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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2020 6:09 pm Title: Ear to the Ground, Eyes on the Prize

The Plot Sickens!

Yeah I kinda figured Vance had a thing for Justin and hates Brian for getting and keeping Justin for years while also being Amazing at Everything!

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2020 3:11 am Title: Ear to the Ground, Eyes on the Prize

Interesting chapter.  I need to reread this from the beginning.

Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 06, 2020 11:16 pm Title: Vince and Daph Say Their Pieces

Okay, a bit confused about the times when they saw 'the look', but still going great!  Love all the updates!

Thanks.  Take care hun.

Deb L.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 06, 2020 1:32 am Title: Vince and Daph Say Their Pieces

So many questions.  I can't wait for another chapter to find out just a little more about who is behind it.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 05, 2020 5:59 pm Title: Vince and Daph Say Their Pieces

Geez Brian and Justin Just Can't Catch A Break!

So now there is someone else they need to worry about and deal with along with Howard Bellweather?

Vacation to some place tropical with the family after all the nutjobs have been put away a everyone can decompress and relax again once they talk it all out and leave it behind.

Brian and Justin need to hug their kids and hold each other until the pain goes away and they feel whole again because once again as they get rid of one pest several more pop up to wreck havoc again.

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 05, 2020 1:35 pm Title: Vince and Daph Say Their Pieces

Oh my god !! You are so good. Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 05, 2020 11:54 am Title: Vince and Daph Say Their Pieces

Great chapter.  Wonderful twists and turns in the writing. 

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 21, 2020 3:57 am Title: All We Need to do is Convince and Find

You are a genius. You th8nk of so much.

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 21, 2020 3:17 am Title: Dad and Daughter Play a Timely Tune

Finally reading this whole story at once. So good. So freaking good.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2020 4:45 pm Title: All We Need to do is Convince and Find

Brian and Justin have been lighting so many blazes they should really invest In a fire extinguishers lol

So Gardner and Bell are old friends huh?

Bell obtained Sap's things when he died.

What stuff is in that safe that Sap forgot or hoped would never be found?

Is something associated with Gardner in there?

Luther actually will make a good attorney or aid for prisoners who wanted to reform once they get on the outside of help those who will never get out better themselves if they want?

Jenny is going to be a wonderful judge next month lol

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2020 3:51 pm Title: All We Need to do is Convince and Find

Oh my.  So we have Cody Bell and a safe in the basement.  Can't wait for answers as to what is there.

Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2020 12:28 pm Title: We Meet Again...Unluckily for You

So only Vance left to sort out now?

Sill loving all your current stories. Esp fond of 'Secrets'!

Thanks

Deb L

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2020 12:33 am Title: We Meet Again...Unluckily for You

Yeah, Nancy and Linds go to jail.  Wonderful writing.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2020 4:35 pm Title: We Meet Again...Unluckily for You

Lindsay and Nancy Are To Jail Together!

I do hope Lindsay realizes what she experienced before was basically a hello welcome to the neighborhood and this time around it could possibly be worse especially with her entitlement issues and wit Nancy around I am sure they will be getting what they deserve on a daily basis with sprinkles lol

Mel is really seeing the error of her ways and doing what she can to make amends to Brian and Gud because she let her jealousy cloud her judgement about Brian.

So Vance has The Saps things and is trying to still make Brian and Justin suffer he should seriously think about getting a life and savior his freedom because his days are numbered.

Luther would !and a good lawyer because for years he took without caring who suffered for repayment he should help others give to society instead of demanding, help others better their lives and appreciate this second chance to earn respect, love, and acceptance.

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2020 12:57 pm Title: We Meet Again...Unluckily for You

We learn some things and all is looking up.  I can't wait to reread this from the top to see what I missed seeing.  

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2020 5:34 am Title: Dad and Daughter Play a Timely Tune

Uh oh, Brian knowing about the Sap and Justin: even if he thought something happened, it's another level to hear about it from Justin.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2020 5:19 pm Title: The Big Reveal...And How Three Wasps, Two Coots and a Probie Finally Got Rid

Terrific chapter.  Bye, bye Linds.  Wonderful writing.

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2020 9:31 am Title: The Big Reveal...And How Three Wasps, Two Coots and a Probie Finally Got Rid

Yay awesome job Jennifer always looking out for her boys 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2020 5:31 am Title: The Big Reveal...And How Three Wasps, Two Coots and a Probie Finally Got Rid

Wow!  What a plan.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2020 1:16 am Title: The Big Reveal...And How Three Wasps, Two Coots and a Probie Finally Got Rid

Thank You Jennifer for being so smart and Thank You Zee for showing Jennifer that a good plan is always best for a idiot who just won't learn their lessons properly.

I honestly feel for Marcel because a dildo was still too generous for those loose legged heifers but it is funny that they can't tell the difference between an actual dick and plastic but when you snatch is colder than Antarctic what would a hot hard cock feel like anyway? lol

Melanie and Leda are having a Boy!😀

Nancy will run herself ragged looking for Sophie and trying to help Lindsay in this new situation she landed herself in.

Five years is too short but it does make a nice start😂

Gardner is on parole too right?

Thanks For the Update 😃

 

 

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2020 9:04 am Title: Oh So That's How and That's Why

Wow, what a great plot idea.  Never would have thought of this.  Wonderful idea and writing.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2020 8:17 pm Title: Oh So That's How and That's Why

Woah.  So Gardner killed Sap?  Or do I have it all wrong?



Author's Response:

hello there, hope you are keeping well...you are correct he did.

Happy reading and stay safe

MissMerlot

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2020 7:52 pm Title: Dad and Daughter Play a Timely Tune

Okay, just how will Sap go about finding them?

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2020 1:25 am Title: Oh So That's How and That's Why

So Vance is seeking revenge because he is attracted to Justin and since that will never happen he wants to destroy Justin and Brian aswell because Justin wants and is with Brian?

Sounds like Michael and Lindsay have another sibling who shares their brain?

Vance being hooked on drugs explains some stuff about him but the rest is pure him and purely stupid and selfish.

Not surprised Vance would get rid of Sapperstein the last thing he needs is another chain around his neck but he left himself wide open for bigger trouble heading his way.

Archie may not be able to bench above his body weight but he will be able to fly out of prison enjoying the sweet smell of Freedom and a new start in life.

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2020 1:04 am Title: Dad and Daughter Play a Timely Tune

Zee and Faal are Geniuses!

I can see why they are considered the best at their jobs cause not only are they good at protecting their clients but they are Damn Near Fetal when it comes to protecting their family.

Thank Goodness They Are!

 

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