Date: Sep 08, 2018 1:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Bravo Star!! This storyline was so well thought out and I couldn’t put it down. I’ve always enjoyed your writing, but this one is a whole other level of brilliance!
Not sure if you have read this below story and it’s sequels, I think you would really appreciate them. They are the same vain as this story arc. Thanks as always for allow me/us on your journey. ðŸ˜‰ Erin
Before There Was You, There Was You by Gina_Marie at Archive of our Own
Date: Sep 04, 2018 2:59 am Title: Chapter 54
Good Ending for a Wonderful Story! Thank you for writing this. Your thought processes during writing this very different story, must have gone into overdrive. I can't imagine how you came up with all the angels and different characters. It was so very good. I wish Mel would have had someone.
Date: Sep 03, 2018 4:17 am Title: Chapter 54
Love, LOVE, LOVED this story so much! I am sad to see it finished but I am also looking forward to reading the series from beginning to end. This is definitely one that I will read over and over again. It's my favorite Redux series!
Thank you so much, StarBaby!
Date: Jun 05, 2018 6:15 pm Title: Chapter 51
Whoa, Joan got the balls from her late husband!!! Great part; I loved how she managed Claire and what she told Brian, even if it's too late.
Are they finally out of the woods or will Lindsay come back and try to derail their lives again?
Date: Jun 04, 2018 5:57 pm Title: Chapter 51
I forgot a couple of things I wanted to say....
The whole turn around with Joan. Came as a shocker, especially the yway she spoke to claire. Very refreshing. At first I thought maybe she went back or forsard in time allowing herself a nother chance. This was just needed for Brian to fulfill his destiny though.
Date: Jun 04, 2018 4:31 pm Title: Chapter 51
Absolutely LOVED this chapter, StarBaby!! Brian forgave Joan for her inaction and mistreatment of him throughout his life. It was a HUGE thing for her to admit that she was incapable of being the kind of mother he wanted and needed. It was actually a very nice change from the sanctimonious harridan we have all come to know and hate. Claire...well, talk about a greedy, nosy and judgmental chick who just needs to be SLAPPED to sleep!! She's a straight 'Poor man's Lindsay', but that's another tirade for another time, LOL.
The talk with the Angels, as always, is interesting. Add God himself to the mix and WHOO! Yes, I actually cheered aloud when he showed up! I love the fact that Brian and Justin's testing phase is finally over. I was completely enthralled as the reason for Brian's creation was revealed to him at long last. Ironically, I have always viewed Brian's character as a person with a definitive moral code, even if it lived and breathed outside of societal norms. You did an amazing job portraying that here.
This series is one of my absolute favorites and has kept me intrigued. Thank you so much for sharing this gift with us!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
Date: Jun 04, 2018 4:28 pm Title: Chapter 51
I do believe this chapter maybe my favorite one :)
At long last Brian and Justin are going to live their lives without anyone else's influences, not Heaven or Hell can change destiny now and Lindsay along with everyone else will finally get what's coming to them.
Forgiveness is strong, but Love is more Powerful than Hate or Envy, Especially True Love ;)
Date: Jun 04, 2018 2:22 am Title: Chapter 50
I know you haven't undated this in a while, but I really want to know what happens. I've been reading this story and am fascinated by the light and dark and in between tha you have created. It is very complex and filled with love and caring but also hate. I hope you continue to post this story.