Date: Feb 16, 2017 9:38 pm Title: Chapter 53 - Apology, Notice, Trouble and Surprises
Michael should consider himself extremely lucky. He got off easy with Grim and the rest. At least Lindsey understood the possible ramifications and warned him. He didn't listen or understand mind you. His mouth is bigger than his brain as usual. Naturally he tries to get to Brian. His level of stupidity is something that legends are made of. (grateful for it as it's just so freaking amusing!) Slick is finally able to kick them out. Now where are they going to live I wonder...perhaps a hostel somewhere? Perhaps in Greenland? ;) I guess that money is from the sale of the comic. Loved Slicks reaction...that will be a great source of amusement for everyone I'm sure.
Grim's evening for Twinkle was adorable!! and teh proposal..so heart warning. Big tough guy on teh outside, a big mound of fluff in the inside when it comes to his Twinkle. Like I said, Michael got of lucky!
cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2017 9:30 pm Title: Chapter 53 - Apology, Notice, Trouble and Surprises
Michael's mouth is writing a check Lindsay's flat Ass can't cash, they both got off lucky with Grim and all he wanted was just a written apology cause he could have gotten them sent back to prison for that threat against Twinkle, Michael must miss the swirlies because he obviously wants to get sent back.
Lindsay must think Slick is an idiot!
No way in Hell is she leaving her info for Lindsay to snoop through and use whatever the mood hits her, Lindsay should be more worried about Brian's anger and how much money she has left?
Slick is waiting for just the right moment to let Michael know what Lindsay did with his comic book that reveal is going to be Hilarious!
Grim and Twinkle are getting Married!! I am so happy for them!
Brian really does know Slick well now she and Daphne will look just as good as the grooms lol
The next should be very interesting :)
Date: Feb 16, 2017 3:40 am Title: Chapter 52 - Brandon Does What?!
Aaàah the boys are so sweet..Can't wait for the wedding though...
So Brandon knows what's been happening to the whiny brat and has the guts to bragged about which is what he's telling Twinkle is a lie...Served them right being thrown out from the diner..And Lindsay,what the heck she has the nerve to tell Sidney what to do,it must be a slap what answer she got...
Brandon why he's so caring about Twinkle,with holding hands no less?Is just supporting Twinkle or maybe he likes him?hhhhmmmm? ???
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2017 2:49 am Title: Chapter 52 - Brandon Does What?!
Lindsay was stupid to walk into Sydney's office and tell him how to do his job, Sydney has more experience than her, can spot real talent when he sees it and she is now on his Shit List.
Michael should really run cause Grim is going to break him in half! NO ONE THREATENS OR INSULTS TWINKLE!!!
And Lindsay should get in trouble to for simply standing there and going along with Michael.
Michael trying to act like he is some hardened criminal (Two months in prison getting swirly does not mean he can cap somebody, more like drop.the gun like Freddo rofl)with Twinkle thankfully Brandon was there to set the record straight and along with Emmett they were able to protect Twinkle until Grim and Deb showed up.
Looks like they will be banned again and liberty Avenue will be going back to the Coventry Treatment.
Michael and Lindsay are still acting like they know Brian and are his Best Friends, the notice in the paper will send both of them into spasms of denial.
I wonder if Lindsay will try to get Sydney to showcase some of her work? (Though I think he threw her some shade about her lack of talent??)
I hope Justin gets a lot of praise and it chaffs Lindsay's Ass lol
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2017 1:48 am Title: Chapter 52 - Brandon Does What?!
Justin's doing well in New York. Michael not so much. His being mean to Twinkle is bad. Just throwing him out of the diner is not good enough. Can't wait to see what color suit Slick's going with. Lindsay thought she could convince Sydney to withdraw Justin from his showing? Not going to happen. Looking forward to your plans for her as well.
Date: Feb 15, 2017 8:00 pm Title: Chapter 51 - Permission, Celebration and Disclosure
Giggling imagining Brian's face when Justin stated they couldn't share a bed for 1 night. also at Deb's misunderstanding. LOL. both were hilarious in my own mind.
Michael and Lindsey's misfortunes in prison are equally amusing. Micheal getting a swirly! BAHAHAHA! Love it. Not surprised mind you, but I kind of expected worse things to happen in all honesty. His mouth really doesn't do him any favours. and Lindsey...well, she apparently has a friend in her cell, but apparently won't be getting any action now. Again, another BAHAHAHA moment.
Upon their discharge, it seems Michael has learned abosolutely nothing. Still expects others to cater to his whims. his reaction over discovering B&J's engagement wasn't surprising, and we can assume he will once more perate his mother for giving her blessing. I guess we'll have to wait and see if he tries anything. Wouldn't put it passed him to try to interfere, but, I must admit, it would make for entertaining reading! LOL.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Feb 15, 2017 2:10 pm Title: Chapter 51 - Permission, Celebration and Disclosure
From where i was sitting i can hear Michael's shreik and it hurts on my ear😣😣and also Lindsay i want to slap her left and right..
Glad for the boys to finally making it official and Justin's show is just a perfect wedding gift..
Great chapter as usual,loved itðŸ˜ðŸ˜
Date: Feb 15, 2017 5:22 am Title: Chapter 51 - Permission, Celebration and Disclosure
Couldn't they have been abused a little more, they deserve it?
Date: Feb 15, 2017 5:17 am Title: Chapter 51 - Permission, Celebration and Disclosure
Couldn't they have been abused a little more, they deserve it?
Author's Response:
It's coming....
[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2017 5:16 am Title: Chapter 51 - Permission, Celebration and Disclosure
They never seem to learn. What exactly did they expect?
[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2017 4:58 am Title: Chapter 51 - Permission, Celebration and Disclosure
Everything is looking up for Brian and Justin they are going to enjoy being away from the Whiny Twins at least for a few days, Justin is going to have a great show in New York and that will drive Lindsay crazy.
Two months in jail and Michael is even more of a self-absorbed Ass someone really should have broken his jaw so his mouth could be wired shut.
Lindsay is looking to get Brian focused on her again by using Gus (again) she has a better chance of getting groped by Michael (Ewww, Brain Bleach!!).
Can't wait for her cellmate comes for a visit that is going to be so interesting.
Now what are these two idiots going to do to try to sabotage the wedding and get all of Liberty Avenue to send them running for their lives?
Date: Feb 14, 2017 7:32 pm Title: Chapter 50 - Rules, Portrait, Prison 'Break' and Brook Benton*
Michael and Lindsey are off to jail...finally. Lindsey realizes that she has alot to think about. I was surpirsed her parents said what they did. like they may give her a chance once she's on teh outside again. Will be interesting to seen what decisions she makes. she may think she's in the clear since she assumes she has that money stashed away. Boy!! Can't wait to find out her reation when she gets out!! LOL!! wonder if she'' keep her nose clean or if her sense of superiority will rear it's ugly head once again.
Michael, well, maybe Hiram will be teh one person to teach him the lessons he needs to learn. He's a stubborn idiot, but there's only so many times a person can be slapped/hit before they start to curb their tongue.
Justin proposed!!!!!!!!! that was so sweet and brian didn't hesitate!!! So a wedding will be in the works sometime in teh near future. wondering what the reaction for the bitchy twins will be when they find out. I'm sure Michael will rant enough adn whine enough that he'll have be taught another lesson. hehehe.
wonderful chapter!!!!!!!!!!!
Looking forward to what comes next.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Thanks lovely! So glad you're still reading.
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Feb 13, 2017 3:44 am Title: Chapter 50 - Rules, Portrait, Prison 'Break' and Brook Benton*
The bad guys are all in jail. I think Lindsay will do okay, but once she gets out the money she thinks she has will be gone. Michael is asking for it. Perhaps he'll learn his lesson? Looks like Justin and Brian are getting married and Slick has a wonderful picture of her mother.
Author's Response:
Yes they are indeed. And no he hasn't! More prison tales to come. Snickers evilly....
Date: Feb 13, 2017 3:04 am Title: Chapter 50 - Rules, Portrait, Prison 'Break' and Brook Benton*
Michael.needs more than just a slap.came from Hiram,it would be fun to watch if he pissed off everyone in prison,he could be a laughing stock and punching bag which he totally deserve after all he doesn't think he did something wrong at all..As for Lindsay,good for she she learn to be quite if she doesn't want to get some attention...But can't wait for them to know about Brian and Justin getting married..
Wow that was the sweetest proposal ever,effortlessly but romantic enough..
[Report This]Date: Feb 13, 2017 1:10 am Title: Chapter 50 - Rules, Portrait, Prison 'Break' and Brook Benton*
Lindsay is going to be pissed when she finds out she has no money Mel on the other hand will enjoy her face going all red.
Hiram is just trying to teach Michael to face his delusions but Michael enjoys fantasy island too much, I just loved when he slapped Michael I giggled.
The best part was the ending it got me all teary-eyed because Brian is embracing the fact that love isn't a lie, it gives you the freedom to feel happy, safe, cherished, adored and at peace in one's own skin.
Brian found his happiness and now with Michael and Lindsay out of the picture he can breathe easier knowing that Justin will never break his heart but cherish it every second of every moment they have together. (Getting a bit teary-eyed just writing it lol :))
Michael is already acting up so I wonder how long before Lindsay's diva side comes out?? (She just locked her entitled princess in her room but sooner or later she is going to pick that lock and get out)
One of my favorite chapters :)
Author's Response:
Cried when typing the end. Glad you enjoyed it.
Nicole
Date: Feb 12, 2017 2:18 pm Title: Chapter 49 - Confusion, Cessation and Confession
Aaaah that was sweet....It was so easy for Brian now to say those three little words..ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
[Report This]Date: Feb 12, 2017 3:45 am Title: Chapter 49 - Confusion, Cessation and Confession
It's amazing how much Brian cares about Justin and how stupid Michael is. Gotta love this story.
[Report This]Date: Feb 12, 2017 2:56 am Title: Chapter 49 - Confusion, Cessation and Confession
Michael must be high to think he could pull off looking like Justin, he doesn't have the Ass, class or the jeu de vie to be Justin Taylor, I love that people were making sure Michael bought clothes to continue his humiliation.
Yes They Are Going To Jail!!
Craig had no other choice but to take the deal because Ethan had him by the short and curlies (Ewwww, Brain Bleach Pronto lol), non of them are going to enjoy prison since entitlement princesses don't get special treatment and I doubt Ethan is going to enjoy his time unless Craig is his celibate? lol
The ending was the best part because it was just Brian and Justin expressing their love in each others arms.
Date: Feb 11, 2017 9:31 am Title: Chapter 48 - Bad Idea
Hahahha got stomach ache from.laughing about the coventry's outfit😅really he's so stupid to noticed that everyone around him is laughing to him??and to think that they just like what he's wearing??It must be a slap of what Brandon said who Brian loved tha outfit to be on...
THAT WAS HOT ABOUT WHAT THE BOYS ARE DOING IN THE DANCE FLOOR..ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
[Report This]Date: Feb 10, 2017 2:45 pm Title: Chapter 48 - Bad Idea
Poor Michael. He needs to look in a mirror?
[Report This]Date: Feb 10, 2017 5:02 am Title: Chapter 48 - Bad Idea
I am glad I wasn't drinking anything or I would be choking!
Coventry tried to pull off Justin's look and made an even bigger spectacle of himself I am sorry everyone wasn't there to see it first hand because the pictures and video won't do it justice but it will ensue laughter.
Michael must be on crack or he banged his head to think he could pull off that look and get Brian to notice, he didn't even see him when he went to the bar to cool down, Brian only sees Justin and no wannabe ex-best friend is going to get Brian to look anywhere else.
I do hope Michael is at the diner tomorrow in another of his Justin attire I am sure everyone will enjoy laughing in his face instead of behind his back roflmao
Just what I needed tonight, Thanks :)
Date: Feb 09, 2017 2:54 pm Title: Chapter 47 - Hoisted by their own Petard
So i guess Lindsay is getting feed up with the whiny brat hah..Well who couldn't..
Date: Feb 09, 2017 5:05 am Title: Chapter 47 - Hoisted by their own Petard
That was brilliant.
[Report This]Date: Feb 09, 2017 2:50 am Title: Chapter 47 - Hoisted by their own Petard
Don't want to be joined with Lindsay but I gotta say I cracked up at Michael crying over his comic book.
I really don't like Lindsay but she got Michael good and the best part is he doesn't even know it.
I was rolling about the fact that they will get two months jail time and 4 years ten months probation, I especially loved that they will be on lock down and house arrest for two weeks.
Now will they make it the next two weeks without getting in more trouble?? (My money is on Hell No!!)
Brian and Justin HOT as always, I am surprised their sheets don't combust when they walk into the room.
They make me want a cigarette and a shower lol
Your Devious Mind Amazes Me :)
Date: Feb 09, 2017 1:40 am Title: Chapter 47 - Hoisted by their own Petard
i am so GLAD I FOUND THIS STORY :)
~~HUGS~~
Teresa
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you did too. Happy reading xx
Nicole