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Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2017 2:16 pm Title: Captain Oh My Captain!

Poor mikey...rofl..😃😂

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2017 2:00 pm Title: Rhubarb, Gus and Brian

Wow...they met...yuppy..lols.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2017 1:42 pm Title: And We're Off and it's Definitely...We!

Omg...this is soo interesting..i love it.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2017 1:17 pm Title: Plans are Afoot

Amazing start...although someone is missing...lets see where he is..???  awesome story line...thank u for the great work.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2017 2:04 am Title: Sam's Back in Town and Ray Fails to Follow Through and Read

Why is Sam in Pittsburgh and why is  he helping Lindsay he isn't the fatherly type?

So Lindsay and Michael have to pay Mel child support? That Is Perfect!!! lol

I get the feeling Sam is going to wish he stayed in Italy with his latest muse?

Is there a clause in the papers Ray signed that say if he does anything against his family he will be prosecuted or lose the six million he has now?

Does Ray running to Vance have something to do with the emails?

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2017 4:54 pm Title: Sam's Back in Town and Ray Fails to Follow Through and Read

Well Ray like Michael and Lindsay got his entitled Ass handed to him first by his family then by his lover who was just using him.

Instead of groveling back to his family and trying to repair the damage he goes for revenge <smh>

The little entitled Prince is about to learn that he really shouldn't cross his family or Brian because the payback will reverberate for decades.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2017 10:22 am Title: Sam's Back in Town and Ray Fails to Follow Through and Read

Ouch, payback is a bitch!

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2017 6:49 am Title: Sam's Back in Town and Ray Fails to Follow Through and Read

Wow. That was a kick in the teeth.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2017 6:28 am Title: Someone is Deluded and the Rolling Stone Earworm

I could imagine the scene, if it was anything like when he tried to build Gus' swing set: Brian and the baby seat/carrier: there was a lot of fudgnucking and fudgsicles said

This is hilarious: bottom burps.

And that, it's only another face of jealous Brian: “Which reminds me... the moment she hits 11, I’m buying a shotgun!”

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2017 6:06 am Title: Sam's Back in Town and Ray Fails to Follow Through and Read

Little Ruby is well loved.  Ray blew it and now he intends to start trouble.  Somehow I don't think it will work.  At least he won't have Ethan eating up what little he has.

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2017 5:27 am Title: Sam's Back in Town and Ray Fails to Follow Through and Read

Doesn't Ray realize that Franc is going to hand him his balls literally for calling Gardner.

Ethan was smart at least to get off the sinking ship that is known as Ray's life.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2017 6:41 pm Title: Someone is Deluded and the Rolling Stone Earworm

So who was Sam with that has him stringing Lindsay along and is Sam really coming to Pittsburgh to use France who I think would be happy to see him just to knock him on his Ass??!

Might have to come up with a new category for Gus who just gets more adorable each chapter.

Love that Justin is going to draw on Gus's wall at home and that they can redo the house with what they want.

So does Lindsay think Hell Has Frozen Over or will she continue to wait for the lawyer to call her back??

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2017 5:08 pm Title: Someone is Deluded and the Rolling Stone Earworm

So much fun in this chapter.  I'm surprised that Sam hasn't tossed Lindsay aside yet.  Or maybe he has and she doesn't know it?

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2017 9:10 pm Title: Listen You Might Not Learn But You Must Listen

Lindsey can threaten all she wants, she doesn't live with Sam and I guess he would have to come to the US to adopt the kids; I bet he doesn't want anything to do with children, so, lets see how she will manage that.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2017 5:34 pm Title: Listen You Might Not Learn But You Must Listen

I love the fact that Franc is going to own the comic book store if we wait long enough I bet Michael's head might actually explode lol

It seems Franc knows more about Lindsay than Lindsay I can't wait to find out what she is going to do to Lindsay with the inflammation she has and what the information is?

Does Franc actually know who Sam is spending time with now?

And how much money did Sam send Lindsay cause she is going through it quickly???

 

Reviewer: chadmom63 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2017 4:14 pm Title: Listen You Might Not Learn But You Must Listen

Yeah! Linday bashing!  Yippee!  Next up: Mikey!

 

Nice chapter!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2017 1:48 pm Title: Listen You Might Not Learn But You Must Listen

Lindsay and Michael have met their match in Franc.  Love the idea of her buying the comic store and letting Justin teach classes.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2017 3:19 pm Title: The Story of Lindsay and the Stupidity of Michael

Glad that Ruby is getting stronger and that Justin got to meet her thanks to Gus who gets more adorable as the story progresses.

So Lindsay is going to jail?...About Damn Time!!! 

Michael must be high if he thinks Brian is going to sell him Red Cape Comics if he knew how to run the place like a business then he wouldn't need a loan from Brian all the time.

Nathan is being smart and doing what he can to bring in New business and all Michael wants to do is horde everything so he can stay 14 forever.

Deb is realizing that her way of dealing with people is not going to fly around Franc and that Brian's home is not the diner so she will be called out.

I seriously can't wait for the next update :) 

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2017 2:35 pm Title: The Story of Lindsay and the Stupidity of Michael

All I can say about Gus is Awww.... 

He's going to be a great big brother.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2017 11:29 am Title: The Story of Lindsay and the Stupidity of Michael

Gus is so sweet about all this and more than happy to include Papa Justin.  Rhubarb misses Gus.  Michael is being a pill and actually thinks that Deb is going to help him buy the comic store from Kinnetic?  I  hope not.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2017 9:08 am Title: The Story of Lindsay and the Stupidity of Michael

That was supper sweet.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2017 7:17 am Title: The Story of Lindsay and the Stupidity of Michael

So emotional! Gus is really a great kid/brother.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2017 8:33 pm Title: Here Comes The Big Brother

Heart is bursting! Welcome to the world little Ruby. Scared shitless for a moment there, but all is well for our little family. Gus is so excited. What a little trooper he is. So thrilled to have a little sister. So intuned to everyone around him. he sure loves them all.

Cheering on Franc! YES!! She let everyone, especially Deb know what they were doing. I understand Brian more as he was probably still in a bit of shock, but Deb is a bit like a bull in a china shop. She means well, but tends to get a bit high handed thinking she knows all and should know 1st. I'm sure Franc put her enough in her place that she'll remember going forward. she's not malicious in any way, just...a busy body. lol

Sorry I've been a bit lax in my reviews. I have read and loved every one of them. I'll try to do better.

cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2017 1:45 pm Title: Here Comes The Big Brother

OMG, I would have been so scared too being Brian, Mel, Justin or Leda (or Gus too)... so glad Ruby is here and ok..

Glad Franc let Deb know how she treats people... I agree she was just caught up in the stress, tension and then excitement, but it gets to be a bit much... and SOOO glad that Brian shared Ruby's name with Justin before anyone else knows it! <3 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2017 5:15 am Title: Here Comes The Big Brother

Yeah, Bumpy is out and going almost well! Gus is too cute and adorable. Glad that Deb was stopped in her way to control everybody. She's not at the diner.

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