Date: Jan 11, 2022 3:52 pm Title: He Keeps Trying and Cruising to Their New Lives
FINALLY FINISHED!
Mikey, Mikey... greed lost him his best friend and his family. That must be a lonely feeling... but he deserved EVERYTHING that befell him.
Lindsay and Nancy got their comeuppance. Way go to, Ronald.
Very good story!
Cathy
Date: Oct 24, 2021 8:24 am Title: He Keeps Trying and Cruising to Their New Lives
This was a great story!! Its too bad that Michael never learned his lesson. He truly lost out on not only having Brian as a friend, but lost on having his family as well.
Date: Mar 14, 2021 9:58 pm Title: He Keeps Trying and Cruising to Their New Lives
did read it again
Date: Sep 25, 2019 8:31 pm Title: He Keeps Trying and Cruising to Their New Lives
Love it, keep reading it again and agein
Date: Feb 10, 2019 11:18 pm Title: He Keeps Trying and Cruising to Their New Lives
wild story, good one. Loved it
Date: Nov 29, 2017 6:38 pm Title: He Keeps Trying and Cruising to Their New Lives
Awww. A perfect ending. I loved it.
[Report This]Date: Nov 14, 2017 1:07 pm Title: He Keeps Trying and Cruising to Their New Lives
Just read this entire story and couldn’t put it down! Another triumph! Thank for continuing to write your B & J stories. Well I’m off to start reading your new ones! 😘
Date: Oct 30, 2017 3:04 pm Title: He Keeps Trying and Cruising to Their New Lives
I just finished reading your story. I always wait until a story is completed before reading so I wait until the end to leave a review. I absolutely love your work and look forward to reading more of it. You introduce such rich characters into the family. Of course anti Mikey and Lindz is done so purposefully. Thank you for sharing your talents with all of us!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2017 11:47 pm Title: He Keeps Trying and Cruising to Their New Lives
Loved it and the recipes
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Sourcing the recipes did slow the writing down a tad as I stopped to drool...
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 18, 2017 9:15 pm Title: He Keeps Trying and Cruising to Their New Lives
WOW that was a great story and I'm so sorry to see it end.
Thank you for this
Date: Oct 18, 2017 3:49 pm Title: He Keeps Trying and Cruising to Their New Lives
I suppose all good things must eventually come to an end. *sniff*
Sorry for not reviewing previous chapter, I was away for a few days and only had my phone. The bull was...I have no words. I highly doubt that Micheal would ever get the metaphor behind it. I laughed my ass off though.
Christmas with the whole gang, family etc was lovely. Best of all the little shit wasn't there. Amazing how a person can delude himself to such a degree. You'd think after being told point balnk on numerous occassions, he might get it. Not him though, he schemes, manipulates and excuses his actions, or blames others. Sheesh. I wonder if the phone will finally make it click. I some how doubt it for some reason.
What a wonderful life they are all going to have now. Deb, Carl, Vic, Rodney et al at Britin and the others on the ship. *sigh*
All's well that ends well as they say, and this ended well for all. Maybe not in Michael;s eyes, but really...do we care about hsi opinion? ;)
Another WONDERFUL story! Will of course be adding it to my Kindle for future reading.
Thank you!! thank you for sharing this with us. It's such a treat to have deliciously long chapters, in a brilliantly long story that has so much intruigue, angst, passion, laughter etc (I could go on forever)
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Oct 18, 2017 9:57 am Title: He Keeps Trying and Cruising to Their New Lives
Loved this story so much. It's one I will definitely read again. Thanks for all of the wonderful recipe links. :)
Hugs,
Jessica
Date: Oct 18, 2017 9:51 am Title: He Keeps Trying and Cruising to Their New Lives
I knew this day had to come but am definitely going to miss this wonderful story. I thoroughly enjoyed this AU and the myriad of amazing characters you introduced us to. Looking forward to your next offering ☺
Date: Oct 18, 2017 7:23 am Title: He Keeps Trying and Cruising to Their New Lives
Ah I'm so sad it's over 😪But have got to say I loved it, anti Lindsay and anti Michael are my all time favourite to read.... you come up with some very inventive ways to punish them. Can't wait for what you come up with next
Date: Oct 18, 2017 5:04 am Title: He Keeps Trying and Cruising to Their New Lives
I have just finished reading all of this wonderful story. Thank you for sharing it with us and all the time and efert you did to bring it to us. Looking forward to more by you. Till then take care of yourself .
Author's Response:
Oh how I loved writing this one, so glad you enjoyed it.
Take care of yourself too.
Nicole
Date: Oct 18, 2017 3:15 am Title: He Keeps Trying and Cruising to Their New Lives
OMG! This is such an amazing story! You took my tiny little bunny, started writing and we all watched it grow into a story that was at times hilarious, heartbreaking, and even infuriating (yeah I'm glaring at Michael and even Lindsay) but was most of all fun and highly entertaining. This will definitely be saved to my hard drive so that even if my internet is down, I will still be able to read it.
Thank you so much, Nicole.
*HUGS*
Deb
Author's Response:
Deb,
Thank you for the PB...I am so glad that I did you proud!
Big hugs
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2017 3:00 am Title: He Keeps Trying and Cruising to Their New Lives
The End! Noooooo! But what a great ending. Love the phone in the box. Wish Micheal would get a clue, giving Brian 5 years with Justin and 25 % of Kinnetik. How generous of him. A lobodomy is what he needs.
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2017 2:59 am Title: He Keeps Trying and Cruising to Their New Lives
Christmas was Lovely for everyone except the Whiny Baby who just refused to believe the truth. (Why total strangers want to spend Christmas with a whiney baby? They actually want to enjoy their family :))
That stupid idea of his of Brian divorcing Justin after five years and Justin being paid for his services was disgusting and so Michael to come up with such a stupid idea.
He is lucky all he got was hog-tied and some time in a cage because I would've thrown him in the pool lol.
Love the book From Ruby to Gus it was so sweet and beautiful for both of them to share as they get older.
At least they had a way to give everyone enough time to get into Britin and to New York so they could leave, I especially like that Michael now has Brian's phone and Brian is finally free of the viper.
Everyone is happy and the brats were properly punished all and all a good ending to a Fantastic Story.
In a few days I look forward to reading it all over again lol :)
Date: Oct 18, 2017 2:53 am Title: He Keeps Trying and Cruising to Their New Lives
Awesome fic! Can’t wait for your next one ðŸ˜