I loved this story! But not the end, please! Michael and Debs have gotten off to easily! Michael's "punishment" doesn't fit the crime, I mean he brought Herma into their covens and him and Deb get to be purebloods.
I absolutely love JR and Gus' characters in this. The way you wrote the characters gave them such depth.
Always a delightful read MissMerlot!!
I love Vampire stories!!
I always hesitate to read vampire stories but ultimately yours were pretty cool. I will never tire of your tales of Michael's selfish arrogance and sneaky meanness and when Debbie steps in it's perfect. Thanks for this story and I can't wait for you to finish the others. Despite the difficult situation, I wish you Happy Holidays.
The end? Noooo. This was so good but Michael didn't get what he deserves!
Hola! Fret not, this might not be the end - after all Justin has his Warlock side to explore. As for Michael, would you want to listen to Debs denigrating your prowess for centuries on end?
Happy holidays.
MissMerlot
Thank you so much for this story. It has your writing and storytelling and vampires too! It was a really good read. :)
I'm still enjoying the others too!
Deb L.
Aww thanks Deb! Really appreciate the kiind words.
Happy reading of the rest
MissMerlot [Nicole]
What a wonderful ending to a great story. Fantastic writing. I will miss them.
Thank you! They may be back in the future, after all Justin has to find out more about his Warlock side doesn't he...
MissMerlot
That was great I love vampire Brian and Justin.....
sad to see it end.
Thank you for the lovely comments, I might do a sequel exploring their Warlock side in the future.
MissMerlot
So Debra and Michael are sentenced to a life I felt they have always deserved eternities together with only each other as company just the punishment both deserve for their selfish actions.
Brian and Justin getting married and the wonderful gift Brian gave Justin really seals the deal they belong together, I like that Emmett and Drew along with David and Christopher will be ruling while Brian and Justin do what they enjoy while being there when they can.
Gus, Jenny and Hunter will be well looked after and quite protected as they get use to their duties and the adventures they will have for centuries to come.
This was a really fun story to read and I look forward to reading it again and again for years to come.
Thanks for the Update😀
Love it. The kings have been crowned. Wonderful, just wonderful.
Jenny is going to need more honey cakes lol
Michael is a jerk for what he did and didn't do when he knew he had Herma and Deb is a jerk as well for protecting him instead of doing the right thing.
Thankfully They Got Theirs!!
Thanks for the Update😀
The truth comes out and brings about fainting. LOL.
Oh this was great. Wonderful writing.
Can't wait till they find out!
Deb L
I don't think Deb and Michael have fully grasped jyst how much trouble they are in and how it will not improve in four days when the True Rulers ascend the throne.
This Is Going To Be So Much Fun!!
Thanks for the Update😀
Deb and Michael finally get what they want but not the way they wanted it. Love it.
Oh this was a good chapter. Finally Michael & Deb are seen for what they really are. Wonderful writing.
Michael and Deb will finally get what they deserve. Can't believe they have the audacity to deny the truth.
Thank You Michael Once Again For Having A Mouth That Never Stays Shut and Thank You Debra for Giving Him That Mouth and For Opening Yours As Well!!!
They Are So Stupid!!
Their punishment shouldn't be just Banishment but to experience the pain they have inflicted on others for years and left destitute.
So many are going to wish they had never been apart of this plan.
Brian and Justin are so Hot!
Thanks for the Update😀
Wow, that was a great chapter. Dislike the Sapp almost as much as Mikey. Wonderful writing.
Brian and Justin were sensual and living to each it which will help to strengthen their bond which will be very powerful.
Sapperstein Got Exactly What He Deserved!!
He won't be lonely for long others judgement day is coming sooner than they realize.
Oh This Is Going To Be Fun!!
Thanks For The Update 😃
Very interesting chapter. Sap got what he deserved.
So we learn that Deb is the rotten apple in the vamp world. She needs to be dealt with along with the Sap and Michael. After Brian and Justin are finished having their fun.
My My My Looks Like Brian and Justin Are About Rock The Roof Off For Hours Of Not Days!!
Sapperstein, Debra, Michael and Dixon are going to wish they have never been born or a very quick death which none of them deserve for the things they have done.
Also looks like Christopher and David may be rocking their own roof off its hinges lol
Such Interesting Developments Are About To Take Place😃
Thanks For the Update 😃😃