[Report This]Date: May 13, 2017 9:51 pm Title: Pitching and Bitching
Looks like this is going to be a working holiday. Winning the cruise lines advertising will be a feather in Brian's cap. But Michael is against it while everyone else thinks it's a good idea. The shopping trip was unbelievable and all free! I wish I could win a trip like that. Michael, of course, decides to buy, buy, buy, but he needs Brian to be there to be put on the prize bill. Thank you for having Brian's phone put in Leather Bear's pocket. Love the button that can keep Gus safe.
Date: May 13, 2017 9:25 pm Title: Reading, Hunting and Fishing
Gus is so adorable! It's a good thing Leather Bear doesn't like to be held upside down; Gus was saved from having to hold Mikey's hand! And how cute was he when he tried to help his daddy with saying something nice about Justin!
Hooray for Rhubarb and Custard! I wonder if they can be trained to focus on Michael; hmmmm? That would certainly keep him out of the way! LOL
So sweet that Justin recorded Gus steering the ship; and now he has Brian's phone number!!
Seaman Staines!! LOL!!! Master Bates!!! Hahaha! Love the names!
Aha! Franc is a matchmaker and did a splendid job, too!
Ohhh, now they have a bet going! Can't wait to see who wins!!
Deb
Date: May 13, 2017 7:08 pm Title: Pitching and Bitching
Ethan is so creepy, Michael is such a Dumbass!
Brian doing the pitch for Seabird is going to be good because he is a genius and Vance deserves egg on his face.
Michael not knowing about the unlimited spending is a good thing, I wonder if Custard and Rhubarb would like to rub up against Michael and sleep on his bed? lol
I like the band that would be a great idea for schools especially when they are on trips at big places with other schools and huge visitors it is quite easy for kids to get lost or separated from their groups, especially when they are out with family.
Michael cockblocked again rofl
I am So Loving This Story :)
Date: May 13, 2017 6:48 pm Title: Reading, Hunting and Fishing
Gus is so funny: I would’ve loved it more if daddy didn’t keep taking it off my plate!
Captain Ben and Aunty Emmy? That's a combination that should be interesting! As for Michael, he should be paired with Ian.
Let's see if Brian's competitive side will come first before his want to pose for Justin, almost naked...
Date: May 13, 2017 10:24 am Title: Reading, Hunting and Fishing
Loving this so far. So Captain Pugwash, what's next Chrystal Tips and Alistair? Or better yet, with Justin's propensity for PSAs maybe it should be Charley Says?
Oh bugger! now I've got the Cpt Pugwash theme as an earworm!
Deb
Author's Response:
Sorry for the earworm...but glad you're loving it.
Nicole
[Report This]Date: May 13, 2017 2:25 am Title: Reading, Hunting and Fishing
Yes!!! Can't wait to read how they settle their bet after the fishing trip...humanha!
Hope Michael will be out of commission for a while...hehehe
[Report This]Date: May 13, 2017 12:29 am Title: Reading, Hunting and Fishing
Yes Michael is out of the picture Thanks to Rhubarb and Custard, I Soooo Love Those Cats!!!
Deb, Carl, Vic and Rodney got to have fun and so far it is progressing nicely, hopefully for Mel and Leda too?
Brian got to spend sometime with Justin and Gus got to steer it was a wonderful day had by all because Michael was too sick to interfere :)
Can't wait for the barbecue and fishing trip
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2017 10:33 pm Title: Reading, Hunting and Fishing
Terrific chapter. Love how much fun Brian had with Gus. Better yet finding out that Mikey is allergic to cats. LOL. Those cats are so sweet guarding Gus.
Date: May 12, 2017 10:19 pm Title: Reading, Hunting and Fishing
This is so much fun.
Date: May 12, 2017 4:07 pm Title: Rhubarb, Gus and Brian
Oh I loved Rhubarb & Custard as a kid! Will the US peeps get the reference though?
Love your writing, especially Love at First Bite. Although don't like you much at the moment as I've the theme tune going round in my head as the proverbial ear worm!
Deb (fellow Brit)
Author's Response:
Good point. I'll explain a bit in the next chapter. So glad you like it.
Nicole
Date: May 12, 2017 1:03 pm Title: Captain Oh My Captain!
Hiya,
Oooohhh this one is going to be so addictive. Only four chapters in and hooked already. Read them in one go and then started again. Wow, this story is going to be fun.
Before we get deeper into the story can I have permission to stick Mickey in a life boat and put him out to sea. But before lowering the boat I want to put a few holes in the bottom of the boat. The cruise has barely begun and he's a pain in the arse already.
Intrigued by Franc. She could be a good ally in the "war" against Mickey.
Rhubard and Custard? Your love for foor and furballs really shines through. Looking forward to see more of them.
Eagerly awaiting the next update
XOXO
Meriam
Date: May 12, 2017 2:45 am Title: Captain Oh My Captain!
What a fun fic. Really enjoying it.
Date: May 12, 2017 1:17 am Title: Captain Oh My Captain!
Maybe Michael could fall overboard, or get sun burned. That would keep him out of the way. Love the cats.
Date: May 11, 2017 8:06 pm Title: Captain Oh My Captain!
So, Ian should be out of reach for Brian; as for Michael, he's trying to become Gus' second dad: what a nightmare and party pooper!
Mr Justin is starting to get to know the family and to face his future nemesis.
Date: May 11, 2017 7:16 pm Title: Rhubarb, Gus and Brian
Michael is such a leech! Ethan seems as bad as Michael is.
Gus is so funny to be wanting to skip everything to go to the kids' club.
First meeting: Justin made quite an entrance in Brian's life.
Date: May 11, 2017 6:47 pm Title: Captain Oh My Captain!
Mikey is so selfish! And what a bastard; trying to make Gus call him ‘papa'! Thankfully he got shot down by a four year old when Gus put a stop to that! And then not only does Mikey lose Gus but he doesn't think he did anything wrong! I am so glad Mel is having Brian's baby and not Mikey's!
It might be wishful thinking, but I hope Ethan gets fired and put off the ship at the first port of call!
Hmmm... I wonder if Carl noticed Deb in that chair? Deb was probably a bit more focused on keeping Franc from killing Ethan so she might not have paid attention to who was at the door.
Awww... Gus gets to wear his A-suit! And I'm sure Mel snapped lots of pictures. I know I would! I'm betting he will be better dressed than Mikey. LOL
Yay for matchmaker Franc teaming up with Emmett to strategically place Justin next to Gus and thereby close to Brian as well as placing Mikey at the other end! Thank goodness Franc was able to prevent Justin's escape! LOL
LOL! Gus is so adorable! "I am your son and I can eat nuts. I like eating nuts. You like eating nuts too, don't you daddy?" That is so perfect! So glad I wasn't eating or drinking anything!
I'm thinking that Ben was hoping it Brian would be the one to look back at him. I'm sure he would be more than happy to have at least one tumble in the hay with Mr. Kinney!
Yay! Mikey's plan was foiled once again!
Deb
[Report This]Date: May 11, 2017 6:44 pm Title: Captain Oh My Captain!
Yes Brian and Justin Have Met!!! Thanks Rhubarb!
Michael trying to get Gus to call him papa makes me sick he barely acknowledged Gus when he was born and now he wants to Play papa??
He can take his flat Ass to wherever Lindsay is and commiserate how Brian should love them.
That was disgusting if Ethan to try to use that band to gain access to Brian's room <shudders> and to try to use Gus to find out about Brian.
I hope Emmett was staring back at Ben and Brian enjoys story time with Gus and Mr. Justin? (Gus is Just Too Cute!!:))
I hope you plan on more cockblocking for Michael Ethan I really like that lol
Please Can Mel punch Michael in his mouth <puppy eyes> Not hearing his voice for a few days or until the end of the cruise would be Heavenly <sighs>
Date: May 11, 2017 6:07 pm Title: Captain Oh My Captain!
Oh ick factor alert! Michael trying to convince Gus to call him papa! And losing Gus...not payng attention. Not going to garner him any points! What an absolute ass he was at dinner too. ARGH!
Ethan too is in trouble with a capital T! And thwarted any access to Brian on top. hehehe!
Am goingto enjoy Emmett and Franc conspiring to get Brian and Justin together. I doubt they'll need much help in that department. they may need to distract Michael however!
Fingers crossed for Ben and Emmett!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm hoping that's who Ben is hoping looked back!!
thoroughly enjoying this!
Cheers
Elaine
Date: May 11, 2017 5:42 pm Title: Rhubarb, Gus and Brian
Oh Michael Michael Michael...You really need to learn to keep your mouth shut! Makeing any kind of comment about Gus or Mel's parenting, or any connection to Lindsey is just gonna put you in hot water. Not doing himself any favours. Thankfully everyone in the family seems to not want to put up with hsi shit.
Ethan is gonna keep trying...and he's going to keep having doors shut in his face. Not likeing however that he's trying to insinuate himself with Gus. thankfully Gus already doesn't seem to like him.
Off to read next chapter!
Cheers
Elaine
Date: May 11, 2017 5:40 pm Title: Rhubarb, Gus and Brian
Ethan is almost as creepy as Michael! They would make a great pair!
I love Mel! Is it wrong of me to hope that Michael will smart off repeatedly about her abilities to take care of Gus just so she gets to pop him in the mouth a few times?
‘After seeing Brian naked this many times, you'd think I'd be immune, but even I have to admit he has impressive assets.' LOL! I have to agree with her!
Yay! Way to go, Vic! Happy he's there to help keep Michael the dimwit in line!
Rhubarb and Custard sound adorable! Maine Coon cats are so beautiful!
Gus is very astute! He knows slimy when he sees it and Ethan is definitely slimy! I would have washed my hands, too!
Hmmm... I wonder if Rhubarb is playing matchmaker. LOL
I hope Brian catches on to Mikey's ‘together' comments and quickly puts a stop to that!
Off to read the next chapter!
Deb
Date: May 11, 2017 4:48 pm Title: Captain Oh My Captain!
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[Report This]Date: May 11, 2017 4:18 pm Title: Captain Oh My Captain!
Great chapter. Eating at the Captain table turned out nice, though Michael seems to be the weak link. First he loses Gus then he puts his foot in it. I'm thinking that Brian is going to the reading. Please don't hook Ben up with Michael.
[Report This]Date: May 11, 2017 4:01 pm Title: Rhubarb, Gus and Brian
Well Brian finally met Justin. And what a way to do it. I love that Justin has cats, Maine Coons no less. How many road blocks can you put in Michael's way?
Author's Response:
How many would you lovely, sweets. I can throw as many as you like.
MissMerlot
Date: May 11, 2017 3:48 pm Title: Captain Oh My Captain!
All I can say is LOVE it💓
Date: May 10, 2017 9:02 pm Title: And We're Off and it's Definitely...We!
Oh Michael... you'll never learn... Gus - your future stepson??? not sure what universe you live in, but I'm glad I don't live there with you... asshat!