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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2017 11:50 am Title: The Bitch, The Pitch and The Smudge

Wow they got a lot accomplished.  Everyone on the ship seems on board for the campaign except for Michael.  He seems to think he can barge in and people should be happy to see him.  Love that Brian is having the locks changed on the loft.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2017 6:29 am Title: The Bitch, The Pitch and The Smudge

Loving that Deb isn't putting up with Michael's whining and superior attitude! So nice to see. And hopefully she's having *fun* with Carl!

Awesome Ted to the rescue! He really put Michael in his place. And you brought a tear to my eye when Brian told Ted that he was his best friend, not Michael.

Justin and Brian are so adorable and *hot* together. There will probably be fireworks when they finally get together!

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Deb

Reviewer: samcdee Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2017 11:57 pm Title: Sofa So Good

I'm loving this story. I'm a sucker for stories with pets in them.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2017 4:14 pm Title: Sofa So Good

Michael is just an idiot... jumping to the wrong assumptions AGAIN LOL...

so freaking good!!!  and Justin returning the kiss... damn, I was disappointed when he left!

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2017 4:13 pm Title: Sofa So Good

Things are getting well between the staff members and the passengers!

Gus is so funny and is getting closer to Mr Justin every day, same for his father. First kisses... yeah!

Emmett is such a great guy: always attentive to Vic and the other close friends.

Deb is not shy and Carl is not afraid of her boldness.

Ted is another type, but he goes with the flow.

The spa session of Michael was hilarious.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2017 3:55 pm Title: Fishing and BBQ

Of course they fit together perfect... they should "connect" more often! lol

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2017 3:42 pm Title: Pitching and Bitching

poor wittle Mikey... not getting his own way... LOVE it!!!

Gus taking such care and having a good fashion eye for his daddy is just so awesome.

Dont get me wrong, I love Brian and Justin, but Gus is by far my favorite... when the three of them are together... just such a happy cookie!!!

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2017 3:35 pm Title: Sofa So Good

Could you please keep torturing Mickey?

Roll him through cat hair, let him eat any food he's allergic to, dump him overboard I don't care as long as he suffers.

Could someone knock him on the head, take of the blinders he's wearing and heal his tunnelvision. The callousness of him bumping Vic causing his meds to hit the water made me want to scratch his eyes out. 

I love the budding love affairs between Ted and Blake, Emmet and Ben, Mel and Leda, and ofcourse Brian and Justin. This cruise turns out to be a regular Love Boat.

Please keep torturing Mickey and I will love you forever.....

XOXO

Meriam

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2017 3:23 pm Title: Reading, Hunting and Fishing

Love that Brian and Justin are so comfortble around each other, that Brian recognizes this and doesn't freak out AND they get flirty at the end :) 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2017 2:43 pm Title: Sofa So Good

Again, Michael is his true self. Thoughtless and selfish to the core. Dumping Vic's meds, waking Gus, pretending to be asleep so as not to help...pure unadulteragted thoughtlessness. It's maddening. Loved how Emmett told him off. Michael's answer, "You seem to forget who I am" Really?!?! Exactly who the hell are you Michael? In the whole scheme of things...nobody.

Things between Emmett and Ben are moving along nicely. I am really going to enjoy you putting them together. 

Oh what a sweet 1st kiss! definitely threw Justin for a loop. BUT...they will be working together now so, YAY! Am enjoying the slow brew. More importantly, Gus obviously adores Justin. Very important factor. Playful wrestling between B&J is just whetting our appetites. B did however get Justin to eat the oysters. lol.

The kiss Justin planted on Brian however, was HOT! Looking forward to more.

Thanks for this!!

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2017 6:51 am Title: Sofa So Good

Please keep torturing Michael.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2017 4:25 am Title: Sofa So Good

Is it wrong to want someone to rub cat hair all over Brian and Gus so that Mikey can't get anywhere near either of them? Or maybe for Franc to knock him out again?

I Love Emmett!! (Yes that is love with a capital L.) He certainly put Mikey in his place.

Mikey is such a jerk for waking up Gus and of course doesn't apologize. Thank goodness Rhubarb was there to keep Mikey from taking Gus to Brian; although I am curious as to how he would explain Gus being awake. If Gus told his daddy that Uncle Mikey woke him up, would Uncle Mikey admit it or not? Probably not; he'd probably try and make it sound like Gus was lying.

"Another 30 minutes if we top it, but topping makes it bumpy." LOL!

Well this is a cruise of matchmakers with Ted now matching for Mel and Leda, and Brian matching for Emmett and Ben. LOL!

Hahaha! Mikey got a full body wax!!! Wonder what everyone's reaction will be!

Ohhh, Brian was sneaky with the oysters, but Justin got him back with that kiss!

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Deb

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2017 2:15 am Title: Sofa So Good

Justin gets him hot and bothered then leaves.  Can't wait for the continuation of the french kissing.

Love, Love, Love that the cats are a Michael deterrent.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2017 1:53 am Title: Sofa So Good

A nice day was had by all, except Michael, who once again had to pay for his mistake.  I'm loving all the ways you get Michael into trouble.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2017 1:43 am Title: Sofa So Good

Yes They Kissed!!!

Brian and Justin are moving along nicely just love that Gus wasn't ready to be separated from Mr. Justin yet and Justin got to sleep in the bed albeit with Gus but it was still before Michael.

Michael getting a massage with Brian just not Brian Kinney is funny but  it was Hilarious when he had to pay for it.

Gus is right Deb should talk to Michael about doing dumb stuff, of course Emmett might get the point across faster by actually kicking his Ass!!!

I hope the whole time they are working on the pitch Custard and Rhubarb are standing guard outside or in the room so Michael can stay away lol

Am Loving This Cruise :)

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2017 6:17 pm Title: Fishing and BBQ

What a trip! Apart Michael who was discretely let out, the other had such good time and fun!

Some couples are getting slowly together and Gus is having the time of his life!

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2017 6:06 pm Title: Fishing and BBQ

Gus is..........well, there are few words. Gus is just the most adorable little guy! So precious! He's doing his own matchmaking of sorts in his own innocent way.

Am getting completely creeped out by Michael's comments here and there about eventually being Gus's stepfather........I mean really?!?! Yuck!! I mean gus doesn't even really like Unca Mike, he sure as heck wouldn't want him as a step father. 

The fact that he is so self involved that he pushed himself ahead, at the expense of Vic's meds is disgusting. He's not winning any merit points with Brian with actions like that. The fact that he excused his actions and thought so little of any possible repercussions is appalling!

Loved the fishing action with the gang, particularly between B&J. They are even able to make fishing hot. :) Glad that Emmett was there too. THRILLED that there's ramantic potential between him and Ben! 

Justin is getting so attached to little Gus. He's such a positive influence as well.

So enjoyed the adventure they had. Laughed my ass off at Michael getting nailed in teh face! HAHA! that was most enjoyable. wonder how long he's gonna be out for. Hopefully his nose is now going to be the size of a grapefuit and I'm wondering if 2 black eyes will show themselves as well. (I know from experince that tends to happen. lol)

What a fun chapter!

Cheers

Elaine



Author's Response:

You know me so well when it comes to M-Pain!

Nicole

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2017 1:35 am Title: Fishing and BBQ

OMG I am soooo loving this! If only there really was video of them landing the sailfish!

Gus is so adorable!

Ha! Mikey has been foiled once again! He is such a jerk and thinks everyone is overreacting to his foolishness when he knocked Vic's meds into the water. Thank goodness Blake was able to get more pills.

Very happy Mikey didn't make it on the fishing trip! He would have ruined everyone's fun. Thankfully he took a hit to the face and is hopefully out for the count until they head back. Although it would be fun to see his reaction to the video! Ha!

Looks like Joseph is joining in on the matchmaking along with Brian and Franc. Ben and Emmett are going to be one cute couple!

I didn't see any mention of Ted; did he stay on the cruise ship?

This is so much fun!

Deb

Reviewer: chadmom63 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2017 1:00 am Title: Fishing and BBQ

Loving this story!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2017 12:15 am Title: Fishing and BBQ

The fishing was amazing.  I thought Franc would be the winner.  Emmett did real well.  Of course, Michael starts off by being responsible for Vic's medication going overboard, then he tries calling but can't get the ship to shore phone.  Good job, Blake.  Having him hit, by what I don't know, was very nice.  Haha.  No making Justin eat oysters, though I like oysters, was not nice since Justin doesn't.



Author's Response:

Worry not re the oysters, it's a very nice way Brian gets him to try something he's never had.  And it was a football that hit Michael in the face.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2017 10:57 pm Title: Fishing and BBQ

Brian and Justin had fun and Brian getting Justin to try oysters is going to make their night even better lol ;)

I so hope Michael was the one who went into the water not Vic's medication thankfully Maceo was able to find it because I doubt Michael would've went in, he doesn't think pushing Vic was a bad thing, Deb had him on a time out and sitting with Mommy while the others were having fun fishing...Thanks Deb!

Ball in the face out for the count no more whining from Michael Novotny at least for a few hours anyway rofl

Bravo :)

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2017 11:14 am Title: Pitching and Bitching

I see you're at it again my lovely....this is shaping up to be a great story.



Author's Response:

Thank you, so glad you're reading.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2017 11:19 pm Title: Pitching and Bitching

Michael is getting more and more annoying! How can Brian not explode at this behaviour?

I love the relation you built between Mel and Brian.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2017 10:06 pm Title: Pitching and Bitching

This is so much fun. All the obstacles in Michael way are so funny, may he gets lost on the island and no one notices. In the beginning I thought Vanguard wanted Brian out of town so they could steal some business now it looks like Brian might steal theirs.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2017 9:57 pm Title: Pitching and Bitching

Awesome move by Mel keeping Michael away from Brian and she didn't even appear to do it intentionally, just simply mentioned that ‘we' were on the Beach Deck. Ha!

Michael is such a selfish jerk! Gus will NEVER be his stepson!!!!! (I think I'm safe saying that since I'm pretty certain you would never do that to Gus and Brian.)

Gus is definitely Brian's son because not only does he know fashion but he also knows how to make a pitch!

Wow! Mikey could be on a free shopping spree with everyone else but instead choses a comic book store. Does he really think he's a grown-up?

Love how Brian puts a stop to Mikey's tantrum, letting him know in plain words that he will never answer to Mikey for anything he does.

Those bands are very impressive! Something like that would even help senior citizens.

It sounds like Mikey might be spending a lot of time alone on this cruise! Yay!

Can't wait for more!

Deb

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