[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2021 11:38 am Title: Let's Party...Part 2
Oh Criiminy sakes! I decided I was up to a little more reading today, and just read this! Then I had to compose myself before leaving the review, as I was laughing so hard! That was pure classic!!! And it was written so well, the whole visual was possible!
Hugs,
Cathy
Date: Jul 26, 2020 1:52 am Title: Let's Party...Part 2
Is it awful that I love the pinata part everytime I read this story? Ha Ha!!
Liz
Author's Response:
Nope...I was in hysterics whilst typing!
MissMerlot
Date: Nov 24, 2017 9:30 am Title: Let's Party...Part 2
Poor little girl. She must be traumatized.
Date: Nov 07, 2017 2:48 pm Title: Let's Party...Part 2
Omg I never thought I'd get to a spot where I have to wait for the next chapter. This is so good. Keep writing!!! AWESOME JOB!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I've only been writing for just over a year and love it. Glad you are enjoying it.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Aug 27, 2017 10:01 pm Title: Let's Party...Part 2
OMG!! OM Freaking G!!
THE biggest bravo to little Rebacce. Way to go girl!!!
I expected a punch in the stomach or a blow to the shoulder but a "grand slam" in the nuts was the cherry on the cake.
Gives an entire new meaning to having blue balls. Guess he won't be sitting down comfortably for a couple of days.
Thank you for this chapter. I came to me at exactly the right moment.
Off to read some more.
XOXO
Meriam
[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2017 6:48 pm Title: Let's Party...Part 2
Oh Man I thought it was funny Ray and Michael being on trash duty but Michael getting hit in the nuts had me rolling!!!
He so deserved that for everything he has done to try to suck the life out of Brian (Ewww, Sorry I put that out there) and everyone else.
Brian did try to help him be a success but a usual he abused it by treating Brian like an ATM with an endless surplus of cash.
Brian and everyone else work hard to be successful while Michael expects everything to be handed to him on a gold platter, as he lays on a silk draped chaise reading comics and being constantly praised by his loyal subjects. (See why Michael, Raymond and Lindsay are siblings separated at birth)
I am so proud at Rebecca she gave Michael exactly what he deserved, plus that girl would make one Hell of a softball player! ;)
Veri having Michael drenched with ice cold water was Perfection!
Now Peace can Reign cause the whiny twerp is out cold rofl
Fantastic Updates!! <hugs>
Author's Response:
Hiya,
Thanks! I had tears of laughter streaming down face when I typed it. And thanks for the image of Michael on a chaise...at least tell me he'd be dressed!
I have given you temporary respite from the whiny twerp but he comes back...like the proverbial bad penny...of course, at full and repellent volume1
Happy reading.
MissMerlot
Date: Aug 11, 2017 4:00 pm Title: Let's Party...Part 2
The end had me laughing really hard! Poor Michael, shot in the nuts and an icy shower!
Date: Aug 11, 2017 2:49 pm Title: Let's Party...Part 2
Very funny ending. Enjoying the story.
lah
[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2017 2:30 pm Title: Let's Party...Part 2
This is the most fun party. Love how Rebecca gets Michael. Great chapter.
Date: Aug 11, 2017 10:05 am Title: Let's Party...Part 2
I can't stop laughing! Go Rebecca!!! She got to do what most of us have wanted to do for a long time.
Gus is so adorable. I know I keep saying that but he truly is. I love that he has a little crush on Justin. He just thinks he's the bestest thing ever. lol
Date: Aug 11, 2017 6:44 am Title: Let's Party...Part 2
That was mean and petty. Please do it again.
Author's Response:
Maybe later...you know should he be allowed to go to the wedding on the island, he could get zapped in the nuts by a jellyfish....
MissMerlot