Date: Jul 13, 2021 1:25 pm Title: Excoriation and Happily Ever After
did read it again
Date: Jul 13, 2021 1:25 pm Title: Excoriation and Happily Ever After
did read it again
Date: Oct 14, 2020 3:58 am Title: Excoriation and Happily Ever After
So good. Angst, laughter, sex, romance. So many more things. Thank you for a great story.
Date: Oct 14, 2020 3:58 am Title: Excoriation and Happily Ever After
So good. Angst, laughter, sex, romance. So many more things. Thank you for a great story.
Date: Jan 21, 2020 11:56 pm Title: Excoriation and Happily Ever After
I'm happy that I took the time to re-read this and can't wait for the new one to be finished. You are a great story teller. Thank you.
Date: Jul 05, 2019 1:39 pm Title: Excoriation and Happily Ever After
Ah that was lovely sad but lovely thanks so much for continuing to write these
wonderful stories for us to enjoy
Date: Jun 30, 2019 11:38 pm Title: Excoriation and Happily Ever After
Love this story, I read it as you were writing and then again all the way through from the begining once it was finished. As with all of your stories I will be reading it over again in the future. Would love to read a sequel for after both idiots are released from prison..........
Love your writing as always,
Liz
Date: Jun 30, 2019 6:53 am Title: Excoriation and Happily Ever After
Great revisiting Jack's visit to the loft with the 11 o'cock!
Very dense, long and captivating story! I love how talented people are able to invent/build such stories.
Date: Jun 29, 2019 8:35 am Title: Excoriation and Happily Ever After
I loved this story, thanks ladies. At the same time sad and funny. Michael who still has not understood anything, fortunately the restrictive orders are put in place, I dare to imagine what he could do. Debbie deserves what happens to her for not stopping him, she will be alone and miserable but she made the right choice. Gus loves his dad and his Jussin, it's adorable. Lindsay and Nancy are hateful. It was a pleasure to read this story.
Date: Jun 28, 2019 12:22 pm Title: Excoriation and Happily Ever After
great story, thank you 3 for writing
Date: Jun 25, 2019 10:09 am Title: Excoriation and Happily Ever After
Hello MissMerlot and Company,
Congratulations to you for finishing a real good story. I was very entertained as I followed Brian’s Rollercoaster ride to hell and heaven.
At the end there are two conclusions for me:
First: Deb finally got it and realized that this was the unavoidable end to the matter and that it was her fault and no one else’s. She will be utterly alone in her future live, but there is still a chance that it will be a good one, away from her leech of a son and his selfish demands.
Second: Michael on the other hand still isn’t back to reality. He still thinks he can scheme and manipulate his surroundings – as seen in the Prison-Scene as he tried to use Brian’s last name and therefore to maintain a sliver of presence in Brian’s live. Utterly cowed he seems not and I can totally see him start planning his revenge when he is over the initial shock of his 5 year sentence… and I would have so liked to see him hit rock bottom and knowing it… but well, this could point to an eventual sequel to this story?
I am still amazed how much writing you manage to do. Your output is unbelievable and to maintain the constant great quality is another point I can’t wrap my head around… My own mind bursts with ideas but I don’t seem to be able to put it into words anymore…
Anyway, thank you for sharing your work
Greetings
Katharina
Date: Jun 19, 2019 1:20 pm Title: Excoriation and Happily Ever After
Good Ending! Everything was wrapped up. Although how Lindsay escaped being prosecuted, I'm still stumped.
Lindsay... just as well she can't have children. Her new lifestyle wouldn't have allowed it, and besides... She threw away the ones she did have.
Memphis received justification... Milton... received prison. YAY!
Mikey, Mikey, Mikey... Did he think that his anonymity at being 40 miles away, would somehow allow him to live his fantasy for the next five years? Michael Charles Kinney. Dumbass... the other guard had just said his REAL name! And for those five years as he lies in his bed at night, he can play those prophetic words over and over in his head:
It is you I hate. I hate you more than Jack. And I hated you more each second I spent with Justin. You will drift away from my memory.
Very, very good story. All I have left is to say...
That's All Folks! Y'all come back now ya hear! (with your next venture.)
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response:
I am so glad you liked it.
You could say she was punished by being unable to have children anymore, it was the one thing that she held over Lynette.
Best
Nicole
Date: Jun 18, 2019 5:57 pm Title: Excoriation and Happily Ever After
Wonderful End To A Funny, Heart-Wrenching Story I look forward to reading it over again for Years to come.
Brian found his Freedom, Family, Friendship, Love, True Love and Happily Ever After At Last!
Thanks Another Fantastic, Amazing Story😃
Date: Jun 18, 2019 12:40 pm Title: Excoriation and Happily Ever After
What a wonderful ending to a wonderful story. Amazing writing. As always I will miss them since I get so attached to the characters, but happy endings allow them to move on as do I to another of your fantastic stories. Keep writing and I will keep reading.
Date: Jun 18, 2019 12:35 pm Title: Excoriation and Happily Ever After
Wow. You tend to make the most of your stories. Plus giving us a happy ending.