52 pm Title: Chapter 7

I like that Michael got a taste of what it was like for Ben with him obsessing about Brian.

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2018 1:31 am Title: Chapter 34

Love it

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2018 2:49 pm Title: Chapter 34

Very sweet story. Thanks for writing. I’m still in awe at your prolific Brian. TAG

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 19, 2018 5:45 am Title: Chapter 34

That was a very sweet ending. I like how you seem to put the name of your story in the last sentence of them. Other than Claire, this was a great chapter.  I don't know where all the entitlement issues come with Claire, but she needed that knocking off her high horse, which Brian gave her. Claire is too lazy to go to college. College requires a lot of work and dedication, neither of which she has. I noticed she still didn't ask about her boys. I wonder if she has even been to see them.

I loved the name Vivian Victoria. My father's name was Victor, and I would have loved to be given that name. But Nope! My baby sister got it.  Anyway, there wasn't a better way to honor Grandma Vivian, who was a true mother to Justin while growing up. And I loved the little speech Justin gave Molly and Nicholas about what this family's dynamics are now going to be. It would been nice to hear what Baby Vivian looked like. I'll just think lots of blonde hair, and eyes the color of green-with-gold flecks

I'm still trying to figure out what makes women look at Craig and forget the condom.  OMG Deb! Such a classic thing for Deb to think of. But shes correct. So now Craig's went from 16 to a senior citizen. I guess if he can't pussy any other way...  I loved to see what the old bat might do to him, if he should try to creep into another's bed after they're married...

Nicholas:  Do I even need to answer anyone?  Gus:  I just eat.   Justin: Nope. Sounds like Deb's house. If a person doesn't feel like carrying on a conversation, that's the place to go.

I noticed you only have two writing-in-progress stories. Anything else in the works? I'm not sure if you can develop a story from someone else's ideas, but Deb has some AWESOME Plot Bunnies listed. Unless of course, you already have your own thoughts brewing.

Thank you again for writing this and  give us the enjoyment of reading it.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 19, 2018 12:23 am Title: Chapter 34

Vivian Victoria, What A Beautiful Name For A Beautiful Girl!

Nicholas might be able to achieve the unimaginable with Keegan, Brian and Justin found each other so anything is Possible :)

Fantastic Ending!!