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Reviewer: nickknack Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2016 5:31 pm Title: Footnote

This story really struck a chord with me, I felt like I was immersed in the series again.  I only wish you would continue it and rewrite some of the wrongs that disappointed us all as our beloved tv series continued. I really like the path Brian and Justin are on in this, and their evolving relationships with the "family".



Author's Response:

Thank you. 

I think that there were so many opportunities that the writers/ producers ignored in favor of a sort of points scoring. This chapter was an early attempt to explore some of the options.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2016 4:48 pm Title: Footnote

Wonderful story. Thank you so much for writing it. 



Author's Response:

Thank you.  It's much appreciated.

Reviewer: 7Wildwaysup Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2016 1:14 pm Title: Footnote

I love this fic! I loved it the first time I read it years ago, and I still love it!

And I'd love a new chapter of Homework...

Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Thanks, Kathleen

 

One of the things I'm really looking forward to with the changes that will be coming up for me soon is the opportunity to spend more time writing.  Especially Homework.

Reviewer: eureka1 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2016 7:57 pm Title: Footnote

What a stupendous footnote conlusion! Both Justin and Brian are such strong men, standing up proudly for themselves.

Brian's response to Todd surprised me yet again, but it shows that Todd's initial reaction to Brian and Justin could be altered, that he wasn't a complete homophobe.

And the notion of influencing Senator Baxter to introduce legistation against hate crimes...perfect.



Author's Response:

Thank you. At one of the conventions Peter said that the way to improve things for the gay community was to create spaces where gays and lesbians could tell their stories so that the straight world could learn to see who they really are.

That was actually a while after I wrote this but I think this is exactly the sort of dynamic he meant.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2016 5:01 pm Title: Footnote

Wonderful chapter.  Like how the breeder changed his tune.  That Brian got the TV and player for Justin and Justin was smart enough to realize that.  Did not like how Justin was beat up, but it made the story.



Author's Response:

Thank you.

The minor bashing is so typical of the incidents that nearly all of my gay friends went through at one point or another.  I hope it's different now, at least in some places. But I don't doubt at all that it's still happening in way too many places.

Reviewer: Shell Scott Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2016 3:14 am Title: Footnote

Awwwwww,,Brian soooooo loves his Sunshine 😍 Is there going to be another one? I hope so. Loved all of them ❤️



Author's Response:

Thank you.  This really was intended to be absolutely the last chapter.  But somehow the ideas just kept coming.  Personally, I've always thought that my muse just tricked me into writing my first long story knowing I never would have started it if I'd realized that's what I was taking on.

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