[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2020 5:42 pm Title: Chapter 12
I was Laughing So Hard When The Gifts Were Handed Out!
Brian and Justin are sending quite the message with their choice of gifts to Ted, Emmett, Deb and Carl be no will got the expensive gifts along with Ben (Cashmere? Seriously?) while Michael got three Batman t-shirts to go along with his fantasy of living in Comic Book Land and Lindsay got a mirror to compliment how utterly vain she is and that no one appreciates her appearance more than herself and the only person she will ever love.
Ben should stop pretending he knows Brian like Michael does and open his eyes to reality Brian is not going to ever chose Michael He already has the man he loves completely tied to him Forever and is not going to live in Neverland with Whiny or Wannabe.
I really hope that mirror wasn't very expensive Lindsay might sell it though it would be funny if she tried and it is only worth forty dollars or less lol
Can't Wait For Mel's Turn, Think All Of Pittsburgh Will Here The Response?
I do hope Jennifer and Molly liked their gifts?
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2020 7:35 am Title: Chapter 11
Mélanie understood everything I think. Ben will stay silly. Gus is perfect in his innocence and his confidence in his dads. greta chapter. More smacks please!
[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2020 7:28 am Title: Chapter 10
Yesss I'm waiting for the fireworks!
[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2020 12:26 am Title: Chapter 11
Out of the mouth of babes. Thank goodness for Melanie.
Date: Mar 30, 2020 8:54 pm Title: Chapter 11
I am so loving this. Cannot wait for other chapters. I love that your chapters are short and regular. Thanks so much for sharing a great story.
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2020 8:26 pm Title: Chapter 11
YES!!!!! I'm in here bouncing in my seat Emmett-clapping! I'll just bet that Ben feels like the Dumbass he really is, while Michael and Lindsay are standing there watching their dreams laughingly walk away. I mean to think that Brian would choose either of them IS definitely LAUGHABLE!
BTW... that smackdown of Justin to Lindsay was CLASSIC! I mean if you're going to try to correct someone, at least have your own facts straight, right? LMAO!!! So looking forward to MORE!
HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2020 7:45 pm Title: Chapter 11
Lindsay's gift should be a kick to get flat Ass and no more access to Gus's support and forced to pay back every cent she has spent since Brian opened that account😀
Michael should get kicked in the balls but first he would have to have some then forced to pay back every cent Brian has given him over the years😀😀
A Black and White Party? Brian can't hate that if Emmett plans it to perfection
Want to know what Emmett got lol
Did Lindsay get a lump of coal to replace her cold dead heart? rofl
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2020 6:22 pm Title: Chapter 10
Yay for the clusterfuck.😠loving this.
Date: Mar 30, 2020 4:36 pm Title: Chapter 10
Can’t wait for the smack down !!
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2020 4:17 pm Title: Chapter 10
WHOO-HOO!!!! I CAN'T WAIT!!!! Em is cracking me UP! I agree with his reaction wholeheartedly. Ben really needs a healthy dose of STFU, and for him to even imply that Michael has been a father-figure.... LAWD HAM TURKEY Someone put the poor blind, one brain-celled horse out of his misery! It's actually painful to watch him be so damn stupid.
Between Mel and Brian, I couldn't love the verbal slaps and smackdowns any more. With no more than a few words, Selfish, Inc was told that their days were numbered. And yet, Mel and Brian were holding back for the kids' sakes. I was also PROUD of Debbie for not giving into Michael's whining tirade. Lord knows after a week of him, I'd have been ready to launch him headfirst into oncoming traffic- Erm, make that an hour. But she's willing to provide backup for Brian's peace of mind in all the ways that matter, beginning with ordering him to tell the little demanding ingrate that he's NOT moving in with Brian.
And now we are up to the announcement portion of the evening...YES!!!! MORE smackdowns, tears and tantrums to come!
Excellent chapter!
HAPPY WRITING AND HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2020 4:05 pm Title: Chapter 10
Ben should seriously just shut up Michael has spent as much time with Gus as he does Jenny besides the A-Hole can't stand that Gus is taking all the attention off of him and will never be a father figure to Gus who is smart enough to know a moron when he sees it after all he cm see through Lindsay and he is only four.
Gus should his affects to the people who matter the most to him and Mel showed her backbone to the ones who are getting on her nerves.
Emmett is going to knock Ben's head off very soon lol
Justin has arrived with gifts let the fireworks start😂
Thanks For the Update, Can't Wait For More!! 😃
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2020 3:28 pm Title: Chapter 10
This gets better and better. Unfortunately I always want more so another chapter soon would be appreciated.
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2020 1:27 pm Title: Chapter 10
loving this story - well done - love you giving Mickey and Lindz the slap down they deserve :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2020 8:22 am Title: Chapter 9
Lindsay is really a bitch. The illusions of best friends will soon fall. I can't wait to see their reactions to dinner when they don't receive anything and Mélanie and Deb nice things. Gus is a jewel he understands everything and does not hesitate to tell everything to his Dad and his Jussin.
I like short and quick updates even if I read several at the same time! Thanks for this story
Date: Mar 30, 2020 8:11 am Title: Chapter 8
Gus is so cute. Lindsay will quickly learn her lesson I think and it will not please her.
Date: Mar 30, 2020 8:08 am Title: Chapter 7
Ben is an idiot! I hope he will listen to Emmett and find some balls!
Date: Mar 29, 2020 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 9
thanks for pdate
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2020 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 9
Yes! I prefer lots of updates with smaller chapters than a long time between updates with long chapters.
Can't wait for the Delusional Duo to get the revelations and smackdowns they deserve, but then I am very much into Anti-Moron and Anti-Bitch stories!!
Thanks,
Deb L
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2020 9:44 pm Title: Chapter 7
I am really enjoying this story.
Just a quick point, not a criticism, in the series, they were supposed to retire to Palm Springs, California, not Palm Beach, Florida. Maybe more gay friendly?
Take care, hun,
Deb L
Date: Mar 29, 2020 9:17 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh I see a smack down coming for MOMMY! Can't wait to see what she thinks about all the gifts for everyone but her, especially the jewelry for Mel...lol.
Michael and Lyndsey saying those things around Gus is shameful but not suprising because they have no filter.
Jennifer needs to give her own smackdown to Lyndsey for her to even begin to know what Jennifer would like or not like is appalling.
Can't wait for more,
Liz
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2020 9:03 pm Title: Chapter 9
Love how Gus cares for Jenny and Brian is willing to help with her unlike other people. Can't wait until Mel sees all they got for her and Lindsey learns she's not the Queen.
Date: Mar 29, 2020 8:59 pm Title: Chapter 9
Well I almost missed 3 chapters phew caught them. Wow they are finding out a lot about evil Lindsay feeding her son lies about Jen and Justin's importance in Brian's life. I feel that is going to back fire big time yay!
Date: Mar 29, 2020 8:59 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh my could Ben be any more delusional? He hs been around the Novotnys too long blaming Brian for everything where Michael is concerned. Maybe he will listen to Ted and Emmet and get his head out of the sand and move on.
Loving this,
Liz
Date: Mar 29, 2020 8:50 pm Title: Chapter 8
Thanks for the update, another great chapter and don't ever worry about short chapters all are great!
Gus is so sweet to make sure Jenny and his Momma gets his love and Lindsey is left out and she should be the way she is acting not calling her son at all in the four days he has been gone. The gift he buys should be a mirror as she is only interested in herself.
Going on to the next chapter can't wait.
Liz
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2020 8:33 pm Title: Chapter 9
Scissors are too nice for Lindsay and Michael how about a very sharp machete for both them with their names engraved on it?
How dare Lindsay be so dictorial about Jennifer and Deb that little girl is about to learn you don't screw with Jennifer and not expect a serious soul crushing payback Wasp Style.
Lindsay and Michael are in a world of trouble so they better enjoy their freedom while they can because things are going to change Brian and Justin are going to lay down the law and those who don't like it can go to hell because there will be No More Second Chances.
Gus is such a thoughtful sweet little boy but Mel needs to stop trying to protect Lindsay and let her deal with her consequences Gus and Jenny need more than what Lindsay can give.
Time to cut Lindsay's spending habits and make sure everything she bought is taken right back even if Deb and Jennifer have to stand over her while she does it then that money is put back in Gus's account and she doesn't have access anymore.
I Swear I Want To Slap That Bitch!!!!!I
Mark of good story telling when you imagine killing some characters with total glee and abandonment😂😂
Thanks For the Update 😃