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Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2019 2:36 am Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: BLAME IT ON GOOSE, GOT YOU FEELING LOOSE, BLAME IT ON PATRON, GOT YOU IN THE ZONE, BLAME ON THE ALCOHOL... BUT NOT ON MY MICHAEL!!!

Fantastic update.  So glad everyone is forcing Debbie to see just what she and Michael really are.  Love this story. And, still hoping for my happy ending.  Terrific writing.  Hope all is well with you.

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2019 3:43 am Title: FIRE and ICE: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: TALKING BOOK

Nichelle:

  Evil Evil.  I'm so glad that everyone is in agreement about Michael and his conniving ways, and I'm pleased to see that all of them are going to work together with their partners.  Now, hopefully, they can put a stop to his next level of conniving and manipulating.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2019 4:16 am Title: FIRE and ICE: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: TALKING BOOK

Happy they are going to give Carl the facts. That way he can see if Debbie is on the up and up with him, or if she would try to spin the situation to make it so she comes out looking good. At least we know Carl doesn't like Michael, so he won't fall for the, "I needed to take care of Michael" routine.

Okay, so last we heard from Michael, he had the idea if he searched the net, he could find something to use against Balke and Justin. Apparently he found just enough. But will it ruin them?  And he has made contact with one of the "men" we had to worry about being on the island. Heaven help us if Michael gets an aid (or three) in his madness. I'm still trying to put names to these faces, and haven't came up with anything different. The three I can think of, would be Ethan, Brandon and Kip. Only because they are the villians right now. And Brian isn''t aware of the Kip/Justin fiasco/situation.

Loved the use of Sun Tzu. Michael definitley uses the enemy, or anything else, that will allow him to have control over others. His use of manipulation in the past is not going to work now. So, what better to use the enemy to get what he wants? Which is for Brian, Ted and Em to fall in line and be at his beck and call.

This group has a very long night ahead of them Secrets will be revealed and truths will need to dealt with. It's intersting if Justin doesn't accept that job, lots of people will be out of work. But I think the key here is the director. I think it's someone Justin doesn't want anything to do with. And yes, if Michael gets word back to Tino and company, will Diane be in danger?

Since the guys can't follow Drew's first thought of drowning Michael, maybe they can get him alone somewhere at night and dig away at him with forks and broken pieces of glass. (do I sound like I want the vindictive bastard to suffer?) you can bet your cutie patooties I do!!!

Good Chapter. I'm hoping we see an update on this shortly after your other update is posted. We need to find out how much damage has already been done. Just let ALL these men band together, and fight together. Stronger in numbers, and Michael won't stand a chance.

HUGE HUGS HON,

 ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2019 2:51 am Title: THE WIFE or THE MISTRESS: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: EYES WIDE OPEN

I'M FINALLY READING AND CATCHING UP. I SHOULD ONLY BE BUSY FOR ABOUT THREE DAYS.

Great update here. I agree with option three. Only it would be nice if there was ASSURANCE attached to the fact that Michael won't be able to cause pronlems. Michael is all about "If There's A Will, There's A Way."  And nobody can say he is lacking "will". Look what all he's managed to do so far. Maybe the counsilors should take turns shadowing him for the sake of their patients.

I have to wonder how things are going back in Pittsburgh with Jen, Mel and Diane talking to Deb. I wonder if they will accomplish removing thse rose-colored glasses where her son is concerned. If they don't manage to do so, maybe when Carl leaves her ass, she will finally get the message.

The only positive thing about everyone being back in Pittsburgh, is they will have those three women in their corner. When Diane fires Deb, and neither she nor Michael can get a job anywhere, maybe they will have to MOVE!!

I do worry about those"other men" on the island. When Michael hooks up with them, all hell will break loose. Good thing they have all bonded now, because strengh in numbers just might prove their salvation.

As for the Blake and Ted situation, I'm hoping Ted will be opened-minded regarding the Tino situation. Ted himself, has been having the craving, a way to deal with the stress, so he needs to understand Blake's fears and concerns, and not judge. And yes, god forbid, Michael got ahold of that info. Let's hope these "other men" aren't aware of this.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: justinsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2019 11:25 pm Title: FIRE and ICE: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: TALKING BOOK

I was so happy to see this story updated. Thank you. Waiting patiently? For the next chapter(s).😊💕your stories.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2019 10:23 pm Title: FIRE and ICE: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: TALKING BOOK

What, a new enemy?? Like they need more than Michael & Deb....yikes! I hope the next update will be soon or I'm gonna lose sleep if it's not lol hint hint hahaha

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2019 10:11 pm Title: THE WIFE or THE MISTRESS: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: EYES WIDE OPEN

Well, they all seem to be on the right path but somehow, someway, I know shit for brains Michael will get in touch with Brian, Em & Ted.....

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2019 5:38 pm Title: FIRE and ICE: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: TALKING BOOK

So Cruel To Leave It There!!!

Lucky for I have some patience or I would lock you in a room with Michael and Deb with no ventilation or escape ;)

Warning Carl is a good idea he needs all the facts not Deb and Michael's version of everything so he can make an informed decision to stay or go?

Michael so deserves a beat down along with Deb!!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2019 5:27 pm Title: FIRE and ICE: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: TALKING BOOK

Which ally? On the island or in Pittsburgh?

I hope Carl will manage to trick Debbie into some sort of acknowledgement that she was deadly wrong and that she must stop protecting Michael.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2019 4:43 pm Title: THE WIFE or THE MISTRESS: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: EYES WIDE OPEN

Easy to say (not the talk about Michael and speak your mind) from the counselor POV; I'm not sure it will be easy to follow for the guys.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2019 2:32 pm Title: FIRE and ICE: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: TALKING BOOK

Noooo!  You can't leave us there.  We want to hear what Michael thinks he's got on Blake and Justin.  Not to mention how they counter act his ass.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2019 2:20 pm Title: FIRE and ICE: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: TALKING BOOK

That fucker!

Better get the truths out now.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2019 2:13 pm Title: THE WIFE or THE MISTRESS: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: EYES WIDE OPEN

Now that they know what really needs to be done I'm hopeful it will work oot the way it's suppose to.

Long overdue talk Blake and Ted are about to have. Better now because Blake's right. If Ted heard about Tito from Michael all their hard work would have been for naught.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2019 9:28 am Title: FIRE and ICE: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: TALKING BOOK

Read the last two chapters.  Terrific writing.  Of course, I am always happy when Mikey is in BIG trouble.  So happy for the update.   Can't believe this story is almost two years worth of writing for you.  You must be exhausted having to deal with Mikey for so long.  LOL  Love, love, love your writing.  Hope all is well with you.

Reviewer: bec2224 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2019 9:07 am Title: FIRE and ICE: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: TALKING BOOK

This isn't a flame, I know you have a lot of stories you want to finish up, but since it's months inbetween chapters of this one, (my favorite) I'm just going to wait til it's all finished even if I have to wait a year or too.  It actually ties me out to the point of not wanting to read anymore with all the hits our guys have to take but no relief (Mikey or Debbie punishments even little ones) at all for us, so I'm going to wait til it's finished.

But I am looking forward to that, big time.

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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2019 4:44 am Title: THE WIFE or THE MISTRESS: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: EYES WIDE OPEN

Cutting The Novotnys out of all their lives is a really good start, but sitting and talking to their partners is a Great New Beginning to fixing he problems and healing.

I would rather Michael was out in a boat and sent to the end of the earth with a a bottle of water and sandwich, or sent to a deserted island with Deb and they are never heard from again but that is just me lol

Good to know that when they go home the won't  have to deal with The Avenue defending Deb, they tolerated her for Brian and once she is confronted like Michael (who should leave a week or two after everyone else) they can ignore her too.

Can't Wait For The Next Chapter :)

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2018 2:20 pm Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: WISEST COURSE OF ACTION Part 3: BELL RINGING and BUTTON PUSHING

Love it, please update

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2018 9:22 pm Title: STAYING or GOING CHAPTER 4

never liked Debbie

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2018 3:43 am Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: WISEST COURSE OF ACTION Part 3: BELL RINGING and BUTTON PUSHING

oh my.  Such treachery on the Novotnys side, but we knew that. So glad that all the couples are working on being together again.  I hope Michael is corraled before he can throw another monkey wrench into all the couples lives.  I love the idea of Ben writing and  making his own company.  So glad you updated this story.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2018 3:05 am Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: WISEST COURSE OF ACTION Part 3: BELL RINGING and BUTTON PUSHING

Ooh... I feel special. Two chapters in one day! Thank you so much for that.

Can I have the pleasure of castrating Michael? I remember reading a story once where the author was having this person telling Michael all the different ways she castrated cows when she was younger on her farm. Some of them were pretty gruesome. I could go back and find the one that sounds the most painful, and fully execute it. Though I've never been a farmer, determination to rid a malevolent person of said balls, I think I could find immense pleasure in doing the deed.

So that answered my question of why Michael was in LeMont's and all my subsequent questions of what went on there, but I'm not sure if the questions Blake asked, were actually answered. What was Melanie doing there? And why did you all have that reaction in reference to her being at the restaurant?

Why didn't Brian and Mel check with the hospital and Lindsay's doctors as to how Michael learned what was in Lindsay's medical records? If the doctors realized the cause of their patients condition, they certainly would have had an investigation ongoing at the clinic/hospital. I was actually wondering if Gus had died when you stated Lindsay suffered from toxemia and unknown stress disorder, and Brian swallowed his own tears and left Lindsay and Mel alone so they could grieve for their lost dream. But at the time, Melanie just mused on the fact that Gus was near stillborn. But the rest of it, lead me to believe he didn't make it.

And what the hell? A SAFETY NET????  Michael?  After all the cruel and sadistic things he said and did, NOBODY is worth staying friends with someone like that. Especially allowing them to drive your partner, whom you love, away. Under no circumstance can I atone Brian staying friends with him. Deb or No Deb... Nope, not worth it. Brian had Ted, Emmett and Justin. He DID NOT need Debbie.

Btw, is Lindsay still alive? I'm only asking because Brian said the anxiety disorder she has, and she figured she was going to die.

Melanie must have had a real heart-to-heart with all the counsellors, as none of them appeared surprised by what everyone was talking about.

Absolutely loved this chapter. You gave us a lot to contemplate about.

XOXO ~ Cathy

 

 

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2018 2:08 am Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: WISEST COURSE OF ACTION Part 3: BELL RINGING and BUTTON PUSHING

Wow, Michael really was and still is a shit.

While they're meeting and filling everyone in on the true Devil himself, what is said Devil doing? Is he getting his minions together? Ethan's on the island. Who else? Did he get a hold of Chris Hobbs? How many of Blake's, his old dealer, Justin's, Drew's, snd even Ben's skeletons out of the closet to get them running away?

Did Lindsay, Mel, and Brian ever discuss having another child together?

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2018 11:29 pm Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: WISEST COURSE OF ACTION Part 3: BELL RINGING and BUTTON PUSHING

The second Deb saw Brian as the perfect scapegoat for Michael then the others who came later she lost the right to call any of them The Sons of Her Heart.

Michael is one smart A-Hole when it comes to getting what he wants and hurting others.

They can't hold onto the crutch known as Debra Jane Novotny anymore cause if she was given the choice to save Michael or one of her lost boys, she would mow them down to protect her baby.

Now Michael would mow his own mother down if it meant everyone would focus on him.

An innocent child died because Michael didn't want his favorite toy focus on someone else.

Deb taught Michael well and now he...they need to understand that once the ties are severed not even God himself can mend it.

They will be expecting anger, silent treatment then after a week or two all is forgiven and the status quo remains the same.

Melanie is giving Brian, Ted and Emmett a chance to see Michael and Deb for who they really are, and to stop letting them yank on the chain they were shackled with for being allowed near Michael.

Blake, Drew and Justin could see through Michael's machinations because they refused to bow under Deb's bullying or Michael's whining.

Now that eyes are being opened and ears are finally hearing then the talk everyone needs to have with their partners she be very interesting.

Love Getting Another Update :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2018 8:55 pm Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: WISEST COURSE OF ACTION Part 3: BELL RINGING and BUTTON PUSHING

Whoa! That's a huge horrible information about Gus and Lindsay.

I'm not sure I understand their reaction about Mel being in the restaurant. Maybe I should read that part again at the beginning of this story.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2018 8:31 pm Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: WISEST COURSE OF ACTION Part 3: BELL RINGING and BUTTON PUSHING

Wow, another fantastic chapter.  You really threw a curve announcing that Gus had died.  Wonderful story.  Terrific writing.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2018 8:09 pm Title: STAYING OR GOING: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: WISEST COURSE OF ACTION Part 2: INFORMED DECISIONS

Oh that ever-loving jackass that is Michael Novotny! That guy really needs to get a life. Hopefully one far, far, removed from Pittsburgh. Which plane and what day does he depart the island? He better hope soon, because if the guys get a hold of him, they might try and carry out Drew's wish from earlier. Can't quite remember ecactly how he said it, but wasn't there something about throwing him in the water? Maybe he will become shark bait.  Are the guys all gonna get to read those phone messages? I really think they should. That way they can understand the full extent of why their partners were pissed beyond belief. 

First, how was Michael able to afford LeMont's, and just what kind of scene was he displaying in the restaurant, and WHY?  Who was all in attendance for this scene that played out? I'd love to know ALL of what Melanie heard. Is it because of This action, that caused Melanie to put them all in therapy? Although I know it was suppose to be some public altercation, we don't know what happened there, either.

BTW... I want a front row seat when those guys all have a group session where they can confront Michael, with the counsellors present, with the printed out messages, and see how he's able to explain his actions. He won't be able to lie, and he will know they all know the truth about him. Let him go back to the Pitts, knowing everybody hates him. Then when he gets home, and finds he doesn't have a home. hehe...  We haven't heard from Debbie yet. I have to wonder how long before Michael's stuff shows up at her house. Mommy is going to be calling her mollycoddled child when that happens.

It was so nice to see this updated today. looking forward to the next one.

XOXO ~ Cathy

 

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