You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2021 10:38 am Title: It's The End

Oooh, Michael. You are FINISHED. You will be lucky if anyone on the Pitts talks to you, other than saying, 'SHUT THE HEL UP!"

Iloe Cynthia sitting on Brian and Ted puttting his hand over Brian's mouth. He would have blown it if she screeched befpre they got the info.

I really don't think Michael has a prayer of Brian ever forgiving him. He should have hopped on the plane too.

I like that David bought Grady's sister.

HUGS,

Cathy

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2017 10:48 am Title: It's The End

I hope they can make it so Michael is out of their lives once and for all. 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2017 9:01 pm Title: It's The End

AS I mentioned in Taxi, I'm back and had to reread everything to catch up and read the ones I missed. there were several. Dear lordy I missed alot fo things didn't I!! 

Michael...what words can truly describe him. Stupid is a compliment. I can't believe teh lengths he's gone to, and yet he didn't once think of any ramificaitons. He never once thought of what his plans could do to Brian's business. He just wants what he wants and fuck anyone who stands in his way...including brian. I'm sure he knew that brian would catch some shit, but the fact that he could've lost everything never occurred to him. Even if it did, he just figured he'd be there for his "best friend" and be the suportive shoulder. He has absolutely no idea just how far he's taken things and I can't wait for Tuesday!!!!!!!!!!!!

The birthday party was awsome and what happened to Michael was hilarious! I laughed my ass off reading that!! 

Oh waht a great story! Am enjoying both of them so much and am so happy that I finally had the time to read and review. Thank you so much! You made my recent down time most enjoyable!!

cheers

Elaine



Author's Response:

Whoo hoo Elaine's back...I missed you!

So glad you're enjoying this!

Nicole

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2017 3:27 pm Title: It's The End

What a chapter full of angst and some fun too.

I loved "Ted claps his hand over my mouth and Cyn sits on me. But I’m watching Randolph write frantically." That was really funny even if the event wasn't funny at all.

So: Michael and Ray are out and Grady's sister is in! Great news!

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2017 10:32 am Title: It's The End

I hate to see Brian so upset.  I think he's finally done with Michael for good.  I'm glad Justin was there to take care of him.

Grady's sister is home.  I'm sure they'll both get into some mischief soon.

Thanks for the update.

Hugs,
Jessica

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2017 5:33 am Title: It's The End

Why David you old dog you.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2017 5:17 am Title: It's The End

More, More, MORE, PLEASE! I absolutely LOVE this fic!

Deb



Author's Response:

Typing as fast as I can. Thanks again for the PB, I am so enjoying writing this!

Nicole

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2017 4:06 am Title: It's The End

Michael makes Shit look smart!!

He was willing to jeopardize Brian's career and his ability to care for his children just to keep Brian all to himself.

WHAT A FUCKING ASSHOLE!!!

Thank Goodness for Randolph, George and Mel they have got Vance by the balls and planning to squeeze until there is nothing left.

Michael is about to learn that you don't hurt Brian Kinney unless you are prepared to be destroyed, in this game Michael armed himself with a water pistol and what is going to be aimed at him is a cannon and when the smoke clears it ain't going to be pretty.

Maybe he can bunk with Raymond or Lindsay? lol

David is surrounded by new friends, two adorable puppies and a man who leaves him breathless, that's a good start :)



Author's Response:

First line...stolen!

Yeah, he really didn't care that Brian could've been left destitute as long as he had him to himself! Which he still thinks he has a chance of...

Happy reading...or not bleach warning for next chapter.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2017 3:27 am Title: It's The End

Michael doesn't seem to realize he's in the soup.  Love how David takes control of both Grady and his sister.  Too Cute.

You must login (register) to review.