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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2019 8:12 pm Title: CHAPTER SIX: THE HARBINGER OF A BEAUTIFUL NIGHTMARE EQUALS…

That Selfish, Over-Inflated Wannabe Princess has been abusing and neglecting Gus for quite sometime in her scheme to have Brian all to herself along with his money.

Leda and Mel have the patience of saints because I would've killed that Bitch for what she did to Gus and Mel.

Thank Goodness Leda called and stayed on the phone to record what went down it gives credence to Mel and Brian having sole custody and Lindsay being charged with Child Endangerment, Abuse and Spousal Abuse while Intoxicated.

Only two places Lindsay would run Deb or Mommy and Daddy which means anyone of them can be charged with harboring a fugitive, I Seriously Hope it is The Petersons they will look lovely on the front page being escorted out of their home in handcuffs.

Lindsay getting high on drugs and alcohol cause neither Brian or Justin will acknowledge her is pathetic but also makes me wonder if Michael wasn't helping that new addiction too?

Mel can't blame herself for not seeing how disturbed Lindsay was being she was busy working to pay the bills and caring about Gus, Deb was with Lindsay a lot so how come she didn't notice how unhinged Lindsay was becoming?

Brian is coming and when he finds out everything Lindsay better run and never show her face ever again cause I doubt even Justin could stop him.

If course I would worry more about Jennifer her bite is about to become a lot worse than her bark cause Lindsay is now on her but Shit List and everyone else would be wise to stay off her warpath.

Yep Michael is going to be stupid and so will Deb the moment she sees Brian while he is dealing with this crisis concerning Gus and Mel.

Thanks For the Update 😃

Now where is the next chapter just kidding I can wait, don't know if my nails will make it though😜😜

 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 11, 2019 5:08 am Title: CHAPTER FIVE: THE HIGH COST OF BEING WILLFULLY DEAF, DUMB and BLIND

I'm sure EVERYONE is hoping and praying Lindsay didn't hit Gus, but I'm the opposite. Gus is still a baby. It is NOT going to make a lasting impression. BUT WHAT WILL... is Lindsay getting jail time for child endangerment and child abuse. It MIGHT also snap Debbie back to reality. Because, I think she's still in denial mode. Regardless of who Lindsay hit, she is going to come off as a pariah.

Brian is going to want to have a go at her. Abuse - hitting - anyone, adult or child - is NOT in Brian's world. (and don't get me started on the anniversary party that is NOT part of your story.) ANYWAY...I really hope Justin is on that plane with him. Brian is definitely going to need Justin to keep him grounded.

Apparently Debbie didn't hear the convo when Michael was in Justin's room, for a minute I was hoping Jen's cell phone recorder was on. No such luck. Anyway... I'd have loved to see the tumble down the stairs! hehe...

Nice twist having Marty/Marilyn owning the building.

You're aware you left us all wanting more, right?

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 09, 2019 7:05 pm Title: CHAPTER FIVE: THE HIGH COST OF BEING WILLFULLY DEAF, DUMB and BLIND

Faults & faults Michel, Lindsay, Deb are the Most Ungrateful, Unlikeable interfering characters of QaF. Its Good to read fics like these Pointing out their evident manuplations through out show done to Brian & Justin.

 

 

 

Everyone has its limits. Good for Marlyn, Vic, Jen. Deb will fail try to load it on other. Lindsay should be doomed clearly.

 

Wonderful written, & update. Kudos to you. :-)

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2019 2:24 am Title: CHAPTER FIVE: THE HIGH COST OF BEING WILLFULLY DEAF, DUMB and BLIND

lovely update.  So glad that justin is the sneaky man that he is and taped the conversations.  Now, hopefully, Debbie will wake up.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2019 9:40 pm Title: CHAPTER FIVE: THE HIGH COST OF BEING WILLFULLY DEAF, DUMB and BLIND

It's always fun to throw mysterious Marilyn in the mix. I really hope you were not hinting that Kind hurt that baby. How is a child going to fit in Brian and Justin's new life.

Reviewer: lizw102 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2019 7:27 pm Title: CHAPTER FIVE: THE HIGH COST OF BEING WILLFULLY DEAF, DUMB and BLIND

Ok miss cliffhanger...lol. Loving this so far!! Great bringing in Mysterious Marilyn. Can't wait for the next chapter.

 

 

Liz

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2019 6:54 pm Title: CHAPTER FIVE: THE HIGH COST OF BEING WILLFULLY DEAF, DUMB and BLIND

Debbie needs to hear about Michael's invasion of Justin's privacy in her home, even though she will undoubtedly try to excuse it.  What and who has Lindsay harmed now.  It better not be Gus.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2019 6:04 pm Title: CHAPTER FIVE: THE HIGH COST OF BEING WILLFULLY DEAF, DUMB and BLIND

I say it will be 80-20 Deb will truly listen and understand that her behavior along with Michael and Lindsay's has Brian and Justin avoiding them all like the plan along with everyone else. (80% Denial, 20% Actually Listening)

With over a hundred and sixty bullying, harassing voicemails Deb should be embarrassed by her part iin those voicemails.

Marty owning the building while also looking out for the safety, protection and hearing of the tenants is a good thing, all three of them need to be banned from that building and if Deb doesn't change it could be the start of her being banned from more with Michael and Lindsay.

Jennifer and Vic are showing extreme patients considering how deluded Deb is but you can't fully stoop to her level cause you won't get anywhere.

Besides Jennifer wouldn't look good in Orange lol

If Lindsay hit Mel she will regret that cause Brian along with everyone else will be pissed but if she hit Gus then she better kill herself cause neither the police or jail will save her from the wrath that is about to rain on her head.

Brian and Justin are coming to Pittsburgh, Everyone Brave For Impact!!!

If Ron and Nancy get involved to get Lindsay out of trouble then I hope they are prepared to deal with one pissed off grandmother in Jennifer Taylor and two pissed off Fathers in Brian and Justin.

Ron and Nancy better stay out of this battle because the second they get involved will be the last mistake they will ever make.

Please Hurry With The Next Chapter!

Thanks For the Update 😃

 

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2019 5:43 pm Title: CHAPTER FIVE: THE HIGH COST OF BEING WILLFULLY DEAF, DUMB and BLIND

You have officially killed me.....I hope she didn't hurt any of our boys to include Gus or Mel for that matter. Hopefully they can get to her in time before she can cause further damage.

p.s. update soon pretty please ☺️☺️☺️

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2019 4:46 pm Title: CHAPTER FIVE: THE HIGH COST OF BEING WILLFULLY DEAF, DUMB and BLIND

Oh fine! 😊 Stop with it up in the air. Great writing !

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2019 4:18 pm Title: CHAPTER FIVE: THE HIGH COST OF BEING WILLFULLY DEAF, DUMB and BLIND

If she hit Gus, Brian and Mel with Fry her ass, with Jennifer verbally flaying her skin off her.

Then Jennifer will make her name in the countryclub set so toxic that she and her family she so wants to empress are knocked down to the gutter where they belong.

And if it is Mel, both Vic and Brian will get Mel and Gus THE HELL OUT OF THE PITTS.

 

This cliff has to be resloved soon....PLEASE???  (sending a sensory-deprivation tent than only you, your computer, and a bottle of JD can access)

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2019 4:16 pm Title: CHAPTER FIVE: THE HIGH COST OF BEING WILLFULLY DEAF, DUMB and BLIND

Hurry up with the next chapter... that's quite the cliff you left me on... so good!

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2019 4:09 pm Title: CHAPTER FIVE: THE HIGH COST OF BEING WILLFULLY DEAF, DUMB and BLIND

Goodie!!! It's on again! With MM in the mix.

Vic and Jennifer are really patient with Debbie. I'm not sure one session will be enough to get her to open her eyes.

What did MM feel? What did Lindsay do? Evil cliffhanger!

I'm surprised regarding the fact that one person can own a building and some other people can own flats within said building. Is it common practice in the US?



Author's Response:

Hey Claire! Thanks for your question. In the US, there are several ways to own a property. Of course, there is the standard purchase of a house or commercial building. There is renting with an option to buy (done sort of like leasing a car with that same option), and then there is a situation like the one which appears in this story.

From my experience with condos vs. apartments, the one thing that can happen- and does here- is where there is a sort of split ownership. That means although Brian owns his loft flat out, he still pays a homeowner's association fee and a portion of the property taxes to the owner of the building. It's the same with a condominium complex and is usually included in a seller's (be it a realtor/ property management company, or an independent homeowner who opted to negotiate privately) contract concerning the HOA fees to be signed by the buyer. The contract can (and usually does) include a list of maintenance costs, homeowner's insurance, facility fees and in some instances closing costs at the time of negotiation. In actuality if the option is available, it's good business sense to take advantage of it since you get all the rights and privleges of owning your place, but none of the key responsibilities like fixing the roof, etc that owning an actual house has.

Sure you might pay a portion beyond your monthly mortgage payment to contribute to the cost of repair, but it's definitely miniscule as opposed to paying the whole 10K out of your own pocket at one time to have an entire roof replaced. So in the case of Marty/Marilyn owning the building, there are both apartments (in which rent will be collected each month as a way to pay the property taxes on the land) and lofts that are owned (which have a standard HOA fee that changes hands that Marty will receive a portion of, and can be viewed as a steady source of excess income). Therefore, Brian would still have to pay for use of the space- not the loft itself, but the land that it's technically housed in.   

I hope this answers your question to the fullest.

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

 

 

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2019 4:52 am Title: CHAPTER FOUR: REALITY BITES

I wonder what Deb wanted Brian for If as son to her or Father to Michel. Even I liked Deb but Never as mother to whiny mikey. Deb (In QaF) did interfer TOO much like Michel & Lyndsay. *mama like her doesN't know the best indeed.

I love how Lindsy fails. Good for Mel. Reality Bites and Michel & Lindsy needs be kicked constantly with Big Reality Boots.

Michel should not whine too much. He got rights To Be Kicked Out of loft building. *giggles

 

 

 

ThankYou for the Wonderful update. ðŸ™‚

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2019 5:50 am Title: CHAPTER FOUR: REALITY BITES

Does a certain blonde realtor own the building the loft is in? It sure sounds like it has Jennifer Taylor written all over it.

Christ, I can't believe Deb stood by and allowed Lindsay to act like Gus was an imposition. And what the hell bug crawled up Deb's ass blaming Brian for not answering his phone? Michael's shitty attitude is okay, because Brian didn't answer his phone? That woman needs an attitude adjustment, and Daphne is just the one to give it. She may be small, but that girl has all the fine WASP breeding, and smackdown's are going to be her specialty. And why ban Michael? I wish he'd have a job as a dishwasher, or something! Can you imagine Daphne as his boss?

The plotting that we were privy to when Michael and Lindsay forgot that we were sitting there and could hear every word. It's too bad a secret recorder couldn't have been left down in the couch cushion.

All money is now going between Mel, Ted, and Brian, right? Lindsay cannot physically get money from Ted, correct?

I am curious just what Michael may have tried to do in reference to the coach. As far as the tricks, yeah, we are all aware of his mantra, "He's had you, so fuck off."

Vic is a very wise, smart man. At the start of his and Mel's conversation, I couldn't help but think how much of that would have went over the other three's heads. But, when he talked to Mel about getting her and Gus out, I think it's high time Mel moved herself and Gus to sunny California.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2019 4:36 am Title: CHAPTER THREE: EXPECTATION VERSUS REALITY 2

Daphne is a hoot! Don’t let the doorknob hit you where the good Lord split you, or a dog should've bit ya.

Even though he’s as far removed from high-society as it gets.

I don’t want to become another Michael like he and Lindsay were with you and Brian at the loft. Almost makes you wonder if they had a rented apartment across the way, and had a pair of high-powered binoculars, what with their uncanny timing.

It will be my honor to protect you, Emmett. Little Daph... sibling of Penthesilea... hehe.

Or pay for me to have a new place ... NOW who's the gold digger? And, I'm not sure why he doesn't expect Debbie to pay his rent once again, like she was on his other place. Maybe he will try to move in with Mel and Lindsay. Poor Mel would be in an early grave. Now we just have to get Debbie to learn the truth about his return home, but it will have to come from David or Hank.

Maybe the Big Q isn't hiring. Hmm, but I bet the diner needs a new busboy now that Justin  is gone. Hey, it was good enough for Justin to work there...

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2019 3:10 am Title: CHAPTER TWO: EXPECTATION VERSUS REALITY

First, let me say, imagine my TOTAL shock tonight when I signed on and seen a dozen updates from stories I read, and not one of them came into my email!!!! I AM P-Oed! I was starting to wonder if everybody had taken a hiatus from writing. Granted, I've been busy, but I certainly would have stopped in to read a chapter here and there! ARGH! Okay, rant over.

Nice chapter. I enjoyed the talk between David and Hank, which also answered some of the questions I had. But to contact Justin and get the sound bite of all the voicemails that Michael (and I assume Lindsay) left, was genius. There could have been no doubt left in David's mind what he needed to do regarding Michael.

It sounds like Laurie was raised the same WASP way that Lindsay was. Gutter WASP. It certainly wasn't the refined way Jennifer Taylor was.

Professor B... a potential love interest? Any particular Professor B? Hmm... I had to chuckle... but I can't explain why right now. I might have to PM you. It's almost too funny.

Well, onto the next chapter.

HUGS  ~ Cathy

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2019 3:23 pm Title: CHAPTER FOUR: REALITY BITES

I love Vic; for one, he's the father figure Brian needs in his life and two, he is fair and doesn't do favorites.

They way you are building this story is genius; I don't think a lot of your readers will mind a longer story.

Mel and Vic are a great team and their antibullying is interesting to read.

I think Mel should remind Lindsay that she decided to be a stay home mom and should act accordingly: her top priority must be Gus, not his father.

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2019 7:57 am Title: CHAPTER FOUR: REALITY BITES

Certainly not upset you have to write more to give us the story lol 👍👍 I really enjoyed Vics intervention and then his quiet advice to Mel. I also enjoyed the new perspective on Blake I hadn't thought of that side of it. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2019 3:20 am Title: CHAPTER FOUR: REALITY BITES

Love how Vic and Mel managed to get away and have a heart to heart talk.  Wonder how Lindsay and Deb are getting along without them?  Every chapter leaves me with wanting more.

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2019 3:19 am Title: CHAPTER FOUR: REALITY BITES

Great chapter.  I like Vic.  I have always felt he was a great character and had such wisdom but due to his age, he wasn't a focus.  I like his ideas for Mel.  She should take LIndsay and make notes- then take them to the court.  

Reviewer: lizw102 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2019 12:45 am Title: CHAPTER FOUR: REALITY BITES

Great as usual. I like Vic advising Mel. The grusome twosome are going to lose everything and everyone and Deb right along with them if she she doesn't watch out.

 

Liz

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2019 12:31 am Title: CHAPTER FOUR: REALITY BITES

Mel has to stop stalling before Lindsay, Michael and Deb bring her down too cause they wouldn't hesitate to say that she ignored Gus's crying too or neglected him to go out instead of taking care of her responsibility.

So why continue to hand them ammunition and instead take it out of their hands by taking Gus away, it will save Melanie as well because she is seeing the true Lindsay for who she has always been but managed to hide well, a Spoiled, Self-Absorbed, Mean Over-Inflated  Princess who is use to getting her own way.

Denial Is Just Denying The Obvious.

Brian protected Deb and she used her supposed form of love to abuse him while also demanding more, if Deb chooses to give Michael one cent of her retirement fund then she deserves to suffer.

How much is in that fund?

Perhaps it is time for Vic to take his own advice and get out while he still can?

Wonder what fabulous outfit Lindsay actually needed the money for?

Of course Rodney isn't intimidated by Deb she has nothing on him and he can see through her act like cellophane, even Blake can see through Michael, Deb and I bet Lindsay to the nastiness they keep buried inside.

Aunt Del sounds Amazing and will probably be very useful to Daphne cause lets face it Deb will be fired when she tries to bully Daph and doesn't stop at the first warning.

Does a certain Blonde True Wasp Queen Mom own the building Brian and Justin's loft resides?

Damn I Can't Wait Until It All Comes Crumbling Down Around Them!!

Thanks For the Update 😃

 

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 29, 2019 8:45 pm Title: CHAPTER THREE: EXPECTATION VERSUS REALITY 2

I foresee a great cohabitation between Daphne and Emmett as they both adore gossips and Brian and Justin.

I love how Michael is already feeling bad just by arriving at Deb's. Poor Mickey!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 29, 2019 7:39 pm Title: CHAPTER TWO: EXPECTATION VERSUS REALITY

Interesting back story with Hank and Justin who is an artist, but also a very brainy and astute businessman.

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