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Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2020 3:11 am Title: CHAPTER TWO: DID THAT JUST REALLY HAPPEN?

Lindsay is a conniving bitch and she really has no respect for Brian.  Serves her right to be in jail for trying to run his life and make it the one she wants not the one Brian wants or deserves.  Michael, is as always a whining, baby who pitches a fit just like a two year old when he doesn't get his way.  So sad that he is going to take Debbie down with him.  Hopefully , she will wise up before it is too late, but I don't think she will.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2020 4:39 pm Title: CHAPTER TWO: DID THAT JUST REALLY HAPPEN?

I marvel at the web you're weaving for Ted... paper trails were mentioned... is this going to come back and bite some Pittsburgh residents in their asses? The fact that even though they are based in Atlanta... Wertschafter is in Pittsburgh... so, it seems like there will be a connection. Also, the fact that this area is brought into the story, almost confirms that the plot is just starting...

Lindsay: I almost want to smile, thinking of all the hoops my parents will jump through to keep my name out of the papers and off a court docket…

Wouldn't it be something if it's discovered that Mumsie and Daddy Peterson were involved in the money trail... or are you going to sink Lindsay even further?

Boy, what can I say about Michael? The diarrhea mouth is certainly running! But, was Deb shocked and embarrassed because that is something she has said in Michael's presence in the past? or, just the fact he would spew such venom, which discounts everything she has worked towards for gay rights on Liberty Avenue? Her flushed red cheeks could be for either reason.

BUT WHY... did she not just let him be picked up with the rest of the garbage? Could you imagine being dumped in the back of a huge truck filled with all the unimaginable refuse? One thing I'm sure of: they wouldn't put him in the recyclables.

“Is it wrong to feel relieved?” Brian asks in response. This was sad... Brian was dealt shitty parents, only to find a replacement family, only to be shit on again. I'm amazed at the man he has turned out to be. Definitely NOT a product of his environment. But other that... YES, WE ARE ALL RELIEVED!

I have a feeling that this will definitely be one of our more eventful assignments to date.” DEFINITELY... Michael doesn't know what NO means... let the fun ensue.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2020 8:34 am Title: CHAPTER TWO: DID THAT JUST REALLY HAPPEN?

thanks for update

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2020 6:28 pm Title: CHAPTER TWO: DID THAT JUST REALLY HAPPEN?

I Wish I could feel A modicum of sympathy for Deb but she made Michael what he is by over-indulging him to the point where he mentally never progressed beyond infancy with her and fourteen with Brian (Cause thats when he had Brian all to himself) so she needs to see that Michael will throw anyone including his own mother under the bus to keep Brian focused on him and only him.

I wouldn't be surprised if what Michael shouted outside is just the start of what he is about to do to get Brian back by his side and under his feet, Deb said a lot of stuff over the years in front of Michael and Vic about everyone who entered The Diner, she told secrets they didn't want shared with anyone with her son who can now use it to make everyone suffer, while Vic never would because he knows the value of trust not information to use later, Michael could possibly go up and down Liberty Avenue spilling dirt on not just Brian, Ted and Emmett but everyone and he wouldn't care one iota.

Everyone in the diner who recorded what happened can see that Deb didn't deny what which shows that whatever they innocently said in front of Deb was stored for ammunition later, just like they witness her do to Brian over the years and later other members of the supposed family.

If the Petersons were smart they would change their number and ignore Lindsay ever existed, but since they aren't smart I hope they also are ready to reap what they have down helping Lindsay, she is about to cost them more than they have ever realized cause it does not sound like Lynette and her husband will be running to their rescue.

I wonder if the person being investigated in Atlanta has tied to certain people in Pittsburgh?

Guess Lindsay's sources weren't as good as she and probably Michael were paying them for?

Ted is free to make quite a name for himself now in accounting circles and with Brian and Justin backing him it won't be long

Daph associates with very interesting and smart people who with all these brains could make Liberty Avenue not only the most happening place to be anyone gay, lesbian, bi, transgender and undecided but they will be making money hand over fist.

Daphne could be quite a force at anything she wants to do first with improving the diner then who knows?

Yes, It Just Got More Interesting!!

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2020 3:47 pm Title: CHAPTER TWO: DID THAT JUST REALLY HAPPEN?

Poor Debbie; she deserves what is coming to her, but having Michael yelling this is the nail missing to her coffin.

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2020 1:25 pm Title: CHAPTER TWO: DID THAT JUST REALLY HAPPEN?

I love every bit of this. Who is going to deliver whiner boys set down ?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2020 1:08 pm Title: CHAPTER TWO: DID THAT JUST REALLY HAPPEN?

Love this chapter especially Ted's POV.

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2020 9:45 am Title: CHAPTER TWO: DID THAT JUST REALLY HAPPEN?

Bam bam slap down bitches I loved it thank you! However I did have sliver of empathy for Deb in the last scene as she did the walk of shame out of the diner with her red face! But don't worry I will get over it 🤣🤣🤣

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2020 9:24 am Title: CHAPTER TWO: DID THAT JUST REALLY HAPPEN?

I can't wait to see Lindsay Michael and Deb fall into the gutter. I hope that Peterson's parents cannot or will not do anything for her. Thanks for the update

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