[Report This]Date: May 24, 2017 4:15 pm Title: Storm and Calm
Glad Michael and Ethan got kicked off the ship so now everyone can enjoy themselves without the unwanted attention of those two idiots.
Brian not sharing his cancer with everyone is something he had to do for himself because Lindsay and Michael really would have kept the attention focused on them instead of helping Brian.
Love that Ted was the one to set Brian straight about what happened with Justin and that they were able to talk.
Brian waking up with Justin and Gus is so Damn adorable I wish someone had taken a picture and it is good Brian knows who his true friends are.
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2017 2:23 pm Title: A Little More Conversation
Have I told you how much I love your writing? Sorry I don't comment more, but know that I really enjoy your fics...
Hugs Kathleen
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2017 12:36 pm Title: Storm and Calm
Yes, Gold and Michael got what they deserved and Brian and Justin are getting closer. Gus couldn't be happier.
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2017 1:41 am Title: Rhubarb, Gus and Brian
Sorry Michael, Brian's heart has already found his soul mate...
Hugs Kathleen
Date: May 23, 2017 9:04 pm Title: Sabotage, Foot Massage and Betrayal
Woww very long chapter. I started reading this morning in bed, but I had to stop because of work. Now in bed reading before going to sleep. Great chapter. Finally bye bye Michael.
Thanks * hugs *
Author's Response:
You'd think he'd take the hint right? Hope you continue to enjoy.
*hugs* MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: May 23, 2017 12:55 pm Title: Sabotage, Foot Massage and Betrayal
Wow! It's hard to believe that Michael could be that devious. And to think he almost got away with it. Gus will be happy, I don't think he ever really liked Unca Mikey. But what about Gold? Surely he knew his card was missing and where is the extra band? Are is it a mystery?
Date: May 23, 2017 12:12 pm Title: Sabotage, Foot Massage and Betrayal
I want tonthroat punch that douche-hat! What the fuck did he think he'd accomplish with that stunt?
gus is so damn cute...
[Report This]Date: May 23, 2017 4:46 am Title: Sabotage, Foot Massage and Betrayal
Michael got punched twice and he is lucky it wasn't Brian because he would be dead!!
Happy that Brian sought comfort with Justin instead of a trick just goes to show how much Justin has come to mean to him.
Glad that Ethan will soon be dealt with and despite Michael throwing a temper tantrum and almost destroying the pitch that everything turned out Great.
Gus being sick, getting better and painting his Daddy's toenails with Mr. Justin was so sweet :)
Now they can just enjoy the rest of the cruise without the Whiny Bitch chasing after Brian.
Awesome Chapter!! :)
[Report This]Date: May 21, 2017 12:14 am Title: Counting Down...to the Pitch Obviously!
This is going to be a long six days especially if they keep flashing each other lol (I'm guessing that is what Justin did when he ran away?)
Michael has some nerve thinking Brian should make it up to him I hope that key card that Ethan dropped (Please Don't Let It Be For Brian's Suite?!?)gets Michael in a lot of trouble and forced to remain in his cabin until the cruise is over???
Gus was so cute assigning everyone a seat while he was playing Little King in Brian's place that was just so adorable and totally deflects Michael's tantrums.
Date: May 20, 2017 9:23 pm Title: Counting Down...to the Pitch Obviously!
The 2 first scenes... Great minds think alike!
Gus is so funny with the way he is calling his mom: "Momma and Bumpy".
Finally, Brian demands to Michael to leave him alone; Ted is very attentive to what's happening.
"He’s gone commando!": I always loved that about Brian. In that case, it's pure teasing for Justin.
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2017 5:35 am Title: Counting Down...to the Pitch Obviously!
Would really love to see that video.
Date: May 19, 2017 5:48 pm Title: A Little More Conversation
WOOHOO!! Go Gus! what a strong little boy he is. Everyone is rightfully proud of him. He has more of a backbone, and more maturity than Michael obviously does sadly.
Had to laugh at Brian tossing out Michael's comics. I canjust imagine Michael's facial expression! I can't believe what he was about to say...tattling. He's actually getting all defensive to a 4 year old! Unbelievable.
Justin adn Brian are just so...CUTE! Loving their interactions. They are negotiationg their fraternization clause very well I think. Still giving them a slow burn. will make their eventual "parntership" hot as hell!
The 2 stories are so vastly different. I can see how they compliment each other though. I tend to have to decide with update to read first when you post both. Do I want the emotional, fury enducing one first, or the more light-hearted one. I can see the need for the lighter one for you if only to calm yourself and ease the anxiety from teh other one. Both are fantastic!
cheers,
Elaine
Date: May 19, 2017 4:36 pm Title: A Little More Conversation
Gus is so right and strong with Leather bear by his side; so happy he called Michael on his BS; as for Brian's reaction, it was soft compared to what he could have done.
I loved all the "restrictions" they listed at the end. Great job!
[Report This]Date: May 19, 2017 4:32 am Title: A Little More Conversation
And the winner for Biggest Moron goes to....Michael " I'm a Whiny Baby" Novotny!!!
Gus told him how he felt and still he only cares what effects him. I swear he doesn't have enough money for Gus to teach him how to be an adult.
I just loved when Brian threw his comics out the window, though I would have cheered if Brian had thrown Michael out after them, also loved when Debbie put him on a time out and made sure he got charged for his meals.
The best part was Brain and Justin being alone to talk, listen and rework the terms of their business arrangement which was very Hot!!!
[Report This]Date: May 19, 2017 3:53 am Title: A Little More Conversation
What a wonderful job Gus did of telling Michael off. Even better Brian throwing away the comics. Now if Brian and Justin can get over the non-fraternization clause.
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2017 7:04 pm Title: Wine, Whine and Parental Fail
Michael is such an A-hole he offered to spend time with Gus which is laughable since I don't think he really likes Gus just sees him as a way to get close to Brian, then he basically ignores him during playtime and then takes him back to his room and gives a four year old an inappropriate comic that scares him.
For that alone like Debbie I want to kick his Ass!!!
Thank Goodness for Justin and his cats who helped Brian and Mel reassure Gus that he was safe and the hot chocolate helped him to go to sleep.
Michael has no business being around adults much less children Gus is more mature than him and he is four!!!
I look forward to more of Brian and Justin getting closer and Michael getting Put In His Place.
Date: May 18, 2017 4:58 pm Title: Wine, Whine and Parental Fail
Oh man...Michael is such an idiot. Trying to make himself look good by spending time with Gus, but proves himself an idiot by simply tossing him an inappropriate comic. He made no attempt at playing either. Looking forward to the part whre someone teaches him a lesson. On top of that...I'm really wanting to know why Michael thinks that "some peole need to learn their place". So looking forward to when he learns that lesson himself. Sad that he's so thoughtless and self absorbed, yet here's Gus...aged 4, who doesn't want his Unca Mike to get in trouble...shameful really.
The hushed tones between Brian and Justin at the beginning...so seet. Brian is definitely flustered and really not accustomed to this position. Had to laugh at the mention for firing him because he doesn his job so well, and he smells so good. lol. That was actually very cute. The end part as well. heart swells and big assed smiles on my end.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: May 18, 2017 3:42 pm Title: Wine, Whine and Parental Fail
What moron!! What cartoons did he give to Gus?
Author's Response:
The moron gave Gus his comics to read, Gus calls them cartoon books.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2017 12:53 pm Title: Wine, Whine and Parental Fail
Michael is making things worse for himself without really trying. But Justin and his kitties come to the rescue. I'm thinking Brian's pitch is going to be fabulous.
Date: May 18, 2017 7:27 am Title: Wine, Whine and Parental Fail
I hope you explain to Michael what is appropriate for a four year old.
Author's Response:
Oh yes, he gets that lesson learned. Someone teaches him...hard!
MissMerlot
Date: May 18, 2017 12:27 am Title: The Bitch, The Pitch and The Smudge
Mikey really should get a fucking clue
Date: May 17, 2017 5:33 pm Title: The Bitch, The Pitch and The Smudge
Seems everyone is trying to put Michael in his place. Sadly it seems to be falling on deaf ears. Michael will continue to do what Michael wants to do. what he thinks is his right to do. Thank goodness for Ted. Nice to see that Brian sees Ted as his best friend. Much deserved.
The flirtation between Brian and Justin continues. It's so sweet to watch. Hot too at times. :)
Brian is putting his foot down with regards to Michael. Again, not sure michael will listen or take heed. It's going to take something drastic for him to get a life of his own. (personally...I'm looking forward to those drastic measures. lol)
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: May 17, 2017 4:52 pm Title: The Bitch, The Pitch and The Smudge
God I hate Michael! Please continue with all of the Mikey-hating! It's a beautiful thing LOL!
Author's Response:
Your wish is my command.
MissMerlot
Date: May 17, 2017 3:46 pm Title: The Bitch, The Pitch and The Smudge
Finally, Brian puts a stop to Michael's need to share his time/suite/spa appointment... How long will it last?
[Report This]Date: May 17, 2017 3:36 pm Title: The Bitch, The Pitch and The Smudge
Brian acknowledging that Ted really is his best friend was very moving because it is the truth, Michael is too self-absorbed to be a friend to anyone or to admit that he is a part of Brian's past and if he keeps trying to assert himself he will soon be just some guy Brian used to know.
About time Brian had the locks changed at the loft the moment some starting using the place as grand central station he should have done that.
Love that no one is letting Michael get away with his Pity Party or feeding into his need to be around Brian all the time.
Just love that Brian and Justin are getting closer and everyone is encouraging it while also pushing Michael away.
The pitch sounds like it is going to be Amazing but I look forward to the next hilarious obstacles to befall Michael, he has been told off by Deb, Vic, Rodney, Ted, Emmett, Mel and Brian but the wheel isn't spinning because the hamster is on vacay and the Moron is steering.
Author's Response:
I always thought he was the better fit best friend wise especially after the cancer diagnosis. Michael just abandoned him in the series.
Sadly the moron steering affects Gus...heads up.
MissMerlot