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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2017 4:05 am Title: Chapter 79 - Reality Bites the Stupid and Opens the Eyes of the Smart

Lindsay has as much a chance of getting Mel back as Michael has of getting that unfinished hand job from Brian the ship has sailed moron so move along lol

Seemed Nancy was too busy spreading her legs to pay proper attention to what she was signing (Just Like Lindsay and Michael), hope she has something to fall back on because the bank of Ron Peterson is closed and soon Lynnette will be kicking her Ass to the curb.

Just love that Kyle and The Avenue bought Michael's collectables that is really going to make his head explode lol

See Lindsay's charming personality is winning her friends at some point she better learn to shut up before someone beats the Wasp out of her.

Hope Michael is enjoying meeting his new friends too;)

So what do they have planned for Justin and Brian and will it be recorded for posterity? lol 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2017 4:05 am Title: Chapter 79 - Reality Bites the Stupid and Opens the Eyes of the Smart

Wow!  Such an exciting chapter.  

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 06, 2017 9:15 pm Title: Chapter 78 - Oh Brother, Here Come the Grooms Part I and Oh Mother

Yah...Dave's a definite slimeball!! He's up to no good and I'm sure he's going to continue to make his presense known. He seems to think he should be paying Slick back for her previous actions towards him. I really want to see him try!! lol. He has no idea what and who all will be there to stop him and just how far they will go to protect one of their own. Mind you, I get the impression that she doesn't need much protection. She's quite able to look after herself. It's always good to have reinforements though.

slick has her brother back!! Oh yay for her!! 

Michael I don't hink has really faced teh reality of his situation. who does he really expect to pay his restitution? What shock he's going to get when he quite possibly gets that 4 years plus whatever is tacked on.

Lindsey too is getting a few truths handed to her. (as is Nancy hehe) Not only will her folks not pay the resitution, but Martine added a few truths as well to R&N about what their precious daughter has been up to. That Martine told her about Claire, Terez and SAndrine...well...icing on teh cake.

So long Nancy! I see now what Sandrine's husband was referring to before.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 06, 2017 3:36 pm Title: Chapter 78 - Oh Brother, Here Come the Grooms Part I and Oh Mother

The world is crumbling around Lindsey and Michael and there is nothing they can do and somebody they can call. So sad... or not!

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 06, 2017 4:02 am Title: Chapter 78 - Oh Brother, Here Come the Grooms Part I and Oh Mother

Yep. Michael & Lindsey are gonna be in jail for a long, long time. Hehehe. TAG

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 06, 2017 1:36 am Title: Chapter 78 - Oh Brother, Here Come the Grooms Part I and Oh Mother

WOW Slick has reconnected with her Brother who no one knew about, what a perfect way to celebrate a wedding.

David is an idiot who should really get out of Pittsburgh but I don't believe his brain has the capacity for actual thought.

But what I love is the smackdown to Michael, Lindsay and Nancy I have to applaud Hiram for trying to tell Michael the truth about what he and Lindsay are going to face if they go up in front of the same judge.

Martine (love that name btw;)) hitting Lindsay between the eyes about Claire, Terez and Sandrine working against her.

 And Big Ron Peterson serving Nancy divorce papers and walking away from them both with his checkbook still intact.

Hell Hath No Fury Like a Wasp Scorned lol

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 06, 2017 1:05 am Title: Chapter 78 - Oh Brother, Here Come the Grooms Part I and Oh Mother

What wonderful news.  Slick has a brother and he came to Grim and Twinkle's wedding.  Michael and Lindsay now have the company of Lindsay's mother with all of them in the dog house.

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2017 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 78 - Oh Brother, Here Come the Grooms Part I and Oh Mother

Oh the "OH SNAP" moments:

Lionel being Cameron's sub and now is a DOM

Matthais being Slick's brother and being Lionel's sub

The Wonder Twits finding no support from anyone

Ronald divorcing Nancy after announcing about the affair she had with Sandrine's husband.

And Martine spilling the juicy news about Claireand Terez.

 

Loving it!!!!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2017 6:42 pm Title: Chapter 77 - Trouble Crawls Back under that Rock

I swear Michael and Lindsay are Too Stupid To Function Without Supervision they are more concerned about the fact Brian married Justin than about the fact that they could be going back to jail for longer than two months.

If Lindsay's parents help her then they should get to share in her humiliation and ruination.

So David Cameron was the sleaze Slick tossed on his Ass can't wait to see what stupid things he does to get tossed out again though I think everyone is going to have fun tossing Dr. Dave around.

Loved that Grim came to ask Sandrine for Twinkle's hand in marriage that was so sweet.

Looking Forward To More :)

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2017 5:50 pm Title: Chapter 77 - Trouble Crawls Back under that Rock

So David Cameron has arrived in the story now has he?? Hmmmmm, should prove to be intersting. Who is Lionel to him and why the sudden departure when his name was mentioned. curious. Obviously I don't trust him at all. Definitely interested in how involved he's going to become in this.

Typically Michael and Lindsey are more interested in teh fact that Brian and justin are already married rather than the situation they are actually in. will Lindsey's parents actually help her? (hope not) Between Michael and Lindsey, they are their own worst enemies thankfully. They're a bit of comic relief in ways really. they continue to blame each other or pin the blame on slcik or whieve the yso choose at the time, they are bumbling idiots really in all their attempts to undermine the gang and new frinds alike.

Loved how Grim wanted to ask Sandrine officially. so formal and so respectful!

Wonderful update!

Cheers

Elaine

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2017 5:15 pm Title: Chapter 77 - Trouble Crawls Back under that Rock

So, Cameron is the "good" doctor D. I didn't make the connection as Cameron can be a first name too.

I bet he will dream of Justin's red skin for some nights...

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2017 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 77 - Trouble Crawls Back under that Rock

Michael and Lindsay don't seem to realize the seriousness of their charges.  So Dr. Cameron is really friends with Grim?  Not for much longer when the truth comes out.

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 31, 2017 1:41 am Title: Chapter 76 - Getting Married in the Morning...Right?

If a weasel knocks up a bitch, what is the result????  

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2017 6:20 am Title: Chapter 76 - Getting Married in the Morning...Right?

Hahaha. Back to jail. And judges really DON'T like second time offenders. Not at all. TAG

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2017 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 76 - Getting Married in the Morning...Right?

But they REALLY needed to be slapped. Great writing. Love this.

~Lorie

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2017 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 74 - OUT AND ABOUT IN BEVERLY HILLS AND MEANWHILE IN NYC...

Hehehe. Michael is sooooooo f**cked now. TAG

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2017 6:19 pm Title: Chapter 76 - Getting Married in the Morning...Right?

Yeah!!! They go back to jail and are humiliated in front of the Liberty family!

What a slap to their faces; yet, I'm not sure it will be enough with the wicked minds.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2017 5:37 pm Title: Chapter 75 - An Unexpected Assist, Slick vs Brian...and Reality Bites for Lindsay

Oh this is so good! I hope she will get pregnant!

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2017 4:36 pm Title: Chapter 76 - Getting Married in the Morning...Right?

Oh my good gracious: Brian and Justin secretly married. YIHAA!! 

A big thumbs up to Slick for being that much in control of herself. This could have ended up in a big bloody mess. 

Now it's back to jail for Widdle Mickey and Blondy Bitch. Good for them!

I'm still giggling deep down about Mickey trying cosying up to Terez. Is he still a gay man or is he going the bi way? He can certainly think about that in jail. 

The wedding of Twinkle and Grim will be an event to behold. I wish them every happiness in the world.

Eagerly awaiting the next update.

XOXO

Meriam

 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2017 4:35 pm Title: Chapter 76 - Getting Married in the Morning...Right?

Gotta ask...what the hell is up with Michael following Terez around? Is he that desparate for attention? Is he wondering if he may be bi? Am definitely scratching my head on his behavior.

Everyone is so involved in the big scheme! L&M have aboslutely no clue what's about the happen to them. I knew something had to be up when they were allowed to go to the wedding breakfast. I had a feeling it was for Grim and Twinkle. Too obvious for it to be for B&J. BTW...that they got married in Maryland was amazing! Kinda sad we all missed it but really, so them! A perfect way for them to do it.

Finally those 2 are off to jail once again! Am doing a bit of a jig in my office chair atm and I admit to cackling a bit too. 

Oh what a wonderful brilliant and thrilling chapter! I admit that I'll be chomping at the bit to see what else you have in store.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2017 11:44 am Title: Chapter 76 - Getting Married in the Morning...Right?

The end was good.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2017 8:42 am Title: Chapter 76 - Getting Married in the Morning...Right?

Oh this was soooo much fun.  They finally got what they deserve.



Author's Response:

Almost...there's the other New York bit for them to come to terms with...

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2017 5:19 am Title: Chapter 76 - Getting Married in the Morning...Right?

OMGAWD!!! That Was So Worth The Wait!!!

Congrats Brian and Justin for getting married their way.

Ding Dong The Dumbass Duo Are Going Back To Jail!!!!

That is the best gift everyone on Liberty Avenue could ever hope for, Hell it is the best gift that anyone who has ever spent time with Michael and Lindsay could hope for<does happy dance>

I wish Sandrine could have gotten her slap at Lindsay and Slick got to stomp another hole into Michael, but then being embarrassed and arrested in front of everyone at the GLC is a good start.

That was so good I gotta read it again :)

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  There's more from this fallout to come.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2017 8:32 pm Title: Chapter 74 - OUT AND ABOUT IN BEVERLY HILLS AND MEANWHILE IN NYC...

Too bad Michael doesn't remember his night, I bet it would have been "interesting" to know what happened!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2017 7:35 pm Title: Chapter 73 - NEW YORK, NEW YORK...THE DUMBASSES ARE COMING

What did Michael do with the stickers? I hope it didn't look like wounds.

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