Date: Apr 24, 2017 8:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
Again, what an epic chapter!
The beginning with Cynthia, Brian and Ted: “Will you be my best woman?” I blurt out. “Your best? I’m uh what?” She looks at me confused. Excellent! They have a very strong professional relationship, but it's more than that, and we can feel it here.
Cynthia with Lindsay: "I hang up and smile. Oh that felt good to do!" I bet she felt relieved after so many years spent to filter her calls!
Lindsay doesn't know how to choose the right co-conspirator; she is in for big trouble with Michael.
[Report This]Date: Apr 08, 2017 3:46 am Title: Chapter 2
Cynthia's so awesome, and I love how much Brian appreciates her. I loved her giving Lindz the verbal smackdown.
Heh, I like the lawyer - risky for him to do that, but very cool.
Seems Lindsay has joined the delusional train. I'm not sure why she thinks Michael would give her an accurate accounting of events, and the idea that Justin is jealous of them is laughable.
Good for Kiki on protecting Deb.
Glad they squashed the lawsuit against Alice. He's such a prick.
Date: Jan 12, 2017 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
I really don't know why Lindsay is helping Michael. Doesn't she realize it would look way better if she tried helping the others?
Date: Oct 18, 2016 8:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
This might be better than the first. We already know Michael is a shit and everyone hates him.Yay!
Author's Response:
Oh wow thanks! Yeah Michael is eau de excremente and a stupid one at that!
Hope you enjoy the rest.
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2016 7:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
Brian surprising Cynthia like that was funny and just what was needed before we had to deal with The Gruesome Twosome.
Michael suing Alice is so dumb and as usual has backfired cause now he has been served, Mel needs to seriously consider getting her and the kids away from Lindsay.
Lindsay honestly thinks she can take on Zee girl better wake up and face reality before Zee twists her like a pretzel, Lindsay isn't woman enough to handle Faal who wants to share the rest of his life with a Goddess, not the sluggish slut peeping in through the window.
Michael and Lindsay couldn't get out of a paper bag even if you punched holes in it for them, The Petersens really don't wanna be apart of this story cause I bet they have secrets they don't want others to know. (Of course having the Petersens humiliated in front of all their friends would just be WONDERFUL!!)
I can't wait for Lindsay to try to hit on Faal again I want to see what Zee is going to do and Jennifer's follow-up.
I just love stories when Michael and Lindsay get what's coming to them :)
Author's Response:
I love reading anti-Michael and Lindsay stories too - they were the most annoying characters ever though sometimes Mel did run them close.
Lindz as ever doesn't grasp the concept of the word no, she can't understand why Faal would brush her off...and stupidly tries again. And I do believe Zee will be saying sluggish slut at one point during this fic!
Hoepe you enjoy the rest as much
Nicole
Date: Oct 18, 2016 6:02 pm Title: Chapter 2
Loved the beginning with Cyn, Ted and Brian. knowing that there is more than likely a fair amount of angst to come, it was a wonderfully light hearted, fun and rather sweet beginning. Cyn's reaction was a riot! :) Justin asking Ben to be an usher was nice too. I can just imagine Michael's reaction to that little tidbit. Even more "betrayal" as far as he's concerned.
Oh Michael.......What a delusional character he is. I will never understand his thought processes or rather lack there of. He really doesn't have a leg to stand on legally. But dear lordy...to try to serve Alice with a suit? does he really expect to live through that? Oye! He's such a mindless fool. It's going to be the entire family against him. Not a hope in hell. Even Lindsey will have to be cautious if she hopes to keep Brian from shutting his pocketbook. As it stands her intereference is going to cause more problems than shoe could ever imagine! He seems to think that Lindsey is going to be supporting him. Fight for him. She's only in it for herself. Will be pretty humerous when he figures that out. Mind you, it will more than likely be too late by then. YAY!! hehehe.
I love how Ben and Steve are really takign things slowly. Friends first. they have Jenny's blessing, which by the way was so very sweet. I agree with Deb. I hope that Michael hasn't done too much damage. I think though, that Ben knows the difference between Steve adn Michael. Let's face it....there's a HUGE difference!!
Ok...now Deb's reslove had better NOT crumble! she needs to stand firm! I know she's his mom, but she needs to let him deal with his own shit. Thank goodness for Kiki!! I hope Michael didn't sense her weakening!
Lindsey's last parting remark..."once people know their place.: Oooooooooooooh boy! she should take a lesson in that herself. Man oh man! she doen't have a hope, but all her efforts will surely be entertaining. lol
Fantastic chapter!!!!!! I am really looking forward to more of this. It's going to be such fun!
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Elaine. Yep Kiki to the rescue, had to be done. Michael, for all his niavete exterior, is a shark when it comes to his mother and he's beginning to smell blood. But he doesn't see how Lindz is going to cast him aside in her quest of Brian's checkbook or Faal's attention - yep she tries again. And you're not the only one who is irked by her "know their place" comment, that surely comes back to bite her on her ass.
Ben and Steve are going to be a bit schmoopy it has to be said, we had Hunter and Matt in WAALAAS time for dad to get what he deserves.
Glad you are enjoying it
Nicole
Date: Oct 18, 2016 5:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
Can't wait to see what Zee has in store!
Author's Response:
And Daphne, don't forget she's yet to come...
Date: Oct 18, 2016 4:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
Lindsay is such a delusional bitch and she plays right into Michael's idiocy. 'Justin has always been jealous of you...' and 'Once people know their place, everything will be fine...' really got under my skin. But my real question is how is Michael's broke ass paying for the new place? Surely Lindsay isn't going to take from their household funds to support that grown baby! Mel better start playing hardball before she ends up broke too through no fault of her own....SMH what a MESSY Mitch and Bitch!
As for Lindsay thinking she can take on Zee...BRING IT ON WITCH! I think she will not only be jealous of Zee because of Faal but because Zee is perfectly capable of snapping her WASPy neck with or without using her hands (although I would definitely prefer Zee do it physically, LOL). Add Jennifer into the mix and I think Lindsay's takedown will be as legendary as Michael's.
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Nichelle,
I had a feeling her comments about jealousy and place would irk some folk. Michael still has some money left from the loan he got from Brian and Justin and hopes to get money from Ben in the divorce...oh what a foolish foo-foo fool!
Ah yes, the plot bunny is working on the Lindsay takedown...Zee doesn't even chip a nail!
Happy reading
Nicol
Date: Oct 18, 2016 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
Well twiddle dumb and twiddle dumber are really starting to dig a hole for themselves.
Author's Response:
Yep all the way to hell....
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2016 6:10 am Title: Chapter 2
Aaagh. Michael trying to sue Alice. With everything Brian's got that is so not going to work. He's losing everything including his daughter and still he doesn't believe any of it. Love everything about this chapter.
Author's Response:
What can I say, the man is an idiot, but it's not just Brian Alice has...Faal is gunning for him, in the nicest legitimate kinda way obviously!
Happy reading!
Nicole