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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 11:55 pm Title: REFLECTIONS and DECISIONS

I meant to say Always Worth The Wait, Because It Is Always Intriguing, Amazing, Awe-Inspiring to Read!!!

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 11:51 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 14: SLIP AND FALL

There are no lengths Michael won't go to get what want a Murder wouldn't gaze him because to him everything has been for the greater good of himself, so who cares if people have to for so can Brian all to himself they weren't important anyway and were just obstacles to his happiness.

Makes me wonder what lengths was Lindsay willing to go once her fantasy life with Sam imploded on its self and Melanie wasn't stupid enough to take her back?

I was not expecting that answer to where is Brian-lite but now that we know where part of him what did Michael do with the rest?

What other secrets does that house hold?

I think after everything is settled and the criminals have been sent away everyone should go on vacation a d that house needs to be destroyed brick by brick.

Short Chapter, Long Chapter alwa

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 9:24 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 14: SLIP AND FALL

OMG.  I figured Brian lite was dead, but where he was found is mindboggling.  I love a mystery and the mystery is how Michael was able to get away with all this.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 9:10 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 14: SLIP AND FALL

Wow, just wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Amazing, just when I think the twists and turns are straightening out, you hit us with another BIG twist..  As always, my dear, FANTSTIC, WONDERFUL writing.  My love for this story is happy with any chapter, short or long.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 9:03 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 14: SLIP AND FALL

Hi Nichelle,

You are so very welcome!

You already know that you are one of my favorite writers on KD: I was so enthralled and entertained by your witty and punchy comments that I started reading your stories.

Please don't doubt: many other readers and I are waiting for every single of your updates.

Take care!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 8:25 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 14: SLIP AND FALL

800 !!! Thank you Nichelle for this wonderful story!!!



Author's Response:

 

OMG!!!! THANK YOU- ALL OF YOU SO MUCH!!! There are no words to describe how wonderful it is to know that you have enjoyed my work this much. Yeah, the tears of HAPPINESS are officially coming and will go unchecked for awhile yet.

A MAJOR SHOUT OUT TO CLAIRE for being the 800th review as well! Hard to believe that this story started all because I wasn't sure my gift of writing was still in tact after having taken so much time off due to a medical condition. And here we are- 91 chapters later- and still going strong!

I LOVE YOU ALL!

 

~Nichelle

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 8:25 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 14: SLIP AND FALL

799...

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Date: Jun 08, 2020 8:24 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 14: SLIP AND FALL

798...

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 8:23 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 14: SLIP AND FALL

Too tempting... I'm gonna cheat again :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 8:22 pm Title: CHAPTER 83: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION

I don't know how I haven't commented this one yet.

The first thing I noticed was "But more importantly, right now, my dick is so hard, it could probably drill for oil" and then, the fireworks started and I couldn't highlight everything that made this chapter a wonderful one!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 8:17 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 14: SLIP AND FALL

This story is such a roller-coaster! Based on what we already have as clues, I bet Michael is no stranger to murder.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 8:02 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 13: YO QUIERO DINERO

Apart the banter between Mel and Brian, always delightful, I really need to bleach my eyes and my brain: Micheal's plan is so Machiavellian.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 7:53 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 12: A MANIFESTATION OF THE GLORY

It's sickening how Debbie managed with the "Novotny" hacking.

It's also sickening to read how Davies reacts: too bad for him, Justin isn't the "little" woman.

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 6:31 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 14: SLIP AND FALL

Ohhh my. So good! I love a great mystery. I always felt Michael was smarter than he looked. Looking forward to more. 🥰

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2020 7:30 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 13: YO QUIERO DINERO

Wow it's just horrible I hope Michael will rot in jail and all the others. 2 updates made my day !!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2020 3:54 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 13: YO QUIERO DINERO

Well Michael just added to his charges and thankfully added to Lindsay's and the Sap's aswell?

The lengths Michael was willing to go to have Brian all to himself shows just how depraved he is and unforgivably selfish and self-absorbed to think Brian would ever love him with it without telling drugs.

Deb should have a front row seat to what her treating and seeing Michael as an innocent Angel did to everyone around him, and that her always excusing his selfish, entitled behavior made him thank it was okay to kill an innocent baby, Justin and set her up for the murder of Brian.

Deb's hands are just as dirty as Michael, Lindsay and their co-conspirators because she sees the truth but is still looking for a way to excuse Michael's behavior.

Deb may think rationally but she will always put Michael's needs first before anything or anyone else, but despite the fact that she admitted to herself that he was wrong but it won't change that she will still look to blame others especially Brian for everything Michael does wrong to tarnish the halo in her eyes.

I too wonder how many more secret compartments are in that room or house and what fresh Hell they hold for Brian?

Where is Brian-Lite?

What does Justin have plan for that house once everything has been cleared out and will it be videotaped so Michael can watch his dreams and once and for all?

Gus is going to get a lot of kisses and hugs from his daddies once they get home.

is it spiteful if there should be a family photo sent to Lindsay of Brian, Justin, Gus and Melanie showing off their rings and Melanie's baby bump in front of their new plastered everywhere Lindsay, Michael, Deb and the co-conspirators can see it?

Thanks For the Update 😃

 

 

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2020 11:34 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 13: YO QUIERO DINERO

Omg how much more is the evil Michael able to do to the boys. They are strong together they need to keep focussed and Michael won't win. The thing Michael lost sight of is Justin got 1500 on his SATs so he can separate the emotion and look at the evil for Brian.

Reviewer: Calliesky Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2020 7:05 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 13: YO QUIERO DINERO

This just may be the most evil Michael ever written 😳

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2020 5:34 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 13: YO QUIERO DINERO

You have a conniving brilliant mind. This is so good.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2020 3:59 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 13: YO QUIERO DINERO

Thank you, thank you.  We learn a lot and most importantly is where is Brian lite?  Mikey is sicker than I thought possible.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2020 3:46 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 13: YO QUIERO DINERO

OMG, this was amazing.  Your writing continues to just get better and better. The pictures of Michael were perfect.  And, you know how much I love this story so 2 chapters so close together made my weekend.  Thank you.  Stay safe.  Rating 100.  LOL, but seriously at least that.

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2020 1:58 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 12: A MANIFESTATION OF THE GLORY

thanks for update

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2020 7:11 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 12: A MANIFESTATION OF THE GLORY

What motive could Michael have that weren't in need of jail time?  Would love another chapter asap.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2020 6:53 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 12: A MANIFESTATION OF THE GLORY

Wow, wonderful chapter for one of my favorite stories by one of my favorite writers.  Fantastic.  Love the powerful Justin.  Looks like things are really going to heat upon now.  Hope all is well with you, my dear, during these really difficult times.  We just have to stay strong, take care, be safe and let our voices be heard.  

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2020 5:16 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 12: A MANIFESTATION OF THE GLORY

Yes Deb was willing to go to any lengths to make sure Michael had everything his greedy little heart desires, she even convinced herself that forcing Brian to take of and cater to Michael was for the greater good even if she had to verbally and sometimes physically abuse him to do it.

Michael learned from Deb to find a weakness and exploit it until the well runs dry then rinse and repeat with everyone they allowed into their lives but Brian was their favorite.

Yes Deb deserves to be in a cell next to or with Michael for the rest of her life then chained to him in Hell for all of Eternity made to watch and feel the pain they caused individually and together to everyone they "Supposedly Loved" but especially to Brian who they abused worst than Jack and Joan did because they used love to find "Love" to find him to them.

 Brian and Justin destroyed all the chains that bonded them to people who would see them broken, bloodied and dead to satisfy their own selfish desires.

Deb, Michael, Lindsay and their cronies have no power over them anymore Brian and Justin are much to Strong, In Sync, Happy and Free to ever be pulled down or destroyed Ever Again.

Like Carl I am also curious what else Deb did in the name of Love For Michael that had serious repercussions for someone else later the that Deb chose to ignore??

Justin laid David's flat with a few well chosen words and now he is going to learn what happens when you mess with a Power Couple who have some very Powerful Friends just because you are too afraid to admit who you really are and are jealous of others who can live honestly.

Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!!!

Thanks For the Update 😃😃

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