Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2021 8:47 am Title: CHAPTER 10: WHY CAN’T WE BE FRIENDS Part 3

Loved it!! I am on to the next chapter, to see how it all continues.

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 4:16 pm Title: CHAPTER EIGHT: WHY CAN’T WE BE FRIENDS

LOL Now these two women are scary add Daphne in and we will have a party

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2020 11:41 pm Title: CHAPTER EIGHT: WHY CAN’T WE BE FRIENDS

Daphne will rip them a new Ass Hole...loving this story where Brian and Justin are secure in their relationship and mel is finally coming around

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2020 12:34 pm Title: CHAPTER 10: WHY CAN’T WE BE FRIENDS Part 3

Loved it !! I cant' wait for the next installment.  It was a good fireworks. Happy New Year  for you and all your family

Marie-France

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2020 3:21 am Title: CHAPTER 10: WHY CAN’T WE BE FRIENDS Part 3

great update,  I love the way Brian just announced to everyone that they were married.  Justin kicking Craig out of the business and his mother ( grandmother) supporting him are just great too.  I always love all the twist and turns you put into your stories.  

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2020 2:28 am Title: CHAPTER TWO: EXPECTATION VERSUS REALITY

Great chapter.  Wonderful writing.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2020 3:11 pm Title: CHAPTER 10: WHY CAN’T WE BE FRIENDS Part 3

I love this kind of fireworks!!! The last scene where Michael gets 3 blows at the same time is genius! Even Debbie reacted.

Daphne is like a nasty pitbull: ready to get its way. She is feisty and wordy.

I'm so happy that Craig is going to lose his company and job; what a slap in his face!

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2020 11:42 am Title: CHAPTER 10: WHY CAN’T WE BE FRIENDS Part 3

PLEASE TELL ME THERE WAS ANOTHER YOUTUBE VIDEO MADE~ These things would go viral! Besides, think of all the people who missed the live-action show!
This was classic... perfection!

Do you think Mommy Dearest maybe sees how awful her widdle boy is now? I suppose he will want to sue Daphne now. Although, she had already banned him, and he was still in her place of business... but the police saw everything... or weren't they looking in that direction?

Lindsay arrested... God, I was hoping that would take place in the Diner? YouTube??? (sorry... I'm relentless... but seriously... who wouldn't not capture that on their phone?)

Chapter title: WHY CAN’T WE BE FRIENDS?  If you are referring to Lindsay, Debbie, and Michael... ah... because nobody wants to be friends with bitches?!

I hope security was there to escort Mr. Craig Taylor from the premises of Taylor Electronics without so much as a ballpoint pen.

Unwell, huh? Well, I suppose that’s one way to look at it. She couldn’t possibly be sweating any worse other than if she was a hooker at the altar trying to barter with the Holy Ghost for her soul’s salvation!

I totally lost it with that one... is it because it's almost 5 AM and I need sleep? Nah... it's your way with words.

The Stud has retired, and announced to the Avenue he's MARRIED!

~ Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2020 8:46 am Title: CHAPTER 9: WHY CAN’T WE BE FRIENDS Part 2

OH... WOW! I was all prepared to tell you how much I loved your comedy routine you had going what with Lindsay's idiot musings... (but, oh Martha - she knows of Brian's new status) then Debbie's simple asinine assessment of her son and his virtues. I was laughing through the whole chapter... first Em tries to set Deb straight... then the stupid bitch thought she could intimidate Daphne... advancing on her... sticking the red claw in her face - Christ... I wish she'd raised her hand to slap her... but then Tony comes out - LMAO - New Boss... New Owner...

Oh Fuck! - INDEED!

Well, we should have quite the interesting meeting when Michael and Lindsay show up...

WE RESERVE THE RIGHT TO REFUSE SERVICE TO ANYONE!

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2020 5:30 am Title: CHAPTER 10: WHY CAN’T WE BE FRIENDS Part 3

Wow!  What a chapter.  Loving Daphne and Emmett.  Not feeling it for Deb.  Michael needs to be put in a hospital and have his brain wiped.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2020 3:24 am Title: CHAPTER 10: WHY CAN’T WE BE FRIENDS Part 3

Daaaammmmmnnnnnnnn!!!!! 

Michael got What He Deserved, But That Was Just The Start!

Daphne is my girl she can dish it out and make it hurt for days cause she isn't afraid to take on the devil himself if it means protecting Justin and Brian.

Ron and Nancy are about to learn what following Lindsay could do to their lives and their standing in The Nest.

so Lynette is getting her inheritance for Christmas huh?

Good for her she has a man in her life who.is making his own rules and living his life his way and isn't afraid to challenge the outdated rules of The Nest so he can breathe freely.

Charlie, Tatum and Suzette are quite the force to be reckoned with as Craig just found out by his own stupidity and his mother laying out that she is sorry to have birthed him.

Justin, Jennifer and Molky having control of Taylor Electronics is interesting cause they could make it successful which would chafe Craig's ass but who could they trust to run it while Justin  is living his dream in California with Brian?

All those people shouldn't lose their jobs just because Craig sucks at running a business.

All avenues are closed to Lindsay now unless Nancy and Ron choose to join her losing side and that would be Stupid?!

Judge Barrow is smart and he can see like Brian, Justin and Melanie that Lindsay is going to fail cause she doesn't see what she did as bad as long as she gets what she feels she is entitled too,playing the victim card is one of her favorite thing to do when she isn't playing puppet master or Lady Muck.

Michael and Lindsay share one brain and it is focused only on themselves and those they can manipulate that is why their plans will always fall apart.

Brian let it out that he and Justin are Married!

Lindsay is going to jail.

Michael will be back in jail soon.

Has Deb Finally Realized The Truth?

She still needs to be told off so she doesn't backside and expect to be forgiven just because she fed them.

Damn Ted Missed Everything!

I so hope someone recorded everything that went down cause just talking about it won't do it proper justice.

Thanks For the Update 😃

Happy New Year!

May 2020 Be The Best Year For You and Yours🎉🎊🎆🎇

 

 

 

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2019 10:38 pm Title: CHAPTER 9: WHY CAN’T WE BE FRIENDS Part 2

Yay Daphne you go girl 😀😀

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2019 12:48 am Title: CHAPTER 9: WHY CAN’T WE BE FRIENDS Part 2

Deb is about to realize that Daphne is her worst nightmare cause she as afraid of Drb, Michael and Lindsay as she is a mosquito bite, Daphne can fish it out with the best of them and she do believe in holding back when her hackles are up.

Time for Deb to know her place which isn't the center of everyone's universe Emmett, Ted, Brian, Just and Melanie are grown-ups who can make their own decisions, if it is a mistake then it is their mistake to fix? Unlike Michael who even if he had the instructions still couldn't figure out without everyone laying down their lives for him first.

What Michael, Deb and Lindsay want if for everyone to now to their edicts and never think for themselves again but no one will do that because it comes at too high a price.

Deb better rethink raising her hand her to Daphne cause she will lay her flat on her considerable Ass without a care.

Imagine the applause that would get in the diner and all over Liberty Avenue?

So Lindsay is going to use Joan and Craig to get Brian to bend huh? 

Good Luck With That!

Only two people can get Brian to bend his knees and that is Gus and Brian lol

Where is Joan?

How much trouble is Ron about to get into for Lindsay's eavesdropping?

I doubt the Chanders will care beyond making sure Daph is well looked after but then putting Deb in her place should be funny.

Everyone is converging on the diner this is about to be Epic!!!

Thanks For the Update 😃

Happy Holidays!