Date: Apr 08, 2017 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 7
What a nightmare this Michael: always jealous and disrespectful. Poor Hunter: not only he's HIV+, but his "father" is an asshole.
[Report This]Date: Apr 06, 2017 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 7
I love the meet-cute with Hunter and Matt. So adorable!
I can't believe Michael wouldn't think to provide for Hunter! He's legally his father! What is wrong with that man?
Yeah, Michael, racist "jokes" are hilarious. Faal rocks.
I love Brian defending Justin. It'd be even better if he beat Mikey's face in again, LOL.
Awww, kittens!
I cannot believe Michael was about to out Hunter's HIV!! That is just... beyond cruel.
Date: Jan 11, 2017 11:10 am Title: Chapter 7
I like Matt. He can stay. What the hell is Michaels problem?
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2016 3:08 am Title: Chapter 7
this chapter should have been named how many times Mikey can screw thing up. Love how many people called him on his shit.
Author's Response:
Methinks that will be the title of C12
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2016 1:02 am Title: Chapter 7
I like that new characters are being introduced and that they aren't not allowing Michael to continue acting up without calling him out.
I like Faal's advice to Justin to step back and let Brian fight his battles it shows that they are standing side by side and it shows Justin that he doesn't have to take on Michael or anyone else alone, he can stand back to let Brian put Michael/anyone in their place, it strengthens their relationship cause they both know that all battles will be fought together and shows others that when one talks they both are united in every decision, plus they can't be played against the other anymore.
And also when they knock someone down a peg or two it makes both of them Hornier and the sex HOTTER!! lol
Michael using Hunter's HIV status to embarrass him in front of his new friends and his crush makes me want to smack him to another century.
Ben needs to get him and Hunter away from Michael the man is toxic, selfish, Inconsiderate, loathsome little worm and they both deserve better.
Thanks For The New Chapter :)
Author's Response:
I have enjoyed writing the new characters, there is another one coming who impacts Ben's life hugely and in a good way.
Faal and Zee are going to impact Michael's life and not in a good way....
Date: Sep 27, 2016 12:02 am Title: Chapter 7
Loved the sweetness of the kind people in this chapter. Mikey is so cruel, it's unfathomable that Ben, Hunter and JR have to deal with him. Again, a terrific job of handling some tough subjects.
Author's Response:
I am glad you think it was handled well, I thought Hunter's first proper kiss needed to be gentle. And rest assured from C8 onwards the smackdown begins.
Date: Sep 26, 2016 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 7
Really want to just hug the crap out of Hunter and throttle Mikey. Ty for another great chapter
Author's Response:
Welcome and thank you too
Date: Sep 26, 2016 9:09 pm Title: Chapter 7
Really enjoying the friendships between Hunter Gus and Jenny. they really seem to be keeping Jenny a big part of it dispite the rough beginning. Now that everythign has been talk through it all seems to have smoothed over. I get the feeling that Jenny is really questioning Michael's attitude. Michael seems to have all these plans for "later" and being able to take care of Jenny, and trying to have everyone else make Jenny a priority, yet she seems very content with things as they are. while Michael has these plans/ideas, will Jenny burst his little bubble and tell him that his attitude towards Hunter is unexceptable? she's already called him out on his comments towards Matt etc. Otherwise, she and the boys, and the new groups of friends that have joined them will have a good friendship it seems. And YAY!!! Matt and Hunter kiss. so sweet. Happy for them both!
I think Faal, Zee, Brian and Justin are going to develop a terrific relationship! All are strong individuals, and strong as coules. I also believe that both will helps strengthen each other as well in their own ways, Like when Faal told justin about allowing Brian to fight a few battles for him. 15 years together and still as passionate as they are...amazing! and a positice influence for our boys.
WOW...Michael just doesn't seem to want to learn. Seriously....how long is he going to get away with this shit? He gets a few talking tos, but nothing seems to stick with him. Even Ben's comment will more than likely fall on deaf ears. Michael is just going to continue with the "I can do/say whatever I want" BS. Good on Carl too for pulling Michale aside. Hope everyone really give it to him but good, adn soon!! Like you said, I also hope that the little push that Ben needs comes soon as well.
Another brilliant chapter where I want to come through the computer screen adn kick some ass.
Cheers!
Elaine
Author's Response:
Elaine, your reviews make me laugh and boost my writing spirit. Methinks you are going to like C8...
Nicole
Date: Sep 26, 2016 7:52 pm Title: Chapter 7
What an AMAZING chapter!! I am in LOVE with Faal, Zaden and Matt! Faal is my hero! I try to dispel myths and stereotypes with everything I do so I appreciate his putting that Twerp without a brain and an enormous chip on his shoulder, in his place! I'm sure that Justin also loves the advice Faal gave him especially since it allowed Brian to do what he has needed and wanted to do for so long. Between angry sex and gratitude sex, Brian and Justin are sure to have an AAHH--MAZINGGGG time! LOL
As for Captain Pain-in-the-Ass, I sincerely hope that he doesn't have to wait to lose Ben and Hunter. His ignorance and jealousy is consistently growing to abject HATE where Hunter is concerned. Furthermore he has learned to lie about his intentions with a straight face. He really is completely morally reprehensible. It's burning my ass that he is seemingly getting away with everything he's doing; that he is being given chance upon chance to change and yet he is not learning a damn thing except to get worse. Nevertheless, I am still looking forward to watching his downfall as fast as I can read it!
I am soooooo rooting for Hunter and Matt as well as Ben and Steve! Ben already has a fan in Taylor!
Happy writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Thanks Nichelle...decided I couldn't wait any longer and so the Michael smackdown begins in C8...your words of support mean a lot
Off to continue C9!
Hugs
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Sep 26, 2016 7:41 pm Title: Chapter 7
Michael got a verbal smack-down, now he needs a physical one... And I'm pretty sure there are several who wouldn't mind taking a swing...
Thanks for updateding so soon. I'm loving this fic...
Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response:
Thanks Kathleen...the queue for punch Michael gets longer every minute
Date: Sep 26, 2016 7:38 pm Title: Chapter 7
Yay Hunter you go boy man Michael is such friggen asshole I can see faal and zaden being big part of the family can Michael get caught with David now lol
Author's Response:
David is coming and not in a good way, let's say that he and Zee know each other
Date: Sep 26, 2016 7:33 pm Title: Chapter 7
Can I castrate Michael?
Author's Response:
No but figuratively some does...