Date: Mar 16, 2017 6:49 pm Title: Chapter 50 - Rules, Portrait, Prison 'Break' and Brook Benton*
Wonderful chapter!
Michael gets some "feedback" from his cellmate on his whining and the end is fabulous! The fact that they feel free to have fun in Babylon and the question Justin asked is so right.
Date: Mar 16, 2017 5:10 pm Title: Chapter 49 - Confusion, Cessation and Confession
Michael is hilarious with his tentative of impression of Justin!
If they all go to jail, it could be interesting to see if they meet and how it will go. Lindsey seems reasonable and aware of the situation.
The end made me happy, for both of them.
Date: Mar 16, 2017 2:03 pm Title: Chapter 70 - Decisions, Announcements and Honesty
Just wow
Date: Mar 16, 2017 8:13 am Title: Chapter 70 - Decisions, Announcements and Honesty
OMG I have laughed,got mad and so sad I even had tears for the family. I just started this one yesterday and had a hard time putting it down. Like all your works I got sucked in and did not want to leave. But alas the last chapter posted is all I have. Thank you so much for sharing till next chapter
Date: Mar 16, 2017 3:54 am Title: Chapter 48 - Bad Idea
That's a scene I would have loved to see on TV!
Date: Mar 15, 2017 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Defence
I've just started this and I have a question. Is Michael going to be a complete and utter asshole throughout the whole fic? I like Auntie Michael as much as the next guy but I don't think I could go through so many chapters without any growth from him. So if he's not going to change and all could you please just tell me now? I love your original character Slick! She's so awesome, do you have a picture in your minds eye of what she should look like? I'm love to see a photo!
Author's Response:
Hi Glo, sadly he's going to not grow one bit because he is blinded by jealousy and how much he wants Brian. I hope you continue to read, as this is actually a love story for Brian and Justin, and is funny in places. As for Slick, personality wise a combo of Olivia Pope and Annalise Keating, from Scandal and How to Get Away with Murder respectively, and the sass and temper of Whoopi Goldberg. Looks wise, Halle and Beyonce.
MissMerlot
Date: Mar 15, 2017 7:38 pm Title: Chapter 47 - Hoisted by their own Petard
Lindsey and Michael going to jail: that's excellent! She managed to get money from the comic and Michael didn't see anything, and now he whines because he thinks it has been destroyed...Trouble in "idiot paradise". He dared asking money to his mother! He really has no remorse.
Meanwhile, Justin and Brian deal with tingling oil: I hope that exists! Seems very intriguing.
Date: Mar 15, 2017 6:04 pm Title: Chapter 46 - Cracking
Ha ha ha! Michael can't take the news about Justin being a top and doing it raw!
Poor Gus, having to find out his father has a past.
And Craig photoshopped! He will have nightmares just thinking about what he saw, before becoming Bubba's bride!
Date: Mar 15, 2017 5:40 pm Title: Chapter 45 - Twinkle
Twinkle and Jennifer cracked me up! Him for daring put milkshakes on the Dumb duo's heads and Jennifer for slapping them. This is so unWASP!
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2017 7:46 pm Title: Chapter 69 - Rights, Ripeness and Recognition
oh when Michael finds out what Danny did. I can't wait. Then Lindsay having to pose nude! Now why was Lindsay smiling at Sidney?
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2017 5:44 pm Title: Chapter 69 - Rights, Ripeness and Recognition
OMG!!! I snorted when Catherine compared Terez's body to Lindsay I just loved that she said in front of her class that Lindsay has <giggles> A Sportsman Like Figure <snorts again>
Lindsay has some nerve calling Terez fat when Terez has the kind of figure everyone notices despite their sexual preference, while Lindsay has a figure no one notices despite their sexual preference Hell Lindsay couldn't attract a mosquito in February with her figure lol (I mean ask Michael because when Terez is in the room Michael notices ;))
Did Lindsay really think she was going to teach a class? Bitch Please!!! Who wants to learn from a Has Been who isn't even good enough to be a Never Was??
So happy that Justin is getting all these fantastic opportunities and that Lindsay got to hear them, bet she is overjoyed that Justin will be showing at MoMA?
Divina really knows how to Bitch Slap!!
All that stuff Michael use to own must have cost him Alot to get and will look so nice displayed at both comic book stores lol
I wonder who is going to blow their top worse Michael or Lindsay?
Thank You So Much :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 13, 2017 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 68 - Fawning and Divining
Not surprised Michael would stoop so low to use getting to know his father to get money that man is a waste of skin!!
Just so Happy that Danny got the truth and his revenge on Michael who is going to erupt like Mount Krakatoa when he finds out about his vintage comic books rofl
Lindsay is finding that trying to get back in with her set is hard when you have Michael as your best friend, I suspect she will be getting more lectures from Sandrine before they get to New York.
BTW who is paying for the tickets and hotel rooms for this excursion (If They Go??) since soon Michael won't have his backup account and Lindsay can't have that much money left? (I see Mommy and Daddy Peterson making an appearance?)
This chapter had me in stitches, Thank You So Much:)
Date: Mar 13, 2017 7:16 pm Title: Chapter 68 - Fawning and Divining
Those last 10 lines and especially the final two: The ultimate revenge.
Mickey is going to have a cosmic meltdown to the magnitude of 10 when he finds out where his priceless comics have gone. Way to go Divina!!
And way to go Jenny! The way she dismissed her "daddy". Utter brilliance.
You my dear friend are spinning one heck of a tale. Can hardly wait for the next update.
Off to read the updates to ROTS.
XOXO
Meriam
Date: Mar 13, 2017 6:06 pm Title: Chapter 68 - Fawning and Divining
BAHAHAHAHAHA! OMFG! Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! Oh man...Michael is going to completly lose his shit over losing his comics! Well...I'd say Danny is getting his won back. that was jus teh best revenge!
He's also getting blocked from talking to anyone he wants to speak with at the party. Same wiht Lindsey. Everyone must be just having a grand time with their manipulations!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Mar 13, 2017 5:47 pm Title: Chapter 67 - Bank of Dad and the Sky's the Limit
Sandrine is really pouring it on thick with Lindsey!! LOL. A real chasm is being created between Michael and Lindsey and hopefully it will just continue to become bigger and bigger. The less they depend on each other, the more that they start bickering and becoming devisive towards each other, the better. It's going to happen even faster I would imagine with France and Catherine living there now as well. hehehe! I let the games continue!
All Danny's preconceived notions regarding Michael have obviously burst. Michael really screwed him as well. At least now he knows the truth, and it seems he's going to be taking action.
Oh man, Lindsey and Michael are absolutely seething with jealousy!! Really wondering of Michae lwill be able to keep a lid on it. If not, Lindsey is going lose her shit! would be funny to watch though. Still want them to go to New York though, just so we can see them both go down BIG TIME with all the family there.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Mar 13, 2017 2:38 pm Title: Chapter 68 - Fawning and Divining
Wow! Michaels gonna be sooooooooo pissed off! Lol! Loving this. TAG
Date: Mar 13, 2017 5:09 am Title: Chapter 68 - Fawning and Divining
Ha, Ha Ha.
[Report This]Date: Mar 13, 2017 4:50 am Title: Chapter 67 - Bank of Dad and the Sky's the Limit
It's good that Danny now knows the truth about his son. So what devilment do you have planned for Lindsay and Michael?
[Report This]Date: Mar 13, 2017 4:25 am Title: Chapter 68 - Fawning and Divining
Darn, I thought Lindsay and Michael were going to be homeless. Ah well. So Danny gave away Michael's comics. Now that's justice.
[Report This]Date: Mar 12, 2017 7:35 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Unwanted/Wanted
Ooooo! Now Brian will know how to walk like a bottom! Lol! Go, Justin! TAG
Date: Mar 12, 2017 7:40 am Title: Chapter 44 - Resolution and Realisation
Yes, they sacrificed, like a lot of sheets and rug!!! Justin is so funny.
Date: Mar 12, 2017 7:24 am Title: Chapter 43 - Talking and Coventry
Deb is really strong and can't let her son rule the world.
Slick can read Brian like an open book.
Date: Mar 12, 2017 6:40 am Title: Chapter 2 - Faint
That was fast! Lol. TAG
[Report This]Date: Mar 12, 2017 6:29 am Title: Chapter 1 - Cold
Finally getting a chance to start on this epic. Love the way it begins - Justin puking on Brian! Lol. TAG
Date: Mar 12, 2017 5:22 am Title: Chapter 66 - Pot-Stirrers over Pot-Stickers
Got stomachache from laughing😅😅so loving this story...