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Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2017 3:42 am Title: Hard Truths Need to be Heard and Saying the Words

Lindsay is certainly a piece of work! She's annoyed that Mel changed the locks?  She feels she's being mistreated! Wow! She needs to see a proctologist about having her head permanently removed from her ass!

Damn! That was extremely hot!! Brian and Justin might set the house on fire if they keep that up!

Holy cow! It's a small world! Jen knows Deb.

Kinda wish Justin was going to attend Deb's dinner. That would sure set Mikey off!

So glad that Mel was smart enough to go with Brian instead of taking Mikey up on his ‘offer' to them. I literally cringe each time I watch the episode where they decide to have Mikey father their next child.

OMG when Mel put Brian's hand on her stomach and he felt Bumpy move... I had tears in my eyes! That is so awesome that Mel sees the real Brian.

I love this fic sooooo much!!!!

Deb

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2017 11:17 pm Title: Hard Truths Need to be Heard and Saying the Words

Awww Poor Lindsay, it's seems her dreams of Heterosexual Normalcy have floated away since Sam doesn't like to share his toys with others (unless maybe he can watch?), Lindsay you were just a novelty for Sam who is probably off with one of his other muse or muses?

Perhaps Lindsay came home because why Sam is trying to figure out about their "Relationship" <Scoffs while rolling eyes>he took all his lovely money with him and Lindsay needs taken care of.

Michael should get use to being on the outside looking in cause Brian is not going to forgive him for twice trying to ruin his reputation and career.

Justin and Brian are ready for a relationship which should make Michael and Lindsay's head explode lol

Brian is taking more of an interest in Bumpy now maybe he and Mel just needed for the antagonist to leave so they could move past jealousy, resentment and anger to a real friendship.

Oh this dinner at Deb's is going to be very interesting.

I see Craig is not doing so well either...Oh Happy Day! rofl

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2017 9:41 pm Title: Coming Home

Poor Gus; it was heartbreaking to read the separation with his Mr Justin who found something to help the long 7 days and nights to go by faster.

Oh no, the wicked bitch is back.

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2017 10:47 pm Title: Coming Home

The Wicked Witch of the West is back!! 

It was to good to be true for her staying out of the lives of Brian and Gus. 

I guess she will find Justin in her way guarding Gus like a pitbull. Let him rip her head off and let Brian do the same to Widdle Whiney Wankerboy. 

Most likely they will try to do their worst but I know the entire Liberty Av family AND the Seabird crew will do everything they can do to foil each attempt.

Gus, the untold star of this story, can count himself lucky to have such a family.

Can't wait for the next update.

XOXO

Meriam

 

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2017 5:09 am Title: Coming Home

"Enough already! You're hips are moving and he's starting to climb!" He hisses.  LOL! I could picture this very easily!

Holy crap! Lindsay!!! Yikes! And she's with Mikey! Double Yikes!! That bitch can only mean trouble!

Cynthia is Awesome! (Yes that's Awesome with a capital A!)

Deb



Author's Response:

I am bowing down to the awesomeness, with a Capital A, because of the plot bunny you let me have.

Glad you are enjoying it.

Nicole xx

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2017 4:57 am Title: Gus Asks A Question

Ha! Payback is hot, too!

Wow! Mikey sinks to a new low! He could have damaged Brian's business reputation with that stunt! He just will never learn!

"Oooh ick. Just no!"  Brian cringes.  I agree! I cringed at that thought, too!

"Oh, I was hoping to call you Momma Leda."  Tears sprung into my eyes, too. *sniff*

Ah! Gus is so freakin' adorable!!!

Deb

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2017 4:35 am Title: Coming Home

Gus is happy, happy.  Where has Lindsay been and why is Michael stalking Brian?

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2017 4:35 am Title: Off to the Island and Back in Pittsburgh

I wonder if yelling ‘scruff' at Mikey would work... hmmm.

Hahaha! Mikey can't get into the loft! His self-importance issues are outrageous! He actually believes that he has the right to be in Brian's loft anytime he wants! Hopefully his delusions are beginning to crumble and he will realize that Brian will never be his.

Finally!! That was very hot!

"Hi five!"  Emmett is hysterical!

Deb

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2017 3:36 am Title: Storm and Calm

Carl and Deb are so cute!

Damn Mikey is so dense! He has a lot of nerve calling Brian after what he did!

Your heart just has to break for the way that Brian's *friend* has been treating him and the rest of the family. Mikey use to be an important part of Brian's life; not so much now.

Thank goodness Ethan will be gone from the cruise! Chinrat and Ratfink both need to be anywhere but there!

After the first minute of Michael's spiel I'm betting that Brian was wishing he hadn't opened the door and instead had called ship security to have him removed. Good thing Deb showed up; Brian was able to get back in his room and shut the door in Mikey's face!

Really enjoyed Deb faking losing an earring so she could talk to Brian. Very happy that Mikey will be in his suite for the rest of the night. That's going to be a relief to the entire ship!

Emmett and Ted are such good friends; much better than Ratfink.

I don't think Brian will ever miss Mikey as long as he has Justin at his side, his true friends, Emmett, Ted and Mel along with Deb and Vic as well as Gus and the new baby.

Deb

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2017 12:58 am Title: Sabotage, Foot Massage and Betrayal

The friendship between Gus and Cynthia is so sweet.

Poor Gus; being sick is hard enough but to also lose Leather Bear makes it even more difficult. But Cynthia is absolutely right! Leather Bear would never reveal Gus' secrets. Hope they find him soon. The little guy needs his best buddy!

OMG! The boards were destroyed! Damn good thing Justin made duplicates! He saved the pitch!!! Let's just hope Brian doesn't kill the asshole responsible. They don't need for him to be in jail!

"Yes I'm coming, I'm coming!"  Mel laughs.

"Thank you momma. Oh wait, momma, you said that earlier to Miss Leda. What were you bringing her?"  Gus asks as the room goes dead silent and Mel and Leda go bright red.

Wow!  HAHAHA! Wow indeed!!!

"Now daddy, tell me how you think your bitch is going to go?  And do you need Leather Bear for good luck?"  Yeah, I'd give him that one, too! Gotta love Gus!!

Franc is on the warpath; everyone beware!

Awwww! Gus and Brian have matching painted toenails! That is the sweetest thing!

Ohhhh! Mikey is dead meat! It's a miracle he's still able to walk after getting punched by both Ted and Cynthia. He's damn lucky that Brian didn't punch him!

Yay! Mikey's going home!

This is so much fun! Off to read another chapter!

Deb

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2017 9:27 pm Title: Counting Down...to the Pitch Obviously!

"Seven more days."  I sigh. - "This is going to be the longest seven days ever!"  I shiver.  LOL! Not sure if I can wait seven more days!

"Let me just think of Mort!" "Mort-Mort-Mort!" LOL!

Emmett sure is having fun on the video shoot. :)

I am absolutely loving this!

Deb

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2017 8:03 pm Title: A Little More Conversation

I knew it! Gus is more of an adult than Mikey! That was very brave of Gus to confront Michael with how upset and scared he was by Mikey's negligence with giving Gus the comics to read. I'm proud of him, too!

Woah! Way to go, Brian!!! Kind of wish he had tossed Mikey along with the comics! LOL!

Cynthia is on the way! Mikey better watch out!

Things are definitely heating up between Brian and Justin!

Deb

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2017 7:26 pm Title: Gus Asks A Question

I love this story!! 

Have I mentioned just how much I love this one?! It's a balm really. 

Gus is just...Oh I just want to eat him up! Smoosh his cheeks, pour the love out onto him!!! He is JUST the cutest thing!

Michael is a freaking idiot! I mean really......Like that wouldn't get figured ut eventually even if Caroline hadn't figured it out. Dumbass...However, this will turn around to bite him in teh ass obviously. Now that Brian seems know everything, I wonder what's going to happen now.

only 4 days left of teh cruise. *pouts* Well, thankfully Gus is planning everyone's lives now, lol, so all should work out well. Better yet, nobody seems to be arguing with him either!! YAY!

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2017 6:08 pm Title: Wine, Whine and Parental Fail

Justin and Brian's banter is so cute.

Looks like Ethan's in even more trouble! Yay!

Well, Mikey seems to be building up to a tidal wave with his pretentiousness. Hang in there, Tyler!

Poor Gus!!! 1:1 time with Uncle Mikey!! And true to character Uncle Mikey thought only of himself! Sure hope they take away his Uncle title because he certainly doesn't deserve it! Thank goodness they were able to get Justin, Rhubarb, and Custard to help! And he even brought hot chocolate from Franc!

Hahaha! Justin sneezes like a kitten.

Deb

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2017 4:35 pm Title: Gus Asks A Question

Gus is just so Damn Cute I love him asking the questions and wanting to call Miss Leda Mama Leda and Mr. Justin Papa Justin that had me smiling, along with him stuffing his cheeks with berries which had me giggling.

Love the fact that it seems everyone is heading to Pittsburgh and I hope Emmett punished Ben all day and night.

Now onto to Captain Dumbass he must want Cynthia to kick his Ass instead of giving him another black eye?

Everyone is going to have to hold Brian back from killing the little weasel after this latest stunt.

I actually look forward to everyone going back to Pittsburgh because Michael's head is going to explode when he finds out about Papa Justin, and I bet Rhubarb and Custard have been missing Michael and they would love to say hello ;)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2017 3:53 pm Title: Gus Asks A Question

Gus is just adorable planning everyone's life in Pittsburgh.

Michael and his walking style... Great way to describe that!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2017 12:04 pm Title: Gus Asks A Question

Oh dear.  What kind of trouble has Michael tried to cause.  It's a shame the cruise is coming to an end, but most of the crew will be right where they belong so all's good.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2017 6:48 pm Title: Off to the Island and Back in Pittsburgh

So Brian had his locks changed and poor widdle Mikey can't get in. AH! Boooya! On top of that he finds out that brian owns the whole building. Even better...the cops have arrived. I guess Michael will be escorted out. will he put up a fight adn argue with the cops? hehe.

I want to go to that island! It sounds glorious! Everyone is goign to have a terrific time!

Apparently B&J area already starting to have a fabulous time! Whoooooooooooeeee! THAT WAS HOT! Man alive! Really surprised that Brian let Justin take the lead. Encouraged it even. 

Ben and Em's hi 5 was a hoot! Had to giggle.

Oh I am so looking forward to their next adventures on the island.

Cheers

Elaine

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2017 5:59 am Title: Off to the Island and Back in Pittsburgh

Ha ha ha, Michael is really out of Brian's life now; if he was looking for food, he should know there isn't any in the loft.

The make out session was so much more, to the delight if Emmett and Ben, who are often near to hear what is happening.

Reviewer: Erbear4474 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2017 12:28 am Title: Off to the Island and Back in Pittsburgh

Finally!!! 🤤

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2017 12:20 am Title: Off to the Island and Back in Pittsburgh

It's nice to see that Brian had his locks changed. Shame that Michael managed to get in anyways.  Wish they'd bought the cats with them on the island.  Why is Gus still sleeping?  Great chapter.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2017 5:02 pm Title: Storm and Calm

Finally....Michael and Ethan are off the ship. Michael still seems determined. AS per usual he's not listening to those around him. Not heeding any advise that doesn't fit with his dream. What an absolute idjit though. Refusing to go when being "arrested". Thinking that Brian just needs to calm down...sheesh!

B really opened up to J. Sad but glad the Emmett overheard it. that's the kind of friend/support that Brian can use. Both he and Ted. Glad also that B&J were able to clear up that little misunderstanding. Also that J gave B the opportunity to speak about his past. that he left his reputation behind.

this always makes me smile when I read it. So enjoying this!!

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2017 4:42 pm Title: Storm and Calm

Whoa, Carl and Deb!!! Hot and kinky couple!

Deb is really great in this story.

The discovery of Brian's "studlytude" by Justin: I thought for a moment that it would affect Justin, but he feels that Brian is different now and he knows why.

Good riddance of Micheal and Ian!

Reviewer: chadmom63 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2017 4:37 pm Title: Storm and Calm

Yeah! Both Michael and Ian are off the ship! Now, will it be smooth sailing from here, are will they manage to shake things up even when they're not there? LOL!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2017 4:18 pm Title: Sabotage, Foot Massage and Betrayal

Excellent chapter!!

I love this: “Yes I’m coming, I’m coming!”  Mel laughs. “Thank you momma. Oh wait, momma, you said that earlier to Miss Leda. What were you bringing her?”  Gus asks as the room goes dead silent and Mel and Leda go bright red.

Vic and Brian: I would love to have a story which would have them as the main duo, to explain this pseudo father/son relationship they have, just like the one Brian has with Deb.

Gus about his smiley father with Mr Justin: he seems very observant to what happens to his dad.

Michael is getting what he deserves; so happy that Brian was able to do his pitch and that the mess is cleared.

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