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Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2021 5:51 am Title: CHAPTER ELEVEN: A SMALL PIECE OF PAPER THAT CARRIES A LOT OF WEIGHT

Truer words were never spoken. Both Lindsay and Michael deserve everything they get - and more

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2020 11:34 pm Title: CHAPTER FOUR: SILENCE CAN SAY MORE THAN A MOUTHFUL

So glad Mel did so well for all her work...and the kick ass outfit from the Glam Squad ! Please don't let david take the Weasel back !

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2020 11:10 pm Title: CHAPTER THREE: A FLASH OF US: A NEW NORMAL

Love how the friends come together to help Mel...Who would have thought ! LOL

Reviewer: qafqueenbee Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2020 4:45 pm Title: CHAPTER ELEVEN: A SMALL PIECE OF PAPER THAT CARRIES A LOT OF WEIGHT

i enjoyed the story. when will the next part be finished? therre is another part right?    

 

lah



Author's Response:

Hey Lah. There is definitely another installment in the works. So be on the lookout for it VERY soon! 

HAPPY READING and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: Pink Plate Special Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2020 4:17 pm Title: CHAPTER ELEVEN: A SMALL PIECE OF PAPER THAT CARRIES A LOT OF WEIGHT

My my my, what a mess Michael has made.  Get your revenge Tracy!!! Although I wouldn't switch positions with her for all the money in the world.  Don't want Michael anywhere near my bed!  Looking forward to the next installment!

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2020 9:03 am Title: CHAPTER ELEVEN: A SMALL PIECE OF PAPER THAT CARRIES A LOT OF WEIGHT

The two best friends are going to have the wedding of their dreams but not with the right person. You are a devil  I adore. I can't wait for the next installment. Thanks for this story

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2020 11:31 am Title: CHAPTER ELEVEN: A SMALL PIECE OF PAPER THAT CARRIES A LOT OF WEIGHT

Wow, Michael has met two women who think just like him and he's not liking it very much.

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2020 11:31 am Title: CHAPTER ELEVEN: A SMALL PIECE OF PAPER THAT CARRIES A LOT OF WEIGHT

Oh I enjoyed it both bitches are in their own hell and their wardens are enjoying their positions yay suffer bitches 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2020 12:35 am Title: CHAPTER ELEVEN: A SMALL PIECE OF PAPER THAT CARRIES A LOT OF WEIGHT

Well it looks like Michael screwed himself over in his mad dash to escape Mommy and now his jailer will enjoy twisting the ring around his neck over and over again until she can kick hi to the curve.

Bet the prenup is airtight and triple locked that Michael doesn't walk away with what she promised him and he can't fight back?

How long before he slips?

What should Brian and Justin get him for a wedding present?

Please Let it Be Something From The Big Q!!!

Deb finally sees the real Michael and she owes the world an apology for waiting so long torose-colored rose-colored glasses.

I do hope that conversation in the airport was recorded and put in YouTube for everyone to view and vote on forever, Lisa outed herself and Michael so hopefully it will get to David and everyone else quickly?

Everyone o on Liberty Avenue is going to seriously enjoy this new but if gossip perhaps they will throw a parade since Michael won't be able to walk on Liberty Avenue anymore.

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 04, 2020 10:50 pm Title: CHAPTER ELEVEN: A SMALL PIECE OF PAPER THAT CARRIES A LOT OF WEIGHT

good one

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 04, 2020 9:12 pm Title: CHAPTER ELEVEN: A SMALL PIECE OF PAPER THAT CARRIES A LOT OF WEIGHT

Ha ha ha, Michael escaping his Ma and falling into a huge trap! Pathetic guy!

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 04, 2020 8:57 pm Title: CHAPTER ELEVEN: A SMALL PIECE OF PAPER THAT CARRIES A LOT OF WEIGHT

Hehehe. Love how you fixed Michael. Great writing!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2020 9:12 am Title: CHAPTER TEN: DREAMS REALLY DO COME TRUE… EVEN IF SOMETIMES THEY’RE REALLY YOUR NIGHTMARES

Delightful! I know it's mean to enjoy someone's humiliation, but in Lindsay's case, she made so many casualties in her life that I actually don't feel so bad.

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2020 8:07 pm Title: CHAPTER TEN: DREAMS REALLY DO COME TRUE… EVEN IF SOMETIMES THEY’RE REALLY YOUR NIGHTMARES

thanks for update, love a Lindsey bashing

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2020 7:32 pm Title: CHAPTER TEN: DREAMS REALLY DO COME TRUE… EVEN IF SOMETIMES THEY’RE REALLY YOUR NIGHTMARES

BRAIN BLEACH! BRAIN BLEACH!

If she and her partner, Novotny, melded to become one complete person - move over Damien - your replacement has arrived.

So, other than THAT particularly unpleasant thought, the rest of this was the epitome of revenge, laced with humor. Being married in a conference room inside a correctional facility, being married in a newly-pressed orange jumpsuit, the union of the comsummation of her marriage, and the guests in attendance (although it would have been really fun to have had a larger crowd - standing room only - Emmett, Ted, Lynette, and a few other well-bred debutante's) there to widness the nuptials. And it was too bad Jennifer was the only one in white... Justin should have been in white with a boutonnière in his lapel... ah heck, they should have all worn white with corsages. The orange jumpsuit would have stuck out like a sore thumb! (Even more than it did!) LOL... (I think I just bypassed your evilness.) LOL.

I can hardly wait to see what Nancy has selected for Lindsay to wear once she reaches rehab. Unfortunately, I have pictures of that black sackcloth in my mind now. An unflattering baggy jumper-dress.

Well, the fact that we still don't know how the contract reads, this should prove to be some VERY interesting reading coming up, because we just KNOW, she's going to use her cell phone for nefarious reasons the minute she's able to.

And my last thought, pray tell, what is Lindsay going to do when her "husband" refuses to service her? I don't think she wants to get caught with someone else. I hope there's something in her contract about repercussions should she chose to cheat.

Touché, darling!

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2020 4:24 pm Title: CHAPTER TEN: DREAMS REALLY DO COME TRUE… EVEN IF SOMETIMES THEY’RE REALLY YOUR NIGHTMARES

Damn That Was Just so cold exactly what Lindsay deserves for the Harm she has inflicted on others and to think it is only the beginning.

Lindsay is going to play perfectly into John's and everyone else's hands along with her cronies so that at the end of this they all will be left with nothing except the king in their pockets to keep them warm.

I do hope when Lindsay swans into the country club to gloat she is treated as cruelly as she treated others too?

Love that everyone was there to see Lindsay getting married it will save them hearing later it was a glamorous to do.

Having her punished for cursing is funny but also should be added not keeping her room clean or doing her laundry by the end of the week she would be broke and need to do chores to have money lol

Perhaps Nancy, Jennifer and Daphne should go shopping for her new wardrobe I am sure they can pick clothes appropriate for her new status? lol

This Is Going To Be So Much Fun!!

Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!!!

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2020 12:52 pm Title: CHAPTER TEN: DREAMS REALLY DO COME TRUE… EVEN IF SOMETIMES THEY’RE REALLY YOUR NIGHTMARES

Now this is the start of a new phase in Lindsay's life.  Boy, am I going to enjoy this!

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2020 12:07 pm Title: CHAPTER TEN: DREAMS REALLY DO COME TRUE… EVEN IF SOMETIMES THEY’RE REALLY YOUR NIGHTMARES

Wow Lindsay is screwed and not in life affirming way! I love it! 

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2020 7:40 am Title: CHAPTER TEN: DREAMS REALLY DO COME TRUE… EVEN IF SOMETIMES THEY’RE REALLY YOUR NIGHTMARES

I can't wait to see John torture Lindsay in every way possible!

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2020 4:12 am Title: CHAPTER TEN: DREAMS REALLY DO COME TRUE… EVEN IF SOMETIMES THEY’RE REALLY YOUR NIGHTMARES

You wicked lady. I love it.

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2020 12:04 pm Title: APTER NINE: RULE NUMBER FOUR OF BEING AN ADULT: THE MOST VALUABLE ADVICE KENNY ROGERS EVER GAVE IN A SONG IS USUALLY RIGHT!

Cohorts in cunty 🤣🤣🤣loved Lindsay got her meal served cold by mummy! I am not a fan of Nancy but she knows Lindsay 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2020 9:35 pm Title: APTER NINE: RULE NUMBER FOUR OF BEING AN ADULT: THE MOST VALUABLE ADVICE KENNY ROGERS EVER GAVE IN A SONG IS USUALLY RIGHT!

I love the WASP battles and Nancy is delivering a major trigger to Lindsay.

Reviewer: Pink Plate Special Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2020 2:50 pm Title: APTER NINE: RULE NUMBER FOUR OF BEING AN ADULT: THE MOST VALUABLE ADVICE KENNY ROGERS EVER GAVE IN A SONG IS USUALLY RIGHT!

Oh Lindsay, he’s just not that into you girl! Love that people are putting some respect on Justin’s name! 

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2020 8:15 am Title: APTER NINE: RULE NUMBER FOUR OF BEING AN ADULT: THE MOST VALUABLE ADVICE KENNY ROGERS EVER GAVE IN A SONG IS USUALLY RIGHT!

I can't wait to see Lindsay prepare for a dark day when she gets in touch with Michael or Deb

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2020 11:21 pm Title: APTER NINE: RULE NUMBER FOUR OF BEING AN ADULT: THE MOST VALUABLE ADVICE KENNY ROGERS EVER GAVE IN A SONG IS USUALLY RIGHT!

What Lindsay never learned despite flaunting her upbringing that when you go after an innocent a swarm will come for your Ass and you will feel every sting for the rest of your life.

Lindsay keeps thinking she is so Clever but the true Geniuses have her number and the number of her cohorts and they are all going to pay not only with money but with prison time hopefully?I

Brian and Justin have very strong women guarding their back and it is a good thing they are their side because they would be lethal to go against.

How long before Lindsay screws up?

How long before she is doing drugs again?

How long before she cheats again?

is Ron finally ready to wake up and leave Lindsay to fall or will be be joining her!

Thanks For the Update 😃

 

 

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