Date: Aug 03, 2023 12:09 pm Title: CHAPTER 50: FEELS LIKE HOME
All these plans and schemes all to own and control Brian for money and power which none of them earned or deserve because of how greedy and selfish they are.
Brian isn't the prize in a cracker jack box he is a hunt being who worked for everything he owned , while they all were just too lazy and selfish to go out and work for it like he did and does.
John and Brian have a lot of years to mat up for and now they have the time to do it without anymore interference from The Lazy Idiots Club.
Thankfully Gus and the babies will be safe from Lindsay who only loves Money and Power, those kids will never be infected by her and her evil ways with this family to love and support them.
Joan has lost so much and there is no one who will care when she no longer walks the earth... well besides the bottles of alcohol at the liquor store lol
Brian, Justin have some plans to make concerning their children home and thus new family they are making with Melanie.
The Next Chapters Are Going To Be Interesting!!!
Thanks For The Update
Date: Aug 03, 2023 11:21 am Title: CHAPTER 49: THERE'S SOME HOES IN THIS HOUSE/I'LL BEAT THAT B*TCH WIT' A BAT
Deb choking out Lindsay was worthy of applause but it doesn't absolve het of the her own sins she perpetrated against those she supposedly loved especially Brat who she hurt the most .
Getting Lindsay to out herself was good that audio will be very useful at her trials, but Deb did a lot of stuff to Brian before Lindsay was even a blimp on her radar, just so Michael
could look innocent in her eyes, despite how Spoiled, Selfish, Inconsiderate, Whiny, Stupid, Ignorant, Petulant, Self-Absorbed, Thoughtless, Lazy, Soul-Sucking, Child she raised.
She raised Michael to believe if her whined loud enough and long enough he could get Whatever He Wants or Desires, then when that doesn't work he turns his tear stained face towards Mommy and she becomes an avenging Loud Harpy charging in to save her baby without getting all the facts.
While also blaming Brian for anything that goes wrong even if it is Michael's fault to begin with.
Deb can apologize until the world ends but it doesn't mean anything because she will walk it back if it means saving Michael.
Cause even though Michael had a hand in this mess along with Lindsay, Craig and Joan Deb was still trying to figure out how to get him out while also secretly looking for a way to blame Brian. (That Is Her MO After All!!!!)
Date: Jul 25, 2023 7:11 pm Title: CHAPTER 50: FEELS LIKE HOME
Gods but I've missed your writing. Thank you for coming back strong.
HUGS, MieMie! It felt amazing to write for the joy of it again. Between school and certain aspects of my career, sometimes the opportunity to just be one with the work is fleeting. But this felt so good!
Date: Jul 22, 2023 4:32 pm Title: CHAPTER 50: FEELS LIKE HOME
Well, you did yourself proud, and didn't disappoint us readers with the explanation of John's reasons for not contacting Brian. There were so many variables that John considered while wondering if he should or shouldn't contact Brian. And if I thought Joan was a pious, mean bitch before, this just escalated that up a notch. And all these years that Lindsay has been siphoning money from Joan? WOW!
I found myself mixing up this story with SOWK, during the talking about the families and marriage and inheriting. I started humming -
And my head I'd be a scratchin' / If I only had a brain.
I'd read a part... then I'd have to stop and think... it was more funny than not.
Well, Brian has a very long time to enjoy his new family. And it's good, honest people. True friends. At last, he's truly happy.
Not going to lie, this is one of those rare occasions where I was in literal tears while writing Brian's introspection. Claire's, too! In this one, Joan makes me want to take a stick to her. But whereas she may not be as punished as I would want her to be, having her 'clone' do so will be the icing on my cake!
Happy Reading and HUGS,
Date: Jul 20, 2023 7:07 pm Title: CHAPTER 49: THERE'S SOME HOES IN THIS HOUSE/I'LL BEAT THAT B*TCH WIT' A BAT
AHA! I got this one reread. It’s strange how I can remember certain aspects of these stories, and then there’s a HUGE plot, and it will be the one thing I’ve forgotten. But it’s all back now. And I had missed reading the last two chapters, so that was a big positive.
You know, Debbie and Nancy are both characters that can be written either way, and when the story is executed right, both are very believable. Case in point, Before I Let Go vs All In 2. Although you hardly ever see Claire written as a positive, with this story you’ve done a very good and believable job. And the true defining moment was when Brian really looked at her, before asking, How long have you been sober? I wanted to cheer. And when they decide to confront Joan, that united front was very positive.
Debbie… I just loved it when she went in to visit Michael and heard all the scathing remarks coming from him. Good enough. When something like that happens, I would hope that she would realize she has acted that same way when speaking to the others, especially Brian. Can she blame them for not wanting anything to do with Michael, and in turn, her? I was a little surprised she didn’t push Michael for more info when he mentioned Chris Hobbs, and admitting to giving Chris Hobbs some money for… a few things. I would have thought the first thing would’ve been the bashing.
The fact that Deb’s first thought when visiting Lindsay, she curbs her tongue, thinking: I need to light a fire under Edwards’ ass in defending my son. So yeah, still trying to help Michael. But then, Lindsay just had to let everything out. LOL... and maybe Debbie got a little carried away (as far as the law is concerned) but it’s also a very good cause – even if she has to get in a little trouble. I mentally tried adding all of Lindsay and Michael’s sins, but I think I’m falling short. One thing is for certain – I think Lindsay’s case will be worse than Michael’s. (at least he isn’t facing a statutory rape charge.) And just maybe, Lindsay will have a permanent spot with no hair. LOL…
The Little Einstein B name almost brought tears to my eyes. Oh if only Brian had known him from the start of his teen years, his life would have been so much fuller and richer. I’m surprised that John never contacted Joan about Brian. Hopefully, that gets explained. Maybe it’s because of WHO he is, and just WHO Brian is… UGH! PLEASE EXPLAIN! My brain doesn’t have a clue!
Whatever comes next, Joan, Craig, Lindsay, and Michael will deserve any and all punishment. I have to wonder if Joan gave Lindsay some pills, or something, so she could get Brian to sleep with her. And I was so proud of John saying what he did to Joan. I hope she’s spend-thrifty, because when the 10k is gone, there will be no more. Maybe when she ventures out to the liquor store, she’ll become acquainted with a nice big tree. (Lordy, that sounds awful. Shame on me!)
The names: Garrett vs Galveston – after reading it all at one time, I caught how I had mixed those names, what with both starting with GA… LOL… It really doesn’t take much sometimes. ????
I hope all is well in your corner of the world.
Date: Jan 11, 2023 6:04 am Title: CHAPTER 49: THERE'S SOME HOES IN THIS HOUSE/I'LL BEAT THAT B*TCH WIT' A BAT
Unlike many..I never liked Deb. She’s a bossy, nosy, entitled bitch who thinks everyone owes her to take care of the spoiled whiney weasel she raised as a man child. I think she should get exactly what she deserves. Please, please, please update.
Date: Jun 18, 2020 7:24 pm Title: Chapter 19: FOOL'S GOLD
I just saw you responded to this old review, and I thought I'd clarify myself... or what I meant: Back to Lindsay... her gig is up... but, by LAW... I can't see where she will have any claim to the babies... right?
What I meant by that, is that she STOLE the sperm, so how can she have any legal right to the babies even though her eggs were used?
Hmm... I just thought of something funny... I bet that would be a new one for the courts...I can hear it now: "Your Honor... they are MY babies." "How did you get pregnant, ma'am?" "I committed breaking and entering, and stole the sperm."
"LOCK THIS CRAZY WOMAN UP!" *the pounding of the gavel commenses.*
Date: May 22, 2020 8:00 am Title: CHAPTER 48: HIT THE ROAD, JACK... AND JOAN
I always love a WASP attack when it's so well written.
I'm wondering why John didn't move forward earlier? Didn't he know that Brian was his son? He could have contacted him once he was 18 years old.
Date: May 22, 2020 7:36 am Title: CHAPTER 49: THERE'S SOME HOES IN THIS HOUSE/I'LL BEAT THAT B*TCH WIT' A BAT
It seems that Deb finally realizes the crazy acts committed by Lindsay and Michael but I am not sure that she deserves to integrate into the new life of Brian and Justin.
Date: May 22, 2020 12:08 am Title: CHAPTER 49: THERE'S SOME HOES IN THIS HOUSE/I'LL BEAT THAT B*TCH WIT' A BAT
As much as Deb ticks me off I kinda want to shake her hand for attempting to choke Lindsay out and getting her to admit what she was planning by using Gus and the twins to entrap Brian, though she still isn't off the list of needing her Ass Kicked repeatedly and the line forms to the left.
Deb may be ready to let Michael pay for his actions but she her actions have always spoken louder than her words which is surprising considering her loud she is verbally.
And plus her insistence that everyone forgive and forget Michael's behavior so she can have babysitters always on hand for her whiny baby is not going to be easy to forget.
The ties that bind has already been severed to Joan and Craig a d Deb has hurt too Brian way too many times for it not to be the same with Brian.
And Brian is about to get to know the father he saw as an uncle does he really need Deb anymore?
Thanks For the Update ðŸ˜ƒ
Date: May 21, 2020 11:50 pm Title: CHAPTER 48: HIT THE ROAD, JACK... AND JOAN
Joan and Lindsay thought they were so clever but their jealousy and hatred has lead them to reap what they have sown which just means their repercussions have yet to fully come beyond this mortal plane.
Brian and Claire can now walk away knowing that Joan is truly out of their lives and they never have to deal with her games ever again, because if she tries she will regret coming up against this family.
Date: May 14, 2020 7:48 pm Title: CHAPTER 47: BARELY BREATHING
Youâ€™ve been updating your other stories...so what about this one???
I haven't forgotten about it, but I don't believe in putting out just anything simply for the sake of saying it's been updated. It wouldn't be fair to you as the audience, myself as the author, nor the story itself which deserves to be told authentically. Unfortunately, that means that I have to wait for the next chapter to reveal itself in its entirety. I will say that it's half done, but there are some more things that need to happen within it. So as I wait, I write.... and write... and write.
Please keep in mind that I'm also a Mom of 2 with special needs, a parent advocate for parents of children of special needs within my school district, a daughter who is medically trained to take care of everyone and everything (myself excluded, most of the time), and a writer in real life whose manuscripts are also in progress and demand my attention as well. So during this quarantine, I'm exceptionally busy due to conference calls and other situations that take me away from KD. Also, my blessing is also my curse in that I believe wholeheartedly in producing a quality story that you as my audience can get lost in for a little while. Believe me when I say that as impatient as you might feel for the story, is even moreso for me since I also want to know how it all unfolds. I'm not one to write simply for shock value or reviews, which are definitely appreciated and extremely validating that I'm doing my job.
Simply put: I do it because I can't NOT write. It's as natural as breathing to me, and just as vital. Without it, I would go crazy. And you all might be reading ABOUT me, instead of falling into my fictional worlds. Actually, it's been touch and go for the last few weeks LOL
I hope I made you smile a little bit there, and thank you so much for your continued support of my work and vision. It certainly doesn't go unnoticed or is taken for granted in the least!
Be well, safe and HAPPY!