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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2017 4:06 am Title: Here Comes The Big Brother

Thank you Franc For Standing Up For Justin!

Hello Ruby Kinney-Marcus!

Damn Justin You Are The Man!

Brian not only shouted out his Love but he fainted too <Applause Applause> ;) 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2017 3:14 am Title: Here Comes The Big Brother

Wow.  A little girl.  I am so glad that Franc was there to tell everybody off.  Brian actually said he loved Justin!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2017 11:01 pm Title: You Messed with My Friends...So I Mess with You

Lindsay tried to get Franc arrested and instead she got hoisted on her own petard rofl

She should have taken that ticket and got out of town while she still had some semblance of dignity, now she gets to spend the night in jail plotting another revenge that will never come into fruition.

Yeah Franc is meeting up with the officer she was attracted to on the cruise.

Justin doing the design for Gus's room is a really good idea.

Nathan co-managing the store with Michael is brilliant for Brian cause it seems at last Red Cape is making some money and now with him taking on more responsibility this place can finally be more than Michael's playground.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2017 8:36 pm Title: You Messed with My Friends...So I Mess with You

That was funny.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2017 8:16 pm Title: You Messed with My Friends...So I Mess with You

Looks like Franc with a c has a beau.  Lindsay recieved money from Sam?  Why?  I thought she was finished with him or he with her.  No way of knowing yet.  Jail time is going on her record!

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2017 7:46 pm Title: You Messed with My Friends...So I Mess with You

I love that Franc has an admirer.

Thank you for landed Lindsey flat arse in jail.

This baby shower is going to be EPIC.

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2017 7:25 pm Title: You Messed with My Friends...So I Mess with You

Oh, poor little WASP, caught in her own net... Too bad, she pissed too much people in such a short time.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2017 4:35 pm Title: Do You See The Obvious Now Michael?

Gus is such an adorable kid!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2017 4:52 am Title: Do You See The Obvious Now Michael?

Awwww.  This is so sweet and just where was Michael?



Author's Response:

Michael was soaking in the tub, getting ready for his long awaited assignation with Brian...no that will NEVER be written!

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2017 4:33 am Title: Do You See The Obvious Now Michael?

First the talk between Gus and Cynthia had me going Aww in my head.

But Gus getting Brian and Justin to admit they love each other had me swooning with a big smile on my face.

That little boy has taken Adorable to a whole new level.

Now for the Ew....Ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww I never want to think about Michael naked cause that is the kind of nightmare even Freddy Krueger would want to avoid <shudders>

Now they are going to have to get that room fumigated security is going to have to be reprimanded for letting that little weasel in the building.

Did Michael really see Lindsay and if she was in the building too then security should be fired?!?!?! (Or maybe docked a month's pay?)



Author's Response:

Gus really is a sweeetheart isn't he?

Michael really did see Lindsay but in a cab going away from Kinnetic as his cab was coming to Kinnetic.  Roman, the security guard was making sure that Lindsay got in the cab and Eliza was on her break.  So Brian will forgive them.  

More awwwsomeness from Gus to come.  

MissMerlot

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2017 3:56 pm Title: Thwarting the Stupid...Lindsay

Highly entertaining!!!!! I was in fits of giggles throughout it as I could fully picture it all. Getting doused by Franc. told off by sis. kicked out by Jen, and reactions at Kinnetic were priceless! 

this was great!!!!!!!!!

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2017 5:47 am Title: Thwarting the Stupid...Lindsay

Oh My God. That was perfect.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2017 5:00 am Title: Thwarting the Stupid...Lindsay

Excellent! Nothing like a good shower to get fresh ideas!

Gus is so sweet with Cynthia.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2017 2:00 am Title: Thwarting the Stupid...Lindsay

Love how everyone lets Lindsay know she is not welcome.  

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2017 12:12 am Title: Thwarting the Stupid...Lindsay

OMG, I AM ROLLING!!!

Lindsay got her flat Ass smacked and it was Beautiful I wonder did anyone get it on video?

I hope this is just the start of Lindsay's Humiliation.

That was so beautiful that I hope Michael gets the same treatment and I can't wait to read it again :)

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2017 10:51 pm Title: Dinner

Those opposing B&J had better watch it! Jen and Franc are fully on board, as well as all the others. M&L better not mess with them if they know what's good for them.

Michael got called out on all his sins, well, at least the ones regarding the cruise, who only knows what others there are...I'm assuming he's not going to believe Brian means what he says. that  he's just reacting and that he'll get over it. Ah the minds of the completely deluded.

Lindsey too. I mean really...she's been gone 2 years, she actually forgets the age of her own son!! (grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr) and thinks she can just waltz back in like it was only a week. that she can just "change her mind" that she was "confused" sheesh! Frigging BITCH! She acting like she can just assume her place as what..lady of teh house or something? Inbloody believable!

Everyone circled teh wagons and none of them, including Deb is going to let either of them get away with anything.

gotta  ask tho...Michael's reaction...He really thought of Ted?? Was he even on the cruise?? Was Justin freaking invisible?? Unreal.

Great chapter! Can't wait for more!

Elaine

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2017 4:29 pm Title: Dinner

Now the truth is out and Michael has been cornered with Leather Bear and the destruction of the boards. 

I don't know how Ted reacted at Michael's assumption that Brian chose him.

Great transition chapter.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2017 4:28 pm Title: Dinner

the team of Jennifer and Franc is NOT one to be messed with... damn those two can be viscious if you cross them or someone they love... poor Lindsay and Michael... I almost feel bad for them... well ok, not really LOL

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2017 4:15 pm Title: Hard Truths Need to be Heard and Saying the Words

I can't tell who is trying to win dumbest fuck of the year award... Michael or Lindsay?  together nobody else stands a chance... Lindsay is conniving and stubborn and just wont back down... Michael is an idiot, who thinks he's brilliant, and singularly focused. both losers!

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2017 6:10 am Title: Dinner

Funny.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2017 4:54 am Title: Dinner

It's so surprising that Michael and Lindsay think they can walk in and all is forgiven.  Everyone else has paired off and Michael and Lindsay are going to be left all alone.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2017 7:39 pm Title: Hard Truths Need to be Heard and Saying the Words

The bitch is back and she seems determined to clash with everyone going against her will. That's promising for some heated arguments.

So funny how Michael was dismissed about his potential fatherhood and his cruise with the family.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2017 4:49 pm Title: Hard Truths Need to be Heard and Saying the Words

B&J are just steamy! They are most definitely hot hot hot, but also very sweet and playful too. 

Lindsey is deluded if she thinks she can just come back and have everything be the same. that people are goingto welcome her with open arms. I mean really...she's irritated that Mel changed the locks? She's shocked that Emmett would treat her that way? The arrogance is unreal.

So...this dinner is going to be....interesting! LOL. am really looking forward to it. LOL. Michael is going to hear some very real truths. No excuses about being drunk or whatever. He's NEVER going to be Gus's stepfather! I wonder what he's going to do/say at the dinner...

Cheers

Elaine

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2017 2:58 pm Title: Hard Truths Need to be Heard and Saying the Words

Kinda think it's hard to believe that Lindsay feels everyone will forgive and forget.  She hasn't even heard about Justin yet.  hehe.  So Michael offered and got refused thankfully.  Having a meal with everyone is going to be a humdinger.

Reviewer: purpledee Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2017 6:54 am Title: Hard Truths Need to be Heard and Saying the Words

Still loving this, really enjoy your writing, which is very good.  Also love anti-Lindsay/Michael so all good!

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