Reviewer: Auggie Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2019 7:29 am Title: A- WHERE YOU HEADED?

That was so good. I loved Justin so much. More more

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2019 7:37 pm Title: A- WHERE YOU HEADED?

Love the interaction between Brian & Mel. She feels like a better fit to Brian in the friendship dept. And like Mel I can't wait for the explosion when Lindsay finds out the truth!

Great chapter! 

*Hugs*

Deb

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 04, 2019 7:46 pm Title: A- WHERE YOU HEADED?

I enjoyed Brian and Mel's talk. I, too, always thought the two of them could/would have been friends without the Lindsay dynamic. They are both career-driven and have similar personalities.

Interesting to find out they aren't going to disclose the 'marriage' just yet. I have to say, I saw the added comment you left on the plot bunny... btw... was this ONLY supposed to be a one-shot - as it doesn't say 'completed'. Anyway... wondering where you should take this... I know MY feelings/views would be to sit back (as Mel said) wait for the implosion and self-destruction, so that Lindsay's parental rights will have to be questioned... at which time, Melanie, Ted, Emmett, Vic, and possibly Daphne, will have to move to California... right along with Gus. Nothing like leaving the wet rags behind. Funny David is putting up with Michael and his incessant badgering of Justin and continually calling Brian. I'm sure that wasn't in his plans when they moved to Portland. It sounds like either Justin needs to get restraining orders, or have his number changed. Even if he's not taking their calls, they are still filling up his voicemail, and what better way to say 'Leave me alone'? And, how long before Jennifer has biting words with Debbie? But, Mel is right, Lindsay's true colors will SHINE when she finds out the truth. She will have NO use for Mel any longer.  But they do need to get Gus away from Lindsay, because she will bleed then dry. And it's too bad that the DUMB BRIGADE will eventually learn that is where Brian is. But, no money, contributes to, no plane ticket.

I almost LOL when you referenced Melanie as Melvin. On one of my reviews in Kathleen's story, I made the same comparison. Nancy was so glad Lindsay might be straight... and I said her wife's name was Melanie... not Melvin. So, yeah... this was funny.

Lindsay blew through hers faster than a hooker could get a man off. Lord woman, where DO you come up with your terminologies? I get more chuckles reading some of the names and stuff you write. But, my question would be... how and on what... did she blow through THAT much money? (inconsequential... I know.)

So, after all my ranting... I'm looking forward to seeing how you let this play out... and what kind of excitement you will bring into their lives. (hmm... where did Kip move to?) LOL...

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 03, 2019 11:48 pm Title: A- WHERE YOU HEADED?

No one can get Deb to see reason when it concerns Michael and her need to be right and in control of everyone, I find it funny that a woman who hasn't had a relationship since the night Michael was conceived thinks she can tell Brian or anyone else how to act in a relationship.

First get one that lasts longer than a vibrator without buying new batteries then dole out advice, until then have fun in the dark with your joystick and your twenty pack of batteries.

Lindsay will be all sympathy and using Gus to spend time with Brian before she tries to slither her way back into Brian's bed.

Brian has a neon sign over his bed that reads No Pussy Ever Again, Especially Lindsay Peterson!!! and Lindsay would still try to slime her way into that bed.

Mel standing back to watch Lindsay should be amusing while she goes about making sure she and Gus are protected, no way is Lindsay going to change in her mind Brian is just denying he is bisexual and in love with her, so she will continue to try to play her games no reason why Gus has to be a pawn jus because Lindsay refuses to admit the truth which is so obvious.

I wouldn't delete those voicemails to Justin of Michael spewing his venom when the time comes and Deb crosses that line where nothing can repair the pain she has caused intentionally I would send them all to her then change my number immediately.

So Lynette is richer than Nancy and Ron huh?

Good for Her!

Mel asking Brian to step back and not come to Lindsay's rescue will have more of Lindsay's true nature coming out, let's just hope Ron is ready to cut off the atm on his end too, time for Princess Lindsay to stand on her two feet and support herself without a safety net also a lesson Michael needs to learn too.

Can't Wait For More!!

Thanks For the Update 😃

 

 

Author's Response:

OMG!!!! It's after 2 AM EST and I'm sitting here rereading through the reviews, but this ONE! LMFAOOOOOOOOooooooooo I can't even stop laughing right now. I was sitting inside the doc's office the first time I read and had people side-eying me. But now my son has just come upstairs because he heard me guffawing loudly through the vents!  OMG! You have put me in tears and stitches again tonight with this CLASSIC piece of hilarity!!

HUGS and HICCUPS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 03, 2019 11:29 pm Title: A- WHERE YOU HEADED?

Oh this was so good.  Brian and Mel conspiring.  Works for me.

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 03, 2019 10:59 pm Title: A- WHERE YOU HEADED?

great, cant wait