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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2017 1:26 pm Title: Chapter 8

So, Michael is staying with Drew and Emmett: what a delight for them! For once, Deb listened to Carl, that's a major change.

Reviewer: Angelhead Devilbed Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 06, 2017 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 8

Michael is just a despicable, disgusting excuse for a human being.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2017 11:31 am Title: Chapter 8

Nope, not getting better until Michael can honestly admit to himself what an ass he is. 

Reviewer: 7Wildwaysup Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2016 4:29 pm Title: Chapter 8

Things are looking up, well for everyone except Michael... Too bad he's sucked Drew and Emmett into his void, hopefully they'll come to their senses soon enough...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Oh yes they do...and Emmett serves that dish cold!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2016 11:52 am Title: Chapter 8

So much goodness that I had to take notes.  Love the kitties.  Faal is another favorites.  And what did happen to the food?  It's about time that Ben tossed the dimwit out,  Just how did Emmet get suckered into taking Micheal in.

Author's Response:

Lilah the living scarf as based on my late Beaute who was more a chest warmer.  Faal is such a lovely character to write.  Food was at the store Michael wanted to be a gourmand, this from a man who eats like its his last meal...ugh!  And if you remember the tantrum thrown when Brian didn't meet him at the convention that''s how Emmett got suckered a maelstrom of Michael guilt.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2016 12:49 am Title: Chapter 8

I see Michael ran into someone who wasn't willing to play by his rules and let him get away with his jokes that are really insults.

I am so Happy that Ben is finally seeing past Michael's 'Boy Next Door Act' he is finally paying attention to the ugly side of Michael and not just ignoring it.

I can't wait to find out about the investments Dr. Dave is doing for Michael was Michael really stupid enough to give Dave the whole $150000? Since when is Dave a stockbroker??? Is Michael sleeping with Dave?

I love that Michael was denied access to Britin, the loft and Brian looks like wittle Mikey will have to learn to be a big boy now?

Jenny is seeing her father for the first time and she is not liking the image very much, I feel bad when she truly sees Lindsay behind the mask.

Another Brilliant Chapter:)

Author's Response:

Thanks again and Dr Dave, or at least the ghost of him has arrived if only Michael had lingered in C9.  As I said to a previous reviewer, if it was you sorry about that but the plot bunny has bounced me into exhaustion, Zee and the good, cough-cough, doctor have history.  And Jenny's realisation of Lindsay's true face comes in another story...AKA the sequel.

Reviewer: Sophie'smom Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Sep 27, 2016 7:59 pm Title: Chapter 8

I've read all that's written.
Where's the 300 thousand Michael got from Brian?
Is he seeing David? Is that where the anniversary food went?
How long before Drew kicks him out?
Ain't it a shame no one wants him. Ha!

Author's Response:

Happy to have another reader, answers in order:

$150K was gifted to Hunter by B&J for college/whatever he wants to do and the rest went to Michael for, he only has to pay that back 

No and No...but David is coming

Pretty soon

Yeah such a shame...if I had a heart it would bleed for him


Reviewer: cheryll Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Sep 27, 2016 6:41 pm Title: Chapter 8

I was waiting to hear about the box of food. I am proud that Ben fially stood up to Michael. He needs a brain transplant.

Author's Response:

The food was at the comic book store, Michael was keeping it for himself...but because Zhe was called on it covered his scrawny ass.

Ben stands up some more....

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 27, 2016 5:25 pm Title: Chapter 8

Faal and Zee re: Matt and Hunter was funny adn so typically "parental". LOL...Are they making out??? Had to chuckle at that. Parents that embarass their kids like they do, in a fun and joking manner crack me up. I feel it's the duty of parents to do that every now and again. :)

I have to admit....I looked up the smoker gun. Looks cool. May just have to put that on my Christmas list for new kitchen toys.

I literally felt sick to my stomach re: Michael twoards Hunter. the things he said, the accusations and assumptions. I can't even put into words to be honest. He then has the audacity to point blame at Hunter for not telling him. Jenny is pissed and voiced her opinion, and of course, Michael is upset because of the way she spoke to him. At elast she finally lays down the law with him. I doubt he'll take her seriously, bu I get the feeling she's going to stick to her guns on this one. FINALLY Michael is getting the shit storm he deserves. Mind you, the man-child just won't see that he's responsible for anything and will continue on as is probably. He'll just have something else to blame others on. The fact that Jenny won't talk to him, or that Ben FINALLY kicked him out...that "Justin" won't let him stay at Britin...etc.

The diner scene was BRILLIANT! omg....I chuckled through it all! 

Soooo...."things can only get better" huh? For who exactly? Us or Michael?? lol

That...was....AWESOME! Once again, my emotions were reeling.

this is just fantastic. I know...I keep saying it, but it is. I am sooooooo looking forward to the next one!




Author's Response:

Have to admit that it was hard to write and not have his lights punched out.  But he needs to suffer more.  But he makes a rev...whoops sorry gotta go...

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 27, 2016 2:37 pm Title: Chapter 8

I would call Michael a dick but I won't insult penis, Private Eyes or anyone name 'Richard' that way!!! Let that little mofo SUFFER!!! 


WRITE On  Merlot!


Author's Response:

Okay that got a wine spit!  C9 is up and a soppy C10 is coming...yes that was a double entendres 

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 27, 2016 11:30 am Title: Chapter 8

And so the bottom gets closer to Michael's unsteady feet. Serves him right for everything that he's done.

Author's Response:

I know right!  But he needs to be thoroughly tortured and somehow he brings out my inner Maquis de Sade....

Reviewer: tataniastorm Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 27, 2016 7:33 am Title: Chapter 8

Wow I am in story heven another chapter ty so much. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

Again you are welcome, so happy folks are enjoying it

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