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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2017 12:40 am Title: Date Day, Fight Night and Being Silly

OMG!  What is Michael up to,  Wonder what would happen if you put him and Ray together.  Dumb and Dumber?  

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2017 6:38 pm Title: Waifs, Straying and Bath Night!

The scene at Macy's was hilarious; what a slap in the head for both mean people.

Here come Daphne and Hunter!

The scenes with Lindsay were so good to read: she so deserved what she got! Leda and the pussy thing was delicious.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2017 5:27 pm Title: Waifs, Straying and Bath Night!

Wow so Sam has Tact! Lindsay is Beyond Repugnant! And Michael didn't ask or mention Brian, What The Hell Is He Up To???? 

Franc is So Awesome!! A Crystal knuckleduster?? Oh I Bet That Left A Mark For Months?

Love the introduction of Daphne and Hunter and that commission is mind-bogging!!!

Brian and Justin are getting more Hotter with each chapter.

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2017 12:57 pm Title: Waifs, Straying and Bath Night!

You've introduced two someones new to this story.  Like how Hunter and Daphne show up.  Then you gave us a Sam I could like and who ever thought I'd say that.  Just what is Michael up to?  Now Brian and Justin are going to have an invigorating time in the bath.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2017 5:48 am Title: Waifs, Straying and Bath Night!

Excellent chapter  ...thank u.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2017 5:03 pm Title: Sam's Back in Town and Ray Fails to Follow Through and Read

Opps...storm is coming..

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2017 4:50 pm Title: Someone is Deluded and the Rolling Stone Earworm

U and ur team had done such an awesome job...well done.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2017 4:30 pm Title: Listen You Might Not Learn But You Must Listen

Fantabulously awesome...☺

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2017 4:15 pm Title: The Story of Lindsay and the Stupidity of Michael

Gus is killing me with his cuteness...love him.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2017 2:13 pm Title: Here Comes The Big Brother

Last part Too funny..😃😂

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2017 1:59 pm Title: You Messed with My Friends...So I Mess with You

Nice nice...franc got someone too..love for everyone.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2017 12:47 pm Title: Do You See The Obvious Now Michael?

Wonderful...i love ur work...great going...thank u .

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2017 12:17 pm Title: Thwarting the Stupid...Lindsay

Awesome....i love it.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2017 11:36 am Title: Dinner

God....crapped pants walk...helarious..too good .

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2017 10:42 am Title: Hard Truths Need to be Heard and Saying the Words

Nervous brian is soo cute...😊

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2017 9:28 am Title: Coming Home

" a bitchy witch with a slack twat " omg...that one was good.

 

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2017 8:51 am Title: Gus Asks A Question

Ohh myyy goshh...gus is soo adorable..marvellous.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2017 7:06 am Title: Off to the Island and Back in Pittsburgh

Absoloutly amazing...hot.. ðŸ˜ƒ

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2017 6:26 am Title: Sabotage, Foot Massage and Betrayal

Thank god...micheal got caught...grear going..poor brian best friend betraying like that..😦😟

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2017 5:30 am Title: Counting Down...to the Pitch Obviously!

Amazingley going...soooopppppeeerrrr

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2017 4:17 am Title: Wine, Whine and Parental Fail

Ohhhh...reallllyyyyyy....we didnt know that ..lols...mikey is such

an idiot.

 

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2017 2:08 am Title: The Bitch, The Pitch and The Smudge

Wow...way to go BJ...LOVE IT .

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Date: Jun 10, 2017 4:38 pm Title: Fishing and BBQ

Wonderful chapter..😊

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2017 4:05 pm Title: Pitching and Bitching

Great great great.....😁

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2017 3:37 pm Title: Reading, Hunting and Fishing

Excellent..❤❤❤❤

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