[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2020 8:04 am Title: Christopher and Consequences
Yay, Chapter 24. Oh I loath Sapperstein. My insomnia is full blown tonight so new chapters were a real treat. Maybe now that I have made my eyes tired, I will get some sleep. Wonderful writing.
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2020 2:45 am Title: Christopher and Consequences
I really like this. I love all your detail. Looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: Jul 18, 2020 2:08 pm Title: Challenge Accepted and the Unexpected
Lindsay's one of the good guys now. So why did they wipe that Christopher wanted to be a doctor? And who is 'they'?
Date: Jul 16, 2020 5:50 pm Title: Challenge Accepted and the Unexpected
chapter 23 is entered twice, no 24
[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2020 12:23 am Title: father Throws Down the Gauntlet...Ex-Son Throws the Axe
Great chapter. Wonderful writing.
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2020 4:21 pm Title: father Throws Down the Gauntlet...Ex-Son Throws the Axe
Deborah may think she is a Queen but she will always be lower than she ever was before because of her superior attitude which gets her nothing but humiliation along with Michael which will always be highly amusing for everyone to witness.
Whatever Dixon thinks he will accomplish by suddenly turning up to claim Michael as his son I am getting he will regret this plan in now time at all.
Michael, Deborah and their co-horts are about to learn that Respect Is Earned Not Given Freely.
Brian and Justin are going to enjoying tossing each other until the lesson starts at four, do hope they don't get carpal tunnel? lol
Oh How The High and Mighty Will Fall and what a Lovely Splat It Will Make!!
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2020 2:36 pm Title: father Throws Down the Gauntlet...Ex-Son Throws the Axe
Why does Deb think was she wants matters. Can't wait to see what you have planned.
Author's Response:
Because it does...in her halfliing mind, she's 'pure' in her soul. Her coming back down to earth is gonna hurt1
Happy reading.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2020 4:46 pm Title: Mother, Brother, Sister...Other
Love Cute and Cuter. Great idea for a story. Terrific writing.
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2020 3:53 pm Title: Mother, Brother, Sister...Other
Some very interesting developments is happening not just with Brian and Justin but with Lindsay and Sapperstein along with it seems someone has a fang missing wonder who it is??
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2020 1:37 pm Title: Mother, Brother, Sister...Other
Lots of questions. We now have a Lois figuring in.
[Report This]Date: May 19, 2020 1:05 am Title: Confessionals, Connections and an Order
I'm not really into vampire stories, but this one is so good. Great writing.
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2020 5:13 am Title: Confessionals, Connections and an Order
Somehow I don't think Sapperstein will get his wish.
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2020 1:34 am Title: Confessionals, Connections and an Order
WOW!! Justin and Brian get anymore connected they are going to start an inferno!! lol
Lady Deborah really thinks she has some power but like her son she is living in Fantasy Land and if she is not careful she might end up staying there with Michael as her only company.
Jennifer like Lindsay is seeing that her games aren't really working and it is best to face the truth then hide in denial with Michael and Deborah, she is seeing what is important and that it isn't power but being true to oneself and everyone else, perhaps now she can understand what it means to be be in love and to have love returned?
Ben's boyfriend has arrived and Michael is seen lacking again anything but an annoyance though what Justin did to him was funny.
Cute and Cuter are Adorable!!
Sapperstein and Dixon are playing a dangerous game hope they are ready for the consequences heading their way.
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2020 1:44 am Title: Play Time!
Love when Mikey is miserable. Terrific writing.
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2020 1:31 am Title: Epiphany and Empath
Love all the twists and turns in the plot. Great job. Wonderful writing.
[Report This]Date: May 04, 2020 7:22 pm Title: Play Time!
Lindsay has changed for the good. Michael on the other hand takes after his ma. What lines did Mikey and Deb try to hide?
[Report This]Date: May 04, 2020 6:48 pm Title: Epiphany and Empath
So Justin and Lindsay are related. Is that good? Mikey's dad is Dixon, how sad is that.
[Report This]Date: May 04, 2020 1:57 am Title: Play Time!
Sounds like they had a lot of fun with this exercise too bad Michael was there but hopefully he will be too busy to interfere in everyone's fun with his mother getting cleaned up and shut in his room whining.
Jenny and Gus are going to love being around Hunter who is going to love having them near.
Brian and Justin seem to be getting stronger together?
Wonder what other plans Rodney has for Deb and Michael!
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: May 04, 2020 1:42 am Title: Epiphany and Empath
Wow, Was Not Expecting That Reveal!
Perhaps there is hope for Lindsay yet??
Michael and Deb seriously need to stop acting like they are clever and better than everyone else...then again why ruin everyone's fun at their expense.
Their lack of feeling towards Jenny is about as surprising as their ability to think about anyone but themselves.
Why shouldn't Deb have to experience what Michael experiences with his selfish behavior by fending for herself too?
Wonder how she would score of she had to do the tests and the training too?
Like the way Justin calms Brian down it is so cute😆
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Apr 17, 2020 5:04 am Title: Lord Victor Makes His Move
I can't wait to read about the training. How sweet that the boys now have ferrets.
[Report This]Date: Apr 16, 2020 5:59 pm Title: Lord Victor Makes His Move
Great update. Ferrets? Didn't expect that. Great idea. Wonderful writing.
[Report This]Date: Apr 16, 2020 5:29 pm Title: Lord Victor Makes His Move
Craig is going to be at the first training session?
Oh This Is Going To Be So Much Fun!!!!
Victor was smart to let everyone know that Michael and Christopher don't have the power to order anyone at and they must tend for themselves, Michael can't wash a dish without whining so washing his own clothes and having to clean his room will be a great for him.
Perhaps Lady Deborah would enjoy the same service along with Jennifer?
Whatever Lindsay thinks she has to offer isn't worth anything and is as wanted as Michael's flat Ass!
Brian and Justin have ferrets can't wait to find out their names.
What Is Going R Happen Next Will Be Memorable For Everyone Who Will Enjoy It!
Thanks For the Update 😃
Stay Safe😀😀
[Report This]Date: Apr 06, 2020 9:00 pm Title: More Learning, She's Back and an Arrogant Step
Oh. this was good. Can't wait to see what JR does to Lindsay. And, Mikey is going to get it if he messes with Emmett's Drew. Wonderful writing.
Date: Apr 06, 2020 8:24 pm Title: More Learning, She's Back and an Arrogant Step
So much fun to come. 🤗 Go Emmett. Wish deb was going to get some of the same. Thank you for this story.
[Report This]Date: Apr 06, 2020 4:49 pm Title: More Learning, She's Back and an Arrogant Step
Lindsay is going to wish she stayed on her comfy cushion cause JR is about to make Her life a living hell!
Michael making a move on Drew who is with Emmett is going to be so much fun for everyone to witness but no fun for Michael.
Brian and Justin don't want to miss the spectacle of Michael and Lindsay training and their weak attempts at flirting it will be fodder for ages.
Too bad Deb can't join in the training especially when they both start whining and have to do double or both try to get out of it.
Thanks For the Update 😃